Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (use present simple), avoid redundancy, and give a specific reason and brief example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (because, so).

Exemplo: I don't read many books, but I often read newspapers because they give me up-to-date information. For example, I read the morning paper to check news and local events before I go to work.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and vocabulary: say 'prefer reading on paper' and explain why with clear linking words. Keep sentences short and specific (e.g., better concentration, less eye strain).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and avoid screen glare. For instance, I find it easier to focus on a textbook when I hold a printed copy.

Sugestão: Answer both parts directly with clear examples. Use correct grammar (present simple) and linking words (for, because). Be specific about what requires careful reading and what doesn't.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I receive messages from my parents or teachers because they often include important details like test dates or meeting times. I don't read carefully when I check casual social media posts because they are not usually important.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference and reason: choose either scanning or detailed reading, then explain with a specific example. Use correct verbs and linking words (because, so) and avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because I usually look for specific facts quickly on my phone, such as a train time or headline. If I need to understand something fully, like a report, I switch to detailed reading.

× I don't like reading the books, but I like reading the newspaper because they gave me the current information and the tells me bene car events, so I often read the newspaper in the morning.

✓ I don't like reading books, but I like reading the newspaper because it gives me current information and tells me about nearby events, so I often read the newspaper in the morning.

Pronoun and number errors: 'the books' is unnecessary general plural so use 'books' (article error/usage). 'They gave me' uses plural pronoun for singular 'newspaper' and wrong tense; use 'it gives me' (present tense) to match habitual action. 'the tells me bene car events' is garbled: replace with 'tells me about nearby events'. Also remove extra articles and correct verb agreement and tense to present simple for habitual actions.

× I tend to prefer dating on the paper because reading text takes like textbook or a newspaper is work is I can more concentrate and then on focus on.

✓ I tend to prefer reading on paper because reading texts like textbooks or newspapers requires effort, and I can concentrate and focus better.

Preposition and word choice errors: use 'reading on paper' not 'dating on the paper'. 'text takes like textbook or a newspaper is work' is incorrect; change to 'reading texts like textbooks or newspapers requires effort'. 'I can more concentrate and then on focus on' has incorrect adverb placement and extra prepositions; use 'I can concentrate and focus better' to be natural and grammatically correct.

× I need to read carefully for carry the message from my parents or teacher because they send often send me important information such as UH test day and UH.

✓ I need to read carefully to understand messages from my parents or teachers because they often send me important information such as test dates.

Structure and infinitive use: 'for carry the message' is incorrect; use 'to understand messages' or 'to carry out messages'. 'parents or teacher' needs plural agreement: 'parents or teachers'. 'they send often send me' has duplication and wrong word order; use 'they often send me'. 'such as UH test day and UH' is unclear; interpret as 'test dates'. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× I like scanning the detail because uh, using the smartphone or computers can scans the details and they remained put in their electronic.

✓ I like scanning for details because smartphones or computers can scan details and keep them stored electronically.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'scanning the detail' should be 'scanning for details' (plural and preposition). 'using the smartphone or computers can scans' mixes gerund and subject; better: 'smartphones or computers can scan'. Remove unnecessary 'using' at start. 'they remained put in their electronic' is ungrammatical; use 'keep them stored electronically' to express retention in electronic form. Use consistent plural nouns and correct verb agreement.