Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (what you read and when), using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct basic grammar (verb tenses, articles, word order).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I usually pick up a novel or a short story when I have free time, because it helps me relax and unwind. Additionally, I read non-fiction articles when I want to learn something new.

Sugestão: Give a direct clear preference sentence, then add a specific reason using a linking word. Fix grammar and reduce informal phrases. Mention an additional brief contrast if possible.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier on my eyes. For instance, screens often make my eyes tired after a long time, whereas printed books feel more comfortable and are easier to focus on.

Sugestão: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence addressing both parts, use linking words (for example, whereas, however), and give specific examples of situations. Correct tense and phrasing for clarity.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to learn or understand something in depth, for example when studying for an exam or researching a topic. However, I skim or read less carefully when I am tired or bored, such as late at night or when the material is not interesting.

Sugestão: Always give a clear preference and justify it with a specific reason and an example. Keep it concise (one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence) and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas, especially when studying. However, I sometimes scan texts when I need to find information quickly, such as looking for a date or name in an article.

× Yes I like reading like example when I want to spend my free time then I especially took any my books and read that time.

✓ Yes, I like reading. For example, when I want to spend my free time, I usually take one of my books and read.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms and word order. 'took' is past tense but context needs present habitual, so use 'take' or better 'usually take'. 'any my books' is incorrect order and determiner usage; use 'one of my books'. Add punctuation and linking words for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for habits (I like, I usually take, I read).

× Especially prefer to read on paper because reading on screen it's damage your eyes that's why.

✓ I especially prefer to read on paper because reading on a screen damages your eyes.

The original omits the subject 'I' and uses 'it's damage' which is ungrammatical. 'It's' plus base verb is wrong; use third person singular present 'damages' to agree with the noun 'reading on a screen'. Also use the article 'a screen' and remove 'that's why' which is redundant. Suggestion: include clear subject and correct verb conjugation ('damages').

× When I want to gather more knowledge and more information about things then I read very carefully and when I feel sleep or felt boring then I will not read carefully.

✓ When I want to gather more knowledge and information about things, I read very carefully, and when I feel sleepy or bored, I do not read carefully.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect adjective forms. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I read'. Use correct adjectives 'sleepy' and 'bored' instead of 'feel sleep' or 'felt boring'. Replace future 'will not' with simple present 'do not' for habitual behavior. Also improve punctuation and remove redundant 'more'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and use correct adjective forms.