Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and precise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples of what you read and why. Use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I love reading. I usually read historical novels and popular science in my free time because they help me relax and also expand my knowledge. For example, I recently read a book about World War II that improved my understanding of modern history.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear preference and give specific, relevant reasons. Avoid unrelated or incorrect phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier to make notes and I find paper less tiring on my eyes. Also, I like the tactile feeling of turning pages, so I retain information better when I read a physical book.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence that directly answers both parts; correct grammar and provide specific examples of situations requiring careful reading versus skimming. Use linking words like "for example" and "whereas" or "on the other hand."

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the information is important or legal, for example when I study for an exam or sign a contract because I must understand every detail. On the other hand, when I'm browsing news or social media I usually skim headlines and only read in-depth if something interests me.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give concise reasons with one supporting example. Correct grammar and use linking words such as "because" and "for example." Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the information and remember important points. For example, when I study for exams I read textbooks carefully and take notes so I can recall the facts later.

× Definitely yes.

✓ Definitely.

Answer 'Definitely yes' is not grammatically wrong but unnatural; use 'Definitely.' as a concise response. This is stylistic rather than strictly grammatical, but improves naturalness.

× I'm a big fan of reading.

✓ I'm a big fan of reading.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. Included to show no applicable error from the provided list.

× I usually read kind of book in my read time.

✓ I usually read kinds of books in my free time.

Original uses 'kind of book' (singular) incorrectly with 'usually' and 'read time' is incorrect. 'Kinds of books' or 'a kind of book' should match number; here 'kinds of books' fits general habitual action. 'read time' should be 'free time'. Suggestion: use plural for general habits and use correct collocation 'free time'.

× I think it's a a good way to relax and it's have me rock the knowledge.

✓ I think it's a good way to relax and it has helped me gain knowledge.

Several errors: double 'a a' is typo; 'it's have me' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong verb forms. Use present perfect 'has helped' to express a result up to now and 'gain knowledge' is correct collocation. This fixes agreement and verb form.

× I refer reading on paper a separation go to the fact that it's easy to write down a knock something I need and I think it's a very useful and convenient when we can use paper to wrap food.

✓ I prefer reading on paper for several reasons: it's easy to write down notes when I need them, and I think paper is very useful and convenient, for example to wrap food.

Many errors: 'refer' should be 'prefer' (wrong verb), 'a separation go to the fact' is unintelligible and should be 'for several reasons', 'write down a knock something' should be 'write down notes', pronoun and noun choices were incorrect. Rewrote to correct verbs, prepositions and pronouns and to make clear examples. This fits native collocations.

× Well, I re carefully when information is important are official, for example when I study for the 7th or size of contract because I must understand every detail.

✓ Well, I read carefully when information is important or official, for example when I study a contract, because I must understand every detail.

Original contains 're' (typo for 'read'), 'are official' wrong verb, 'the 7th or size of contract' is nonsense. Use simple present 'read' for habitual action. Remove incorrect phrases and use 'a contract'. Keep 'must' to show necessity.

× On the other hand, when I'm just browsing live or rolling social media, I usually skim the state weekly.

✓ On the other hand, when I'm just browsing or scrolling social media, I usually skim the content quickly.

Errors: 'browsing live' unclear, 'rolling' should be 'scrolling', 'skim the state weekly' is incorrect collocation. Use 'skim the content quickly' to express light reading of social media. Keeps present progressive for current habitual actions.

× Well, I want to read details because I think it is necessary to understand information and remember the important things.

✓ Well, I want to read in detail because I think it is necessary to understand information and remember important things.

Use 'read in detail' (fixed phrase) instead of 'read details.' 'the important things' can be 'important things' when speaking generally. Tense and intent remain present.

× So if we reach detail, I can remember easily.

✓ So if I read in detail, I can remember more easily.

'reach detail' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'read in detail.' Also add comparative adverb 'more easily' for clarity. Change subject 'we' to 'I' to match speaker perspective.