Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid sentence fragments and unnecessary pauses. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "and") to connect ideas and give concrete examples of what you enjoy reading.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot because it helps me relax and broaden my perspective. For example, I often read historical novels and personal essays, which teach me new facts and different ways of thinking.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar, and give one specific reason with an example. Use linking words like "because" and "so". Replace vague phrases with precise descriptions (e.g., "focus" instead of "attention on passage").

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me focus better and reduces digital distractions. For instance, when I read a novel on paper, I can concentrate for longer and enjoy a calmer experience.

Sugestão: Improve tense usage and word choice; be precise about situations requiring careful reading. Begin with a clear topic sentence and use connecting words such as "when" and "because." Give a concrete example to support your point.

Exemplo: I usually read carefully when I read a book for the first time because I need to understand the plot and characters. However, if I am rereading a book I already know well, I tend to skim it to revisit favorite parts.

Sugestão: Refine grammar and vocabulary, and state benefits clearly with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Replace unclear phrases ("facilitate my the ability of expressing") with precise expressions such as "improve my ability to express myself" or "deepen my emotional understanding."

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand nuances and improves my ability to express ideas. For example, reading poems carefully has deepened my emotional awareness and given me phrases I can use when writing.

× I think reading is a habit that could make people. Better and feel the beauty of the world.

✓ I think reading is a habit that can make people better and help them feel the beauty of the world.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect punctuation and structure. 'Could make people.' ends a sentence prematurely and 'Better' is capitalized incorrectly. Also missing a verb phrase to link 'feel the beauty of the world.' Use 'can' for general ability and add 'help them' to correctly connect the two effects. Suggestion: combine clauses into one sentence and use parallel structure: 'can make people better and help them feel...'. Note: Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer reading on paper because it's traditional reading, we can help me improve attention on passage and it brings to me a sense of peaceful.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it's traditional; it helps me improve my attention to the text and gives me a sense of peace.

The original mixes clauses incorrectly and uses wrong pronouns and noun forms: 'we can help me' is ungrammatical (subject inconsistency) and 'attention on passage' should be 'attention to the text' or 'attention to the passage.' 'a sense of peaceful' is incorrect adjective/noun choice; use 'a sense of peace.' Also separate ideas with appropriate punctuation or conjunctions. Suggestion: keep subject consistent ('it helps me') and use correct preposition 'to' and noun 'peace'. Note: Grammar problem type ID:12

× If I read a book at the first time, I would read it carefully because I must to know the main story and the main character of this book.

✓ If I read a book for the first time, I read it carefully because I must know the main story and the main characters of the book.

Conditional and tense are inconsistent. Use 'for the first time' not 'at the first time.' In a habitual or general statement use simple past or present: here simple past 'read' is acceptable in spoken context for a single past event; better is simple present for general habit: 'If I read... I read...' Also 'must to know' is wrong; 'must' is followed by the base verb without 'to.' 'main character' may need plural if referring to all main characters. Suggestion: use 'for the first time', remove 'to' after 'must', and ensure number agreement. Note: Grammar problem type ID:6

× But if I had read it before, I wouldn't read it carefully.

✓ But if I have read it before, I wouldn't read it carefully.

The original uses past perfect ('had read') in a conditional where present perfect ('have read') better expresses a past experience that affects current behavior. Using 'have read' fits the present unreal situation ('I wouldn't read it carefully'). Suggestion: use 'have read' for experience up to now in conditional sentences. Note: Grammar problem type ID:5

× I prefer detailed reading because I think it can facilitate my the ability of expressing and it can help me improve my appreciate of emotional things.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I think it can improve my ability to express myself and help me appreciate emotional aspects more.

The phrase 'facilitate my the ability of expressing' is ungrammatical: unnecessary 'the' and wrong noun forms. Use 'improve my ability to express myself.' 'Improve my appreciate' is wrong; use 'help me appreciate' or 'improve my appreciation of'. Also 'emotional things' is vague; 'emotional aspects' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'ability to + verb' for expression and 'appreciate' as verb with direct object. Note: Grammar problem type ID:13