Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha düzenli ve doğrudan olmalı. Konu cümlesi net olmalı (örneğin hangi tür kitapları sevdiğinizi açıkça belirtin). Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimelerinden (umm, and but) kaçının. Ek bilgi verirken kısa açıklamalar kullanın (neden sevdiginizi veya bir örnek kitap türünü belirtin). Ayrıca 5 cümleyi geçmemeye ve akıcı bağlaçlar (because, for example) kullanmaya dikkat edin.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially books about everyday life and personal development. For example, I like memoirs and self-help books because they offer practical advice and relatable stories. I read them to learn new habits and understand different perspectives.

Sugestão: Cümle yapınızı sadeleştirin ve tekrarları kaldırın. Sebep belirtirken daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, because, so). 'Screen gives me a headache' gibi ifadeyi net ve kısa yazın. Ayrıca gramer ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin (on paper / on a screen, not 'reading on the paper').

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the tactile feel of pages and screens often strain my eyes. For these reasons, I usually buy physical books for long reading sessions.

Sugestão: Cevap birbiriyle çelişen ve karışık. Önce net bir konu cümlesi kurun (örneğin 'I need to read carefully in the evenings'). Nedenini açıkça belirtin ve zıt durumu bağlaçlarla netleştirin (however, while). Gramer (tense ve kelime seçimleri) ve kelime hatalarını düzeltin (breathe → read, didn't have to → don't need to).

Exemplo: I usually need to read carefully in the evening because I study slowly before going to bed and want to understand the material. In the mornings, however, I tend to skim text because I am in a hurry.

Sugestão: Cevap tekrarlı ve belirsiz. Başlangıçta tercihlerinizi açıkça ifade edin ve ardından nedenlerini kısa ve net destekleyici cümlelerle verin. 'Sometimes I wait to just reading' gibi anlamsız ifadelerden kaçının; yerine 'to get the main idea' gibi spesifik sebepler kullanın. Bağlaçlarla geçiş yapın (but, because).

Exemplo: I switch between scanning and detailed reading depending on my goal. For instance, I scan articles to get the main idea quickly, but I read textbooks in detail when I need to learn and remember important information.

× Of course, I like all the kinds of reading and but I like most, umm, the daily life books and which.

✓ Of course, I like all kinds of reading, but I like daily life books the most.

The sentence uses unnecessary articles and extra words: 'all the kinds of' should be 'all kinds of' and 'the daily life books and which' is ungrammatical. Use 'the most' after the noun phrase to indicate preference. Suggestion: remove redundant 'the' and 'which', reorder to 'I like daily life books the most.'

× Of course reading on the paper because I I want to touch the paper when I read it and umm, the screen is and give me a headache. So I'm writing book should be on the paper.

✓ Of course I prefer reading on paper because I want to touch it when I read, and the screen gives me a headache. So my books should be on paper.

Errors include incorrect article use: 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'; 'the screen is and give me a headache' has tense and article issues — use 'the screen gives me a headache'. 'I'm writing book' is incorrect; use 'my books' or 'the books I write'. Suggestion: use 'on paper', remove redundant 'the', correct verb agreement 'gives', and use possessive 'my books' or 'books' as appropriate.

× And then at the time is light and like near after dinner I need to read carefully because umm, slowly I have to go sleep so I need to be careful. But in the mornings I didn't have to umm, breathe carefully.

✓ In the evening, after dinner, I need to read carefully because I will go to sleep soon, so I have to take care. But in the mornings I don't have to read carefully.

Tense and time expression errors: 'at the time is light and like near after dinner' is awkward; use 'in the evening, after dinner'. 'Slowly I have to go sleep' should be future intention 'I will go to sleep' or 'I'm going to sleep'. 'I didn't have to ... breathe carefully' is wrong tense and word choice; use present 'I don't have to read carefully' or 'I don't need to read carefully in the mornings.' Suggestion: use clear time expressions and consistent present/future tense for routines and intentions.

× And sometimes I prefer scanning, but sometimes I prefer detailed reading because umm, sometimes I wait to just reading, but sometimes I read and learn or something.

✓ Sometimes I prefer scanning, and sometimes I prefer detailed reading because sometimes I just skim, but other times I read to learn something.

Incorrect verb form 'wait to just reading' and awkward phrasing. Use 'skim' for quick reading, and 'read to learn' for purpose. 'Read and learn or something' is vague; 'read to learn something' is clearer. Suggestion: use base verb forms after auxiliaries ('to just read') or use gerund correctly ('just reading' as a noun), and choose precise verbs like 'skim' or 'read to learn.'