Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid redundant phrasing and grammatical errors (e.g., "it helps to make my mood better"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It relaxes me and improves my mood, especially when I read fiction after a stressful day. For example, a few chapters of a novel help me unwind and sleep better.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference first, then explain with specific reasons and a brief contrast. Fix grammar ("prefer to read on paper", "eye strain"). Don’t repeat words and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information. However, when I have long tasks or experience eye strain, I switch to a screen for convenience and to use features like search and adjustable text size.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence answering both parts, then give specific examples of situations requiring careful reading and when skimming is acceptable. Avoid filler words like "Skip" and expand with one or two supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I’m doing assignments or studying for exams because accuracy matters. In contrast, I skim news articles or casual blog posts when I just want a quick overview.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons and an example. Correct tense and phrasing ("helps me understand things more easily"), and avoid repetition. Use one linking word to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the material thoroughly and complete tasks correctly. For instance, when I read study materials in detail, I make fewer mistakes on assignments.

× Yes, definitely I like reading because whenever I read any book my mood, it helps to make my mood better.

✓ Yes, I definitely like reading because whenever I read a book it helps to improve my mood.

Adverb 'definitely' should come after subject 'I' for natural word order. 'Any book' is awkward; use 'a book'. The clause 'my mood, it helps to make my mood better' is redundant and ungrammatical; combine into 'it helps to improve my mood.' Use 'improve' instead of 'make ... better' for concision.

× I would like to prefer read on a paper because it is easy to understand for me.

✓ I would prefer to read on paper because it is easier for me to understand.

'Prefer' is followed by 'to' + verb, so 'prefer to read' is required. 'A paper' is incorrect when speaking about reading from paper generally; use 'on paper.' Use comparative 'easier' and place 'for me' after the adjective: 'easier for me to understand.'

× But sometimes I have some task about about my eyes.

✓ But sometimes I have tasks that strain my eyes.

The original has duplicated 'about about' and unclear structure. 'Task about my eyes' is unidiomatic. Use 'tasks that strain my eyes' to clearly express that reading sometimes causes eye strain. Keep plural 'tasks' if referring to occasional tasks.

× That time I prefer on this screen.

✓ At those times I prefer using a screen.

'That time' is awkward; use 'at those times' for repeated occasions. 'Prefer on this screen' is ungrammatical — 'prefer using a screen' or 'prefer to use a screen' is correct. Use 'a screen' rather than 'this screen' unless referencing a specific screen.

× I mostly need to read carefully whenever I have a task. Skip. Now.

✓ I usually need to read carefully when I have a task; I skip details when I do not.

'Mostly need' is awkward; 'usually need' is more natural. The original ends with 'Skip. Now.' which is unclear. I expanded to show contrast: careful reading for tasks, skipping when not required. Ensure sentences are complete and coherent.

× I mostly prefer a detailed reading because it helped me to understand easy and also it helped me to to complete my task.

✓ I generally prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand easily and helps me complete my tasks.

'Mostly prefer a detailed reading' is wordy; 'generally prefer detailed reading' is natural. Use present tense 'helps' to match habitual preference. 'Understand easy' is incorrect; use adverb 'easily.' Remove duplicate 'to.' Use plural 'tasks' for generality.