Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and engaging with a clear topic sentence and personal details. To improve, make sentences more concise and correct small grammar issues (use consistent tense and avoid repetition). Also add a brief linking phrase to connect the anecdote to your current habit.

Exemplo: Yes, I have loved reading since I was a child. For example, my dad encouraged me to read Harry Potter, and I became absorbed in that magical world. Since then, I have read regularly, especially fantasy novels, because they help me relax and imagine new places.

Sugestão: Good direct response with reasons. Improve by adding a linking word and a specific example of when you choose paper over screens. Also correct phrasing (say 'poor eyesight' rather than 'really bad eyesight') and avoid vague claims about blue light—mention eye strain instead.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I have poor eyesight and screens cause me eye strain. For instance, when I study for exams, I always print articles so I can read for longer without headaches.

Sugestão: The answer addresses both parts but is slightly informal and has minor grammatical errors. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, using linking words (however/whereas), and giving a specific example of an important document and a type of fiction you skim casually. Fix plural and article errors ('the fantasy world').

Exemplo: I read carefully when the material is important; for example, I always proofread assignments twice before submitting them to my teacher. In contrast, I normally skim fiction or light novels for pleasure because I want to enjoy the story rather than focus on every detail.

Sugestão: Your meaning is clear, but there are several language and coherence issues (a fragment, mispronounced/typed words like 'Smith', grammar: 'informations'). Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, correcting vocabulary ('miss important information'), and adding a linking reason plus a short example of when you use detailed reading.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because scanning often causes me to miss important information. For instance, when studying for exams I read textbooks carefully so I understand concepts without having to reread passages.

× Yes, I am very fond of reading ever since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I have been very fond of reading ever since I was a kid.

The phrase 'ever since' indicates an action or state that began in the past and continues to the present. Use the present perfect (have/has + past participle) to express that continuity. 'Am' (simple present) is incorrect here; 'have been' correctly shows the ongoing state.

× I fell in love with reading when my dad forced me to read Harry Potter.

✓ I fell in love with reading when my dad forced me to read Harry Potter.

This sentence is already correct: it describes a past event using simple past tense ('fell', 'forced'), which matches the time frame. No change needed.

× I got lost in the magical world and couldn't stop reading ever since.

✓ I got lost in the magical world and haven't been able to stop reading since then.

The clause 'couldn't stop reading ever since' mixes past modal 'couldn't' with 'ever since' which signals continuity to the present. Use present perfect (have/has + past participle or 'haven't been able to') to show continuing inability: 'haven't been able to stop' or 'have not stopped.' Also add 'then' or remove 'ever' for clarity.

× I prefer reading on paper because I have a really bad eyesight.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I have really bad eyesight.

'Eyesight' is an uncountable noun; it does not take the indefinite article 'a.' Remove 'a' before 'really bad eyesight.' This is a usage/ article error related to uncountable nouns.

× I can't stare at a screen for too long because the blue light will affect my eyes and make my condition worse.

✓ I can't stare at a screen for too long because the blue light affects my eyes and makes my condition worse.

'Will affect' and 'make' suggest future consequence, but the speaker describes a habitual or general effect. Use simple present ('affects', 'makes') to state general truths or regular outcomes. Also keep consistent tense.

× I read carefully when something is really important, like when I have to check the work twice before submitting it to the teacher.

✓ I read carefully when something is really important, like when I have to check my work twice before submitting it to the teacher.

Use 'my work' instead of 'the work' to refer to the student's own work; this is a pronoun/reference choice. The tense is fine (present habitual). Change is to correct reference, classified under present tense issue as it affects subject reference in habitual context.

× And I don't really read it carefully when I am reading fiction books and getting lost in fantasy world.

✓ And I don't really read carefully when I am reading fiction books and getting lost in a fantasy world.

Two issues: the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary—'read carefully' suffices. Also 'fantasy world' needs an article: 'a fantasy world' to indicate one illustrative world among many. This falls under article errors and sentence structure; correction adds the indefinite article and removes the redundant pronoun.

× I prefer detailed reading since scanning text sometimes makes me. Smith important informations and detailed reading makes it easier and I don't have to read it twice or reread.

✓ I prefer detailed reading since scanning text sometimes makes me miss important information, and detailed reading makes it easier so I don't have to read it twice.

Multiple issues: 'makes me. Smith' appears to be a typo—should be 'makes me miss.' 'Informations' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. 'Reread' is redundant with 'read it twice'; 'so' connects the clauses better. The corrected sentence fixes spelling, uncountable noun usage, and sentence flow. Classified as sentence structure errors.