Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar, and give a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and name authors/titles clearly.

Exemplo: Yes — I enjoy reading, especially fiction. For example, I often read horror novels such as "31st Night" by [author's name], and I also like other suspense stories because they build tension and keep me engaged.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give a concise reason and a specific situation when you use the alternative. Use correct tense and smoother linking words (however, although, so).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I remember information better. However, when I am traveling or cannot carry books, I read on my phone or tablet for convenience.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and distinguish two situations with precise wording and examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases; use linking words (for example, whereas, however).

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I must understand complex information, for example when studying for an exam or reading technical instructions. On the other hand, I can skim or relax when I read casual messages or light articles that do not require deep understanding.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons and a short example. Avoid repetition and improve fluency by using linking words (because, for instance, therefore).

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand every idea and word, which is useful for academic texts. For instance, when I study for a test I read chapters carefully to make sure I grasp all the concepts.

× I like to read the story books and especially there are some Horror Story books which I like.

✓ I like to read storybooks and especially some horror stories which I like.

The student used 'the story books' unnecessarily and mixed singular/plural forms and articles. 'Storybooks' as one word or 'story books' is acceptable, but 'the' is not needed. 'Horror Story books' should be plural and lowercased as 'horror stories' or 'horror storybooks'. Suggestion: use 'storybooks' or 'stories' without 'the' when speaking generally.

× And I would like to mention the name of some hero book I really like is uh, 31st night, uh, which is written by my nomad and another one is my very favorite.

✓ And I would like to mention the name of a horror book I really like: '31st Night', which is written by my nomad, and another one is my very favorite.

The student used 'hero book' instead of 'horror book' (word choice) and the sentence structure is incorrect. Also 'the name of some' is wrong; use 'the name of a' for one book. The sentence is long and confused; break it up and use correct noun 'horror' and article 'a'. Suggestion: choose precise adjectives and simplify the sentence into clear parts.

× I prefer to read on paper, but sometimes when I was in trouble, that time it is actually difficult to carry the books.

✓ I prefer to read on paper, but sometimes when I am in trouble it is actually difficult to carry the books.

Mixing past tense 'was' with present habitual context is incorrect. The question asks about general preference, so present simple 'am' should be used. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with habitual statements.

× So for that reason that time I read on my screen.

✓ So for that reason I read on my screen then.

Phrase 'that time' is awkward in present habitual context; better to use 'then' or restructure. The tense 'read' is acceptable as present habitual but word order needed. Suggestion: use 'then' or 'in those situations' for clarity.

× When I am in the middle of something and I I need to understand that properly, that time I need to read carefully.

✓ When I am in the middle of something and need to understand it properly, I need to read carefully.

The sentence has repetition ('I I') and awkward phrase 'that time'. Also 'understand that' is vague; use 'understand it'. Suggestion: remove repeated words and streamline clauses: 'When I am in the middle of something and need to understand it properly, I read carefully.'

× Otherwise whenever I'm in interaction or the conclusion that time I can really relax.

✓ Otherwise, whenever I'm in a conversation or at the conclusion, I can really relax.

'In interaction' is incorrect collocation; use 'in a conversation' or 'interacting'. 'The conclusion' needs a preposition 'at' and 'that time' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use natural phrases like 'in a conversation' and 'at the end' or 'at the conclusion'.

× I prefer detailed reading because if I read in detail then I can understand each and every every line and every word which is is beneficial for me for academic or any storybook.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because if I read in detail I can understand every line and every word, which is beneficial for me for academic purposes or any storybook.

Redundancies ('every and every', duplicate 'is is') and wrong phrase 'for academic' need 'for academic purposes'. The gerund 'detailed reading' is fine. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use 'every line', and add 'purposes' after 'academic'.

× which is written by my nomad

✓ which is written by my nomad

This phrase likely contains a vocabulary error ('my nomad' seems incorrect), but grammar list focuses on singular/plural: 'my nomad' is singular and matched 'is written' correctly. No grammatical change suggested here under given list; consider replacing 'my nomad' with the author's name. Suggestion: use the author's correct name or 'a novelist' instead of 'my nomad'.