Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và độ chính xác của từ vựng; trả lời trực tiếp hơn với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa ra 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể; tránh lỗi như 'field fights' và thì động từ không phù hợp.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me broaden my horizons and learn more about subjects like mathematics and chemistry. For example, I recently read a popular science book that explained chemical reactions in everyday life, which made the topic much clearer.

Sugestão: Sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và từ vựng phù hợp; rút gọn để tránh dài dòng; nói rõ ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích (tối ưu hóa ánh sáng, truy cập sách).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because I can adjust the brightness and access many types of books easily. For instance, I often download textbooks and novels on my tablet, which saves space and lets me read at night without a lamp.

Sugestão: Cần hoàn thiện cú pháp, thì động từ và hoàn thành ý; trả lời rõ hai tình huống đối lập với ví dụ cụ thể; dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, I read very carefully when studying for important exams to avoid mistakes and understand concepts fully. In contrast, I skim social media posts or news headlines when I just want a quick update.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để rõ nghĩa; đưa thêm lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ; dùng liên từ để nối câu.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the meaning and details of a story. For example, when I read a novel, I take my time to follow character development and plot, which helps me appreciate the author's message.

× Well, I'm interested in reading a lot because it helped me to broaden my horizons and gain more knowledge in field fights such as math, science, or chemistry.

✓ Well, I'm interested in reading a lot because it helps me to broaden my horizons and gain more knowledge in fields such as math, science, or chemistry.

The original used 'helped' (past) which conflicts with 'I'm interested' (present). Use present simple 'helps' to match habitual present. Also 'field fights' is incorrect; 'fields' is the correct plural noun. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use correct plural noun forms.

× I prefer to read on a screen because it is convenient for me to adjust the light and also I can use a lot of kinds of book on that to read.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it is convenient for me to adjust the brightness and I can access many kinds of books to read on it.

Errors: 'adjust the light' is better expressed as 'adjust the brightness'; 'a lot of kinds of book' should be 'many kinds of books' (quantifier and plural noun); 'on that' should be 'on it' referring to the screen. Suggestion: simplify phrases, use correct quantifiers and prepositions for devices ('on it').

× Well it depend on the occasion. Like when I have a big test in my high school I have to read it carefully to make sure my exam did not have any wrong and when I read the post I.

✓ Well, it depends on the occasion. For example, when I have a big test at my high school I have to read carefully to make sure my exam does not have any mistakes, and when I read a post I...

Errors: 'it depend' should be 'it depends' (subject-verb agreement). Use 'at my high school' for location. 'read it carefully' -> 'read carefully' (unnecessary object). 'did not have any wrong' is ungrammatical; use 'does not have any mistakes' (present tense to match habitual action). The sentence ended abruptly 'when I read the post I.' — keep it complete or use ellipsis. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use appropriate nouns ('mistakes').

× Well, I prefer detailed reading because I want to catch up on the clearly mean of story in the reading.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the clear meaning of the story in the text.

Errors: 'catch up on' is wrong collocation for 'understand'; use 'understand'. 'the clearly mean' is incorrect word forms; use 'the clear meaning'. 'in the reading' is vague—'in the text' or 'in the reading passage' is better. Suggestion: use correct collocations and adjective/noun forms ('clear meaning').