Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'helpful for me' thay vì 'helpful for myself'), dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn để diễn đạt lý do và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về sách y học bạn đọc. Hạn chế dài dòng không cần thiết.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially medical textbooks because they help me understand clinical concepts. For example, I recently read a cardiology chapter that explained heart murmurs clearly, which improved my practical knowledge.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chọn từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ 'access books' thay vì 'broaden stories') và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Thêm một ví dụ ngắn về tính tiện lợi của đọc trên màn hình sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can access multiple books and articles on my tablet without needing to buy hard copies.

Sugestão: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ 'cause a problem', 'I usually just look for the main idea'). Nên dùng liên từ để tách hai phần đối lập và nêu một ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi trường hợp để chi tiết hơn.

Exemplo: I read carefully when reviewing important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because missing a detail could cause a problem. Conversely, when browsing social media or headlines, I usually just look for the main idea and skim content.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ('feel story', 'most found out way'). Hãy nêu ý chính ngắn gọn, giải thích lý do với từ vựng chính xác và, nếu có thể, thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về khi bạn dùng detailed reading.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the plot and the characters. For example, when I read novels I take time to analyze descriptions and dialogue so I can appreciate the author's intent.

× Yes, I like reading, especially reading medical textbooks because they are helpful for myself.

✓ Yes, I like reading, especially medical textbooks because they are helpful to me.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here; use 'to me' to indicate benefit. Also remove repeated 'reading' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'helpful to me' or 'helpful for me'.

× They provide knowledge with who wanna study medicine.

✓ They provide knowledge for people who want to study medicine.

'Who' must refer to 'people'; 'wanna' is informal and incorrect in writing; use 'want to'. Preposition 'for' is correct to indicate intended recipients.

× I think I prefer to read on a screen because it is convenient.

✓ I think I prefer to read on a screen because it is convenient.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. (Included for completeness but no change.)

× I can broaden stories by reading any books that I want instead of buying each book individually to read.

✓ I can read many different stories on a screen instead of buying each book individually.

Phrase 'broaden stories' is awkward and ungrammatical. Simplify to 'read many different stories'. Remove redundant 'to read'. Keep parallel structure: 'instead of buying each book individually.'

× I need to read carefully when I'm looking at important documents like contracts or official e-mail because missing a detail could cause problem.

✓ I need to read carefully when I'm looking at important documents like contracts or official e-mail because missing a detail could cause a problem.

Count noun 'problem' requires an article 'a'. Also 'e-mail' is acceptable; alternatively use 'emails'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and noun articles.

× On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm browsing news headlines or social media. I usually just came for main idea.

✓ On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm browsing news headlines or social media. I usually just look for the main idea.

'Came' is past tense and incorrect here; needed verb is 'look' (present) with preposition 'for' to express searching. Add article 'the' before 'main idea'.

× I'd like more detailed reading because I can feel story in a most found out way and at the same time I understand the meaning of story.

✓ I'd prefer more detailed reading because I can feel the story in a deeper way and at the same time understand its meaning.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'like' to compare choices. 'Feel story' is ungrammatical; use 'feel the story'. 'In a most found out way' is incorrect—use 'in a deeper way' or 'more fully'. Also 'the meaning of story' needs article and a possessive: 'its meaning'.