Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, and give a specific example of what you read and why. Use 2–4 short sentences and include a linking phrase if you add detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I mainly read novels and articles because they help me relax and learn new ideas. For example, I recently finished a historical novel that gave me a better sense of that period. Overall, reading makes me feel joyful and inspired.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clarify your meaning: state your preference, give a reason, and correct unclear phrase "group reading." Use linking words like "because" and give one specific example of when you use screens.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and I can carry many books on my tablet. For instance, I often read news articles and e-books on my phone during my commute. However, I sometimes choose paper for academic texts because it is easier to annotate.

Sugestão: Respond directly to the two parts: say when you need to read carefully and when casual reading is fine. Use clear time expressions and a reason for each choice. Keep sentences concise and use a linking word like "but" or "while."

Exemplo: I need to read carefully in the morning when I study for exams or prepare reports because my concentration is best then. In contrast, I do light or casual reading in the evening, such as browsing social media or fiction, when I want to relax.

Sugestão: Be direct and precise: name the type of reading you prefer, explain why with a specific reason or example, and use correct grammar and linking words like "because" or "so." Limit to a few clear sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas and remember important information. For example, when I study for exams I read chapters slowly and take notes, which improves my retention.

× Yeah, I like it and I do.

✓ Yes, I like it.

The original uses redundant phrases: 'Yeah, I like it and I do.' The pronoun usage is awkward and 'and I do' is unnecessary. Use a single clear affirmative response 'Yes, I like it.' to be natural and grammatically correct.

× When I'm reading, I'm what I'm doing.

✓ When I'm reading, I focus on what I'm doing.

The original sentence lacks a clear verb phrase and contains incorrect structure 'I'm what I'm doing.' The correction provides a clear subject-verb-object structure. Use 'focus on' to express paying attention to the activity.

× I feel joyful.

✓ I feel joyful.

The sentence is grammatically correct but slightly formal. No change needed; you could also say 'I feel happy' for a more natural spoken tone.

× So I'm so passionate to read, to reading books and journalists.

✓ So I'm very passionate about reading books and magazines.

Errors: wrong preposition 'to' after 'passionate,' incorrect verb form 'to reading,' and wrong noun 'journalists' instead of 'magazines' or 'newspapers.' Use 'passionate about' + gerund, and use the correct noun for printed materials.

× Yeah, that's my favorite.

✓ Yeah, that's my favorite.

This sentence is acceptable as is; no singular/plural error. It properly uses singular 'favorite' to refer to reading.

× Mostly I like it on screen on the screen so I prefer it's group reading.

✓ Mostly I like reading on a screen, so I prefer group reading.

Problems: redundant 'on screen on the screen,' incorrect use of 'it's' (contraction) and awkward phrase 'group reading.' The correction removes redundancy and uses correct noun phrase 'group reading.' If meaning 'reading in groups' use 'reading in groups.'

× Mostly I like to read in, uh, at the first day of day or at the morning time, so I don't like at the evening and afternoon, yeah.

✓ Mostly I like to read at the beginning of the day or in the morning, so I don't like reading in the afternoon or evening.

Issues: mixing prepositions 'in' and 'at' incorrectly, awkward phrase 'first day of day,' and wrong placement of 'at' before 'the evening and afternoon.' Use 'at the beginning of the day,' 'in the morning,' and 'in the afternoon/evening.' Also add 'reading' to make verbs parallel.

× Mostly I like detail query because of when you doing a detailed reading you understand more and more.

✓ Mostly I like detailed reading because when you do a detailed reading you understand more.

Problems: 'detail query' is incorrect noun choice; 'because of when you doing' mixes 'because of' with a clause and lacks auxiliary verb. Use 'detailed reading' (adjective + gerund) and 'when you do' (simple present) for habitual action. Remove redundancy 'more and more' and use 'you understand more.'