Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答总体表达清楚，内容相关，但有语法和表达冗余问题。建议简化句子结构，注意时态与词形（如“maintained till present”应改为“have maintained until now”或“have kept”），减少重复（“really enjoy”与“it's a really good way”重复“really”）。可以用一至两句主题句后用一两句具体支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I have enjoyed reading since I was a child because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, I like non-fiction books that teach me about history and science, which broaden my knowledge.

Sugestão: 答案有明确立场并给出理由和例子，但存在语法和用词错误（如“prefer to read my screen”应为“prefer reading on a screen”；“much popular”应为“more popular”；“when we are travel”应为“when we travel”）。建议使用连接词使逻辑更连贯，精简重复表达。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because e-books are more convenient. For instance, when I travel, I can carry many books on my tablet instead of physical copies, which saves space and weight.

Sugestão: 回答内容直接但不够简洁，存在语法和拼写错误（如“so”多余、“informations”应为“information”）。句子应分为主题句和支持句，并使用连接词区分正式与休闲阅读时间。建议给出更具体细节（例如考试复习时如何做笔记）。

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I study for exams because I must understand concepts and remember facts. For example, before tests I highlight important points and summarize each chapter, but in my free time I read novels casually without taking notes.

Sugestão: 观点明确并给出原因，但语法和表达不自然（如“can better made us be moved”应为“can move us more”或“helps us empathize”；“try on the shoes”应为“put ourselves in the characters' shoes”）。建议使用更自然的短句并加入连接词，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me empathize with the characters and understand their emotions. For example, when I read a novel slowly, I notice subtle details in language and behavior that reveal the author's moral message.

× Yes I do, I really enjoy reading since I was little.

✓ Yes I do. I have really enjoyed reading since I was little.

句中使用“since”表示从过去某一时间点持续到现在，应使用现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）。原句用一般现在时“really enjoy”与“since”时间状语不匹配。建议使用“I have really enjoyed...”来表示从小时候到现在一直持续的喜好。

× Reading is a hobby I maintained till present is because it's a really good way for me to relax and learn more knowledge through different books and essays.

✓ The reason I have maintained reading as a hobby until now is that it's a really good way for me to relax and to learn more through different books and essays.

原句结构混乱，包含两个谓语（"Reading is..." 和 "is because..."）且时态与词序不当。应将句子重组为主句加原因从句；用现在完成时“have maintained”表示持续到现在，且用连词“is that”引导理由。建议把“learn more knowledge”改为“learn more”或“learn more about ...”。

× To be honest, I prefer to read my screen and nowadays e-books are much popular than in the past.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on my screen, and nowadays e-books are much more popular than in the past.

动词“read”通常与介词“on”连用表示在屏幕上阅读，应为“read on my screen”。另外，比较级需要“more popular”而非“much popular”；在“much more popular”中“much”修饰“more”。建议注意介词搭配并使用正确的比较级结构。

× For example, when we are travel to another place, I think the book online can be more portable and it's more convenient for us.

✓ For example, when we travel to another place, I think online books are more portable and they're more convenient for us.

“are travel”包含多余的助动词，应使用一般现在时“when we travel”。“the book online”词序不当且冠词不必要，通常说“online books”。此外，复数主语应用复数谓语“are/they're”。建议注意主谓一致、词序和介词/冠词使用。

× Because I'm a high school student, so reading the textbooks before test is really important for me and at that time I need to read all the informations carefully and in my free time I can read my books like whatever I want.

✓ Because I'm a high school student, reading the textbooks before a test is really important for me, and at that time I need to read all the information carefully. In my free time I can read whatever books I want.

句子开头使用“Because... so...”出现冗余，英语中不同时使用两者；应用其中一种连接方式。名词“information”是不可数，不能复数化为“informations”。“before test”需加不定冠词“a test”。最后部分“read my books like whatever I want”不自然，改为“read whatever books I want”。建议删除重复连词，使用不可数名词信息形式，并调整冠词和词序。

× I really prefer detailed reading when we are reading a book.

✓ I really prefer detailed reading when we read a book.

“when we are reading”可以用一般现在时“when we read”表习惯动作，两者都可但更简洁自然；该问题属动词形式和时态选择，建议在描述习惯时使用一般现在时。

× Detailed reading can better made us be moved and try on the shoes of the characters so we can better understand their feelings and what emotions and what morals the narrator wanted to tell us.

✓ Detailed reading can better move us and help us put ourselves in the characters' shoes, so we can better understand their feelings, emotions, and the morals the narrator wants to convey.

原句语法与词序混乱：“can better made us be moved”错误地使用了过去式“made”且被动结构冗长，应使用主动不带多余被动，如“move us”。“try on the shoes of the characters”是字面翻译，应为习惯表达“put ourselves in the characters' shoes”。时态也需一致，若谈普遍情况用一般现在时“wants to convey”。建议使用简洁的主动结构，正确短语并保持时态一致。