Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
I don't like reading, but if ever I read a book, UH is very attractive, I will read it once by once. Uh, for example.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I prefer to read on the screen because it can change what I want to read and to to find what I don't know.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
When I was studying, I will read carefully to make sure I can solve the problem, but if I read on the screen or such as the social media, the thought video and the thought message.
Examinador
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidato
I prefer scanning, uh, there can umm, see some watch something quickly, uh, but uh, if there is uh, important, uh, uh, important information, I will read detailed, but sometimes I will.
Do you like reading?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答不自然且混亂。需直接回答問題(肯定或否定),然後用1–2句具體原因或例子支持。避免填充語(uh, um)和語法錯誤,句子保持簡潔(不超過5句)。可以使用連接詞如 because 或 if to make it coherent。
Exemplo: I don't enjoy reading much because I prefer watching videos. However, if a book has an interesting plot or useful information, I will read it slowly to understand it fully. For example, I once read a short novel that was so engaging I finished it in two days.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答有明確立場但表達不夠流暢且有重複與語法問題。應用一個主句然後給出1–2個具體理由,使用連接詞如 because 和 so,注意避免重複詞語。
Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it's easier to search for information and adjust the text size. For instance, when I read articles online I can quickly look up unfamiliar terms or switch to another source.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中時態混亂且句子不完整。應先用一個清晰的主句說明何時需要仔細閱讀,然後用連接詞(for example, but)給出具體對比,避免模糊詞彙(the thought video)。
Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm studying because I must understand concepts to solve problems. By contrast, I skim social media posts or videos when I'm just browsing for entertainment.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答重複且充滿填充詞,語言不清晰。應直接給出偏好並解釋原因,使用連接詞(but, if)來形成對比,並提供具體例子來支持觀點,保持句子簡短和有邏輯。
Exemplo: I usually prefer scanning because I want to get the main idea quickly. However, if the text contains important details, such as instructions or academic information, I read it carefully to avoid mistakes.
× I don't like reading, but if ever I read a book, UH is very attractive, I will read it once by once. Uh, for example.
✓ I don't like reading, but if I ever find a book that is very attractive, I will read it from beginning to end. For example, ...
句子结构混乱:原句把条件从句、定语从句和短语顺序混淆("if ever I read a book, UH is very attractive" 中缺少明确先行词和关系代词),并且短语"once by once" 不合英语表达。建议先用明确的条件从句(if I ever find a book that is very attractive),再用主句说明结果(I will read it from beginning to end)。避免填充语(UH)影响句子完整性。
× I prefer to read on the screen because it can change what I want to read and to to find what I don't know.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I can change what I want to read and find information I don't know.
错误类型为动词现在分词/不定式结构使用不当:原句中使用不一致的动词结构("change what I want to read and to to find"),有多余的"to"。另外冠词使用也有问题(应为"a screen"或"the screen"根据语境)。建议并列动词时保持一致形式(I can change ... and find ...),并去掉多余词。
× When I was studying, I will read carefully to make sure I can solve the problem, but if I read on the screen or such as the social media, the thought video and the thought message.
✓ When I am studying, I read carefully to make sure I can solve the problems, but when I read on a screen, such as social media, short videos, or messages, I do not read carefully.
时态错误:原句在同一陈述中混用了过去时"When I was studying"和将来时"I will read",导致时态不一致。应根据一般事实使用一般现在时(When I am studying, I read carefully)。另外有词汇和表达混乱("the thought video and the thought message" 不通顺),应改为更自然的短语如"short videos"或"messages"。建议保持时态一致并使用清晰的并列结构。
× I prefer scanning, uh, there can umm, see some watch something quickly, uh, but uh, if there is uh, important, uh, uh, important information, I will read detailed, but sometimes I will.
✓ I prefer scanning because it lets me look through things quickly, but if there is important information, I will read in detail. Sometimes I do both.
句子结构和表达混乱:原句有大量填充词(uh, umm)并且短语顺序不正确("there can ... see some watch something quickly" 不合语法)。"read detailed" 用法错误,应为动词短语"read in detail"或"read in a detailed way"。最后的"but sometimes I will" 不完整。建议去掉填充词,重组句子,保持动词短语正确。