Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần trực tiếp hơn, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và chi tiết hóa nội dung. Tránh lỗi số ít/số nhiều và dùng từ phù hợp (newspaper vs. new paper). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn và dùng liên từ khi cần.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read newspapers in the morning because they help me relax and keep me informed about current events.

Sugestão: Cần sửa phát âm/ghi âm (UH placeholders) và ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, số lượng). Tránh từ không rõ, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu lựa chọn, lý do, và ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer reading on a screen because e-books are more convenient and portable. For example, I can carry hundreds of books on my tablet and read anywhere, which is much easier than carrying physical books.

Sugestão: Cần sửa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (risk → read, make mistake → avoid mistakes). Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích nguyên nhân bằng linking words và ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ mạch văn logic và tối đa 5 câu.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to understand important documents or news because accuracy matters and I want to avoid mistakes. However, when I'm busy I usually skim emails to pick out key points and save time.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chứa lỗi cấu trúc và từ mơ hồ (little detailed reading, MMM). Nên nói rõ lựa chọn với nguyên nhân, thêm linking word và minh họa cụ thể. Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa và kiểm tra ngữ pháp (they → it/they depending on noun).

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the material more deeply. For example, when studying for exams I read slowly and take notes rather than just scanning the text.

× I usually read a new paper because they help me relax and increase life skill.

✓ I usually read a newspaper because it helps me relax and increase my life skills.

The student used 'a new paper' and 'they' incorrectly. 'Newspaper' is the correct singular noun for a paper you read; 'a new paper' is awkward. Pronoun 'they' does not agree with the singular noun; use 'it'. Also 'life skill' should be plural or possessive 'my life skills' to express multiple abilities. Suggestion: use singular nouns with matching singular pronouns and correct noun forms (e.g., 'newspaper', 'it', 'my life skills').

× To be honest, I prefer UH to read on a screen because they are more convenient and portable.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and portable.

The sentence has a pronoun issue and verb form problem. 'Prefer to read' is correct; the inserted 'UH' is not needed. The noun 'screen' is singular, so pronoun 'they are' is incorrect; use 'it is'. Suggestion: remove extraneous tokens and ensure subject and pronoun agreement ('screen' -> 'it is').

× For example, I cannot give 1000 of books and UH can read UH anywhere.

✓ For example, I cannot carry 1000 books and I can read anywhere.

'Give 1000 of books' is incorrect; likely intended 'carry 1000 books' or 'buy 1000 books'. 'Of' should be omitted and 'give' is wrong verb. Also 'UH' placeholders should be replaced with 'I' where appropriate. Suggestion: use correct verb ('carry'/'buy') and omit unnecessary 'of'; ensure pronouns are correct ('I').

× When I have my spare time, I risk carefully for obviously for important documents and news.

✓ When I have spare time, I read carefully, obviously for important documents and news.

'I risk carefully' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I read carefully'. Word order is wrong: adverb 'obviously' should be placed to modify the clause and a comma helps clarity. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'read' and place adverbs and phrases in natural order ('I read carefully, especially for important documents and news').

× I read carefully to understand and make mistake.

✓ I read carefully to understand and avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'make mistake' is incorrect; English uses 'make mistakes' or better 'avoid mistakes' in this context. The infinitive 'to understand and avoid mistakes' parallels correctly. Suggestion: use parallel verbs and correct noun forms ('avoid mistakes').

× When I'm busy, I skim e-mail.

✓ When I'm busy, I skim emails.

'E-mail' can be pluralized to 'emails' when referring to multiple messages; plural aligns with general habit. Suggestion: use plural noun 'emails' for habitual action ('I skim emails').

× To be honest, I prefer little detailed reading rather than scanning reading because they are help me to understand and give MMM.

✓ To be honest, I prefer more detailed reading rather than skimming because it helps me understand and give more information.

'Little detailed reading' is incorrect; use 'more detailed reading' or 'detailed reading'. 'Scanning reading' is awkward; use 'skimming'. Pronoun 'they are' must agree with singular 'detailed reading' -> 'it helps'. 'MMM' is unclear; likely 'more information'. Suggestion: use correct comparative ('more detailed'), correct term ('skimming'), and ensure verb agreement ('it helps').