Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện: 1) Ngắn gọn câu chủ đề: mở đầu nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích. 2) Ngữ pháp và phát âm: sửa lỗi chia động từ và danh từ (can’t stand, today’s fast-paced world, continuous learning). 3) Tránh lặp và tiếng ồ ừ (uh). 4) Sắp xếp ý mạch lạc: đưa lý do rõ ràng (như cảm giác chán, khó ngồi yên) và kết luận. Cụ thể thực hành nói câu ngắn, dùng 2-3 câu hỗ trợ, không quá 5 câu.

Exemplo: No, I don't enjoy reading much because I find it tedious and I can't sit still for long. However, I know reading is important in today's fast-paced world for continuous learning, so I try to read short articles when I can.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp (screen/paper). 2) Sửa ngữ pháp: preference, reading on a screen, papers → on paper. 3) Hạn chế cụm diễn đạt không tự nhiên (“being glued to the screen” có thể hiểu sai). 4) Đưa lý do cụ thể và kết luận (ví dụ tiện lợi, dễ điều chỉnh độ sáng, lưu trữ).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and I can adjust the brightness. For example, I can carry many articles on my phone and read them after a long day at school.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng. 2) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dư từ (encounter encounters, read very carefully). 3) Sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để nối hai ý (for example, then, however). 4) Thêm ví dụ cụ thể khi đọc kỹ (học bài, hợp đồng) và khi không cần (tin tức, email).

Exemplo: I read carefully the first time I see a text because I need to understand the main ideas and remember key details. For example, I read study materials and official documents carefully, but I usually skim news articles or emails to get the main points quickly.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn (I prefer detailed reading). 2) Sửa ngữ pháp và số ít/đa số (readers → reader, it takes). 3) Tránh lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ (scream → scan). 4) Thêm liên từ để đối chiếu (but, however) và ví dụ cụ thể khi dùng mỗi phương pháp.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand a text, even though it takes more time. However, for quick tasks like finding a phone number or a specific fact, I usually scan the text.

× To be honest, I'm not a big fan of reading because I find it's quite tedious and I can't stands sitting still for long periods.

✓ To be honest, I'm not a big fan of reading because I find it quite tedious and I can't stand sitting still for long periods.

The verb 'stand' should be in base form after the modal 'can't' (subject-verb agreement and verb form). 'it's' was corrected to 'it' to refer to reading generally. Suggestion: after modal verbs (can, could, should, etc.) use the base form of the verb; ensure pronouns correctly refer to their nouns. Grammar problem type ID:27

× However, in today fast pace world continues learning it at central and reading plays a vital role.

✓ However, in today's fast-paced world, continuous learning is central and reading plays a vital role.

Missing possessive apostrophe in 'today's' and hyphenation/compound adjective 'fast-paced' needed. 'continues learning it at central' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'continuous learning is central' to convey intended meaning and fix sentence structure. Suggestion: use apostrophe for 'today's', hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns, and use correct noun/verb forms for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× If uh, you like this skill, it is easy to fall behind, so I am.

✓ If you don't practice this skill, it is easy to fall behind, so I try to keep up.

Original sentence is incomplete and contradictory; 'If you like this skill' doesn't fit context. Fixed to a logical conditional about practice and a coherent personal response. Suggestion: ensure conditional clauses are complete and follow with a matching main clause; make personal statements clear and grammatical. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I have uh, the preferent uh, for readings on a screen than reading on papers because I love the feelings of being uh, being glued to the screen and it's helped me unwind myself up to a long days at school.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper because I like the feeling of being glued to the screen and it helps me unwind after long days at school.

Use 'prefer' + gerund and 'prefer A to B'. 'reading on paper' not 'papers'; use singular uncountable 'paper' for the medium. 'the feelings' -> 'the feeling' and remove reflexive 'unwind myself' to 'unwind'. 'it's helped me' corrected to 'it helps me' for habitual action. 'up to a long days' corrected to 'after long days' with plural agreement. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', gerunds after prefer, correct article/number for uncountable nouns, and use simple present for habitual facts. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I usually read the very carefully the first time I encounter encounters a text because I need to understand the main ideas and remember important details, and after that I only need to skim or scan this more quickly to review or find specific information and this is very good.

✓ I usually read very carefully the first time I encounter a text because I need to understand the main ideas and remember important details, and after that I only need to skim or scan it more quickly to review or find specific information.

Remove extra 'the' before 'very carefully'. 'encounter encounters a text' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'encounter a text'. Replace 'this' with 'it' to refer to the text. Remove unnecessary 'and this is very good' as it is informal and vague. Suggestion: avoid duplicating verbs, use correct determiners, and keep pronoun references clear. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I'm mainly a detail oriented readers because I like to fully understand a text.

✓ I'm mainly a detail-oriented reader because I like to fully understand a text.

Subject 'I' requires singular noun 'reader', and 'detail-oriented' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Although is take more time for for but for quick tasks I scan or scream to find specific information quickly.

✓ Although it takes more time, for quick tasks I scan to find specific information quickly.

'is take' incorrect; should be 'it takes' (third person singular present). Remove duplicated 'for' and unnecessary 'but'. 'scream' is wrong word; use 'scan'. Keep 'quickly' though it's repetitive; consider removing one. Suggestion: ensure subject pronoun present, use correct third-person 'takes', avoid duplicate words and choose correct vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:2