Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and reduce fillers (umm, uh). Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I enjoy romantic novels" not "is umm romantic books") and possessive forms ("their stories" → "the stories").

Exemplo: I enjoy reading, especially romantic novels. For example, I like stories about relationships because they explore emotions and character development, which I find engaging.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and use one or two specific reasons connected with linking words (because, so). Fix grammar: 'prefer reading on paper', 'it helps me concentrate', 'it strains my eyes'. Avoid long hesitations and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate on the story and I find it less tiring. Reading on a screen often strains my eyes, so I read paper books when I want to focus.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers both parts, then give specific criteria and an example using linking words (for example, because, so). Reduce filler words and correct phrasing ("important parts of the plot", "less important or filler scenes").

Exemplo: I read carefully when the plot includes important developments, such as plot twists or key character decisions, because they affect the story's outcome. In contrast, I skim or read less carefully through filler scenes that only provide background information.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give one or two clear reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations ('detailed reading', 'understand the storyline', 'character traits'). Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the storyline fully and reveals characters' traits. For instance, by reading carefully I notice subtle clues about a character's motivation.

× That uh makes me feels umm decided and interesting about the their stories.

✓ That makes me feel excited and interested in their stories.

The student used incorrect pronouns and verb forms: 'makes me feels' mixes singular verb with plural form (should be 'makes me feel'), and 'decided and interesting about the their stories' is unidiomatic and contains a redundant definite article 'the' before 'their'. Replace with 'excited and interested in their stories'. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel' + adjective and 'interested in' when describing feelings toward something.

× I do prefer rate on papers because it makes me feel more concentrate on the stories in my novels and I feels a little bit, umm, I act and I think it's makes me feel I sent eyesight when I'm reading on screen.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate on the stories in novels, and I feel a bit strained when I read on a screen.

Multiple issues: 'do prefer rate on papers' is wrong—use 'prefer reading on paper'. 'makes me feel more concentrate' mixes noun/adjective forms; use 'helps me concentrate'. 'I feels' is wrong subject-verb agreement; use 'I feel'. 'it's makes me feel I sent eyesight' is ungrammatical and likely means 'it makes my eyes feel strained' or 'I feel eye strain'; corrected to 'I feel a bit strained when I read on a screen'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund, 'help' + base verb (concentrate), and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Umm apparently is umm romantic books or romantic novels.

✓ I mainly read romantic books or romantic novels.

Sentence lacks a clear subject and uses 'is' incorrectly for the speaker's preference. Use 'I mainly read' to indicate habitual present action. Suggestion: include subject 'I' and verb that matches habitual action (present simple).

× That uh makes me feels umm decided and interesting about the their stories.

✓ That makes me feel excited and interested in their stories.

(Repeated explanation) 'makes me feels' should be 'makes me feel' and 'the their' is redundant. Use 'interested in' to show relation to stories.

× I do prefer detail readings because it helps me understand their storylines more obviously to and know the character characteristics in that plots.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the storylines better and learn the characters' traits in those plots.

Problems: 'do prefer detail readings' - use 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer detailed readings'. 'more obviously to' is incorrect; use 'better'. 'know the character characteristics' is awkward; use 'learn the characters' traits'. 'in that plots' has incorrect demonstrative and plural agreement; use 'those plots'. Suggestion: use 'detailed reading' as a noun phrase, comparative 'better', and possessive for characters' traits.