Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Сократите паузы и повторы, исправьте грамматические ошибки и стройте ответ по структуре: краткое заявление, затем одно-два конкретных пояснения. Используйте связки для плавности. Например, замените «I I do like» на «Yes, I do», «I used to reading» на «I have enjoyed reading since I was a child», и объедините идеи: «it develops my imagination and helps me relax».

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I have enjoyed reading since I was a child, because it develops my imagination and helps me to relax. For example, when I read fiction I picture the scenes in my head, which makes the experience very calming and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Устраните лишние слова и завершайте предложения полностью; используйте связки для объяснения причин. Исправьте фразы: «I need to to have» → «I prefer to hold», «I like the smell of paper books to read the digital books» → «I prefer the smell of paper books to digital ones», и добавьте конкретную причину о зрении.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer paper books because I like the feel and smell of real pages. Also, reading from screens strains my eyes after a while, so physical books are more comfortable for long reading sessions.

Sugestão: Упростите фразы и используйте точные термины: «scrap scam» — неверно; используйте «scan» или «skim». Стройте ответ: общее утверждение, затем два конкретных примера с причинами. Избегайте повторов («in in»).

Exemplo: It depends on the purpose. If I'm reading for pleasure, I read carefully to enjoy the atmosphere and understand the characters. However, if I'm studying or have limited time, I usually skim the text to find the main points quickly.

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ короче и точнее: начальное утверждение плюс одно-два объяснения. Исправьте «detail reading» на «detailed reading», «accept all the details» → «take in all the details». Уберите повтор «I'm I». Приведите пример, как детальное чтение помогает вам представить персонажей.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to take in all the nuances of a story. For example, by reading closely I can imagine the setting and the characters' emotions more clearly, which makes the book more immersive.

× I I do like reading and I used to reading when I was a child.

✓ I do like reading and I used to read when I was a child.

The sentence contains a repetition 'I I' and incorrect verb form after 'used to'. Use the base form 'read' after 'used to'. Also remove the duplicated pronoun. Suggestion: 'I do like reading, and I used to read when I was a child.'

× It's a very good habit to my mind because it's develop your imagination and help you to relax.

✓ In my opinion, it's a very good habit because it develops your imagination and helps you to relax.

'To my mind' is better expressed as 'in my opinion'. The verbs need third person singular endings ('develops', 'helps') to agree with 'it'. Also pronoun 'it' should be consistent. Suggestion: start with 'In my opinion' and use correct verb agreement.

× Help me to relax.

✓ It helps me to relax.

This fragment lacks a clear subject; 'Help me to relax' is an imperative but context implies describing a habit. Use 'It helps me to relax' with subject 'it' referring to reading.

× To be honest, I prefer to read paper books because I'm old fashioned and I need to to have a paper book in my hands.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read paper books because I'm old-fashioned and I need to have a paper book in my hands.

'Old fashioned' should be hyphenated as 'old-fashioned' as a compound adjective. Remove duplicated 'to'. The structure 'prefer to read paper books' is fine; keep 'have a paper book in my hands'.

× I like the smell of paper books to read the digital books.

✓ I like the smell of paper books more than that of digital books.

The original mixes structures. Use comparative 'more than' and a clear noun phrase 'that of digital books' to compare the smells. Alternatively: 'I prefer the smell of paper books to the smell of digital books.'

× It's inconvenient for me because my eyes.

✓ It's inconvenient for me because of my eyes.

The clause 'because my eyes' is incomplete. Use 'because of my eyes' or 'because it strains my eyes' to explain the reason. Suggestion: 'because it strains my eyes.'

× I believe that all depends on circumstances.

✓ I believe that it all depends on the circumstances.

Add the pronoun 'it' for natural English order and include the definite article 'the' before 'circumstances'. The present tense 'depends' is correct.

× When you read for joy or for relaxing you need to be more careful because you are involved in in the process.

✓ When you read for pleasure or to relax, you need to be more attentive because you are involved in the process.

Use 'for pleasure' or 'to relax' instead of 'for relaxing'. Remove duplicated 'in in'. 'More careful' can be replaced with 'more attentive' for naturalness. Include a comma after the introductory clause.

× You need to feel the atmosphere.

✓ You need to feel the atmosphere.

This sentence is acceptable but could be improved to 'You need to experience the atmosphere.' No grammatical error to fix per list; kept for clarity.

× But if you are preparing for example for instance, you need to scrap scam the text because you have time limit for it.

✓ But if you are preparing, for example, you need to skim or scan the text because you have a time limit.

'For example' and 'for instance' are redundant; use one and set it off with commas. 'Scrap scam' is incorrect; likely meant 'skim or scan'. Add article 'a' before 'time limit'. Suggestion: 'you need to skim or scan the text because you have a time limit.'

× I prefer the detail reading because I like to accept all the details about the book.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I like to take in all the details about the book.

Use adjective 'detailed' rather than 'detail' before 'reading'. 'Accept' is not appropriate; use 'take in' or 'absorb'. This corrects word choice and collocation.

× I like to create special atmosphere in my imagination when I'm reading because I'm I want to feel the characters from the book.

✓ I like to create a special atmosphere in my imagination when I'm reading because I want to feel the characters from the book.

Add article 'a' before 'special atmosphere'. Remove duplicated 'I'm'. Use 'want to' without preceding 'I'm'. 'Feel the characters from the book' is acceptable; could be 'feel the characters in the book.'

× It's.

✓ (Remove fragment)

'It's.' is a sentence fragment without completion. Either complete the thought (e.g. 'It's enjoyable.') or remove it. Fragments should be avoided in formal responses.