Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและถูกไวยากรณ์มากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวเรื่องสั้นๆ ตามด้วยเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน ใช้โครงสร้างที่สั้นไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ ตัวอย่างจุดที่ต้องแก้: ‘officially biologist’ → ‘a professional biologist’, และปรับ tense/รูปวลี เช่น ‘since I learned bachelor degree’ → ‘since I was an undergraduate’.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I'm a professional biologist, so I read many research articles for my work. I have been reading scientific papers since I was an undergraduate, which helps me keep up to date with new discoveries.

Sugestão: แก้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่สับสน ให้ตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวเรื่อง จากนั้นอธิบายเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words เช่น 'however', 'because' และให้ตัวอย่างชัดเจน ใช้คำที่ถูกต้องเช่น 'depending on the text', 'take notes', 'research papers', 'read comics'. จำกัดประโยคไม่เกิน 4 ประโยค.

Exemplo: It depends on the text. For work-related documents and research papers I prefer paper because it's easier to take notes. However, I usually read comics and novels on a screen because it's more convenient to carry them.

Sugestão: ตอบให้เป็นระบบ: ประโยคหัวเรื่องชัดเจนแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words เช่น 'because' และ 'then'. แก้รูปวลีให้ถูก: 'a bit slow to understand' → 'slow to understand details' และ 'skimming' → 'skim'. เพิ่มความเฉพาะเจาะจงเกี่ยวกับสถานการณ์ตัวอย่างจะช่วยคะแนน.

Exemplo: I read carefully when the material is important because I need to understand details. I usually skim first to get the main idea, and then read again more slowly to make sure I haven't missed any important points.

Sugestão: โครงสร้างดี มีประโยคหัวเรื่องและสนับสนุน แต่ปรับไวยากรณ์เล็กน้อย: 'what the book is' → 'what the book is about', 'main topic are' → 'main topics are', 'research article' → 'research articles'. ใช้ linking words 'then'/'after that' ให้ลื่นไหล และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4 ประโยค.

Exemplo: I usually scan first to get a general idea of what a book is about and what the main topics are. I do the same with research articles; after scanning, I go back and read in detail if I need to understand something more deeply.

× Yes of course, because my job as officially biologist I have to read a lot of research articles since I learned bachelor degree.

✓ Yes, of course. Because my job is officially a biologist, I have to read a lot of research articles since I earned my bachelor's degree.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing commas, incorrect article use before 'biologist' (should be 'a biologist'), missing verb 'is' (sentence structure/subject-verb agreement), wrong verb for completing education ('learned' should be 'earned' or 'received'), and missing possessive for 'bachelor's degree'. Suggestion: add punctuation to separate clauses, include the verb 'is', use the indefinite article 'a', and use 'earned my bachelor's degree' for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 22 Grammar problem type ID: 26 Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I use both depend on depends on the tax.

✓ I use both depending on the task.

Errors: redundant words 'depend on depends on' and wrong noun 'tax' should be 'task'; verb form should be the -ing form 'depending' to follow 'use both'. Suggestion: use 'depending on the task' for correct form and meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 8 Grammar problem type ID: 11 Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I prefer to take note only search paper or protocol of my work.

✓ I prefer to take notes only on research papers or protocols for my work.

Errors: 'note' should be plural 'notes'; missing preposition 'on' after 'take notes'; 'search paper' should be 'research papers' and needs plural to match general reference; 'protocol' should be plural 'protocols' or 'a protocol' depending on meaning; 'of my work' better as 'for my work'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and correct prepositions: 'take notes on research papers or protocols for my work.' Grammar problem type ID: 1 Grammar problem type ID: 11 Grammar problem type ID: 22

× But I prefer lead a cartoon and novels on a screen.

✓ But I prefer reading cartoons and novels on a screen.

Errors: missing gerund 'reading' after 'prefer' when expressing general preference; 'lead' is incorrect word choice; 'cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons' to match 'novels' or could be 'comic books'. Suggestion: use 'prefer reading' + plural nouns: 'prefer reading cartoons and novels on a screen.' Grammar problem type ID: 8

× It's too convenient to carry.

✓ They're very convenient to carry.

Context refers to 'cartoons and novels' (plural), so the pronoun should be plural 'they're' rather than 'it's'. Also 'very' is more natural than 'too' unless meaning excessive. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and use 'very convenient to carry.' Grammar problem type ID: 12 Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Oh, I always read carefully when something is important because I am a bit slow to understand things.

✓ Oh, I always read carefully when something is important because I am a bit slow to understand things.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. Minor stylistic change: 'a bit slow to understand things' is idiomatic but could be 'a bit slow at understanding things.' No correction necessary based on given problem types. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I prefer to skimming first and then read carefully again to make sure I haven't missed anything.

✓ I prefer to skim first and then read carefully again to make sure I haven't missed anything.

After 'prefer to' the base form 'skim' should be used, not the -ing form 'skimming'. The rest of the sentence is correct. Suggestion: use 'prefer to skim' or 'prefer skimming' consistently. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer scanning first because I want to get a general idea of what the book is and what the main topic are.

✓ I prefer scanning first because I want to get a general idea of what the book is about and what the main topics are.

Missing preposition 'about' after 'what the book is'; subject-verb agreement: 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'are'. Suggestion: add 'about' and use plural 'topics'. Grammar problem type ID: 11 Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I do the same when I read research article and then I go back for a detailed reading if I need to understand something more deeply.

✓ I do the same when I read research articles, and then I go back for a detailed reading if I need to understand something more deeply.

'research article' should be plural 'research articles' for general reference; add a comma and 'and' to join clauses smoothly. Suggestion: use plural and proper conjunction punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 1 Grammar problem type ID: 16