Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và độ mạch lạc: hãy mở đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh tiếng "uh" và lỗi ngữ pháp như "I used to study slides" (không rõ ý) hoặc thiếu mạo từ. Nên dùng các liên từ đơn giản để nối ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, my sister once gave me a novel and it encouraged me to read more, which broadened my knowledge about different cultures.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu “I prefer...” rồi giải thích nguyên nhân với cấu trúc chính xác (e.g., “because screens strain my eyes and make it hard to concentrate”). Tránh lặp từ và âm "uh"; dùng một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes and make it difficult to concentrate. On paper I can focus longer and find it easier to remember what I read.

Sugestão: Cần làm rõ câu trả lời và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp: trả lời trực tiếp (When I need to read carefully...) rồi giải thích hoàn chỉnh với ví dụ. Tránh các câu bị lẫn lộn như 'I'm never reached don't carefully'. Dùng thì và cấu trúc đúng để diễn đạt mục đích đọc và tình huống cần đọc kỹ.

Exemplo: I usually read carefully when I study or when the material is complex, for example articles for my exams. I don’t read carefully when I’m skimming news headlines or short social media posts.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement) và dùng từ chính xác: "I prefer detailed reading". Giải thích ngắn gọn với lí do cụ thể và ví dụ. Tránh lỗi từ như "a snow hold"; nên nói "to fully understand" hoặc "to remember the story".

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the content and remember important points. For instance, when I read a novel slowly I can follow the plot and remember characters better.

× Yes, I enjoy reading, I used to study slides but my sister encouraged me by giving me a book to read and since then reading has helped me uh, refresh me in the feeling and enrich my knowledge.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading. I used to study slides, but my sister encouraged me by giving me a book to read, and since then reading has helped me refresh my feelings and enrich my knowledge.

'Refresh me in the feeling' is unnatural and grammatically incorrect in English. Use 'refresh my feelings' or 'refresh me' and keep past tense consistency. Also, separate independent clauses with periods or commas and conjunctions. Suggestion: split into clearer clauses and use correct noun 'feelings'.

× Actually, I prefer to read on a paper rather than on the screen. Uh, because, uh, on the screen it's make me my, it's make my eye very strange and I can concentrate on, on the screen, but, uh, on the paper I can con concentrate more and, and my eye don't change.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen. On a screen it makes my eyes feel strange and I cannot concentrate, but on paper I can concentrate more and my eyes do not get tired.

Use of articles: 'on a paper' and 'on the screen' are incorrect in this context; use 'on paper' and 'on a screen'. Subject-verb agreement and verb forms needed fixing: 'it's make' -> 'it makes'; 'my eye don't change' -> 'my eyes do not get tired'. Also plural 'eyes' is more natural. Suggestion: use standard phrases 'on paper' and 'on a screen', ensure subject-verb agreement and correct negative forms.

× Actually, I'm never reached don't carefully because when I reach, I can. I want to enrich my knowledge and I want to acquire information about this book. So I don't want read away, don't carefully. It's make and and read don't carefully.

✓ Actually, I never read carelessly because when I read, I want to enrich my knowledge and acquire information from the book. So I do not want to read hurriedly or carelessly.

The original has unclear and incorrect verb forms ('reached', 'don't carefully', 'read away') and poor sentence structure. Use consistent verb 'read' and correct adverb placement: 'read carelessly' or 'read hurriedly'. Also remove extra fillers and repeated words. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and place adverbs after the verb.

× Well, I prefers detailing reading because umm I think this is a great way to acquire information and and acquire news knowledge. Actually I think this way can help me a snow hold the story of the book.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because I think this is a great way to acquire information and new knowledge. Actually, I think this method can help me better remember the story of the book.

'I prefers' is incorrect; use 'I prefer' (subject-verb agreement for first person). 'Detailing reading' should be 'detailed reading'. 'news knowledge' is incorrect; use 'new knowledge'. 'a snow hold' is unintelligible; likely 'better remember' is intended. Suggestion: correct verb form for subject-verb agreement, use appropriate adjective 'detailed', and choose correct collocations like 'new knowledge' and 'remember the story'.