Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, avoid repetition and fillers, and provide specific details (what kinds of books, how long you read each session). Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I love reading. I mainly enjoy nature and animal books because I’m fascinated by wildlife; for example, I recently read a book about migratory birds. I try to read for about an hour every weekend to relax and learn new facts.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'read on a screen'), avoid vague statements, and give specific reasons with linking words. Keep it concise and clear.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient and portable. For instance, I can access textbooks and articles on my tablet, highlight important parts, and quickly search for unfamiliar words, which helps me study more efficiently.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then contrast the two situations using linking words like 'when' and 'whereas'. Be specific about examples and purposes of careful reading versus skimming.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to understand complex information, for example when studying an essay for an exam, because details matter. Conversely, I skim or scan when I’m looking for a specific fact or keyword, such as a date or name, to save time.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'I prefer detailed reading' and 'helps me remember information longer'). Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Explain why with a concrete example and one linking word.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me remember information for longer and understand ideas more deeply. For example, when I read a scientific article carefully, I take notes and can recall the methods and results later for class discussions.

× I really love reading, I always find out uh, new books, terms of animals or anything else to study and reading.

✓ I really love reading; I often discover new books, terms about animals, or other things to study through reading.

Original sentence has run-on structure and awkward phrasing ('find out uh, new books, terms of animals or anything else to study and reading'). Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses and choose clearer verbs and prepositions: 'discover' and 'about'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I really love reading and I spend once a week to read.

✓ I really love reading, and I read once a week.

'Spend once a week to read' is incorrect verb usage and awkward. Use simple present 'read once a week' to express habitual action. This aligns tense and typical English collocation.

× Now I really love Read on Skin because with the development of the Internet and technologies and I use it to read a book or use it so convenient to me to learn in school and update my knowledge.

✓ Now I really like reading on screens because with the development of the internet and technology, it is very convenient for me to read books, learn at school, and update my knowledge.

Multiple issues: 'Read on Skin' is incorrect word choice and capitalization; use 'reading on screens'. 'Technologies' better as 'technology' in this context. Sentence needs subject-verb structure: 'it is very convenient for me'. Use infinitive and parallel verbs 'to read, learn, and update' for clarity and correct grammar.

× Sometime I read it carefully when I need to know about many information in the essays, I sometime I skim it and scan it to know a keyword just like this.

✓ Sometimes I read carefully when I need a lot of information from essays; sometimes I skim and scan to find keywords.

Use 'sometimes' (not 'sometime') and place adverb appropriately. 'Read it carefully' -> 'read carefully' is more natural. 'Many information' is uncountable; use 'a lot of information'. Remove repeated 'I' and combine clauses properly. Use parallel verbs 'skim and scan' and 'find keywords'.

× I prefer re detailed reading because it helps me long memorize and make maze uh no more knowledge.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me remember information for a long time and gain more knowledge.

Original contains fragments and nonstandard words ('re detailed', 'long memorize', 'make maze uh no more knowledge'). Use 'prefer detailed reading', 'helps me remember information for a long time', and 'gain more knowledge' for correct verb forms and clear meaning.

× So I really uh thing is so helpful for me to detail reading.

✓ So I really think detailed reading is very helpful for me.

Original is ungrammatical and disordered ('I really uh thing is so helpful for me to detail reading'). Use 'I really think' + clause 'detailed reading is very helpful for me' to create a grammatical, clear sentence.