Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音と語彙の誤りを直し、文法の基本（主語と動詞の一致、冠詞、単数・複数形）を改善する必要があります。回答は簡潔なトピック文（Yes, I enjoy reading.）で始め、続けて具体的な理由を1〜2文で述べ、最後に短い例を付けると自然です。また“不自然な表現”（leading→reading、wisdoms→wisdom、leave→learn、books of Mass→books on the bus?）を正すこと。発音や流暢さを上げるために文をゆっくり明瞭に話し、5文以内にまとめてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it gives me useful information and new ideas. For example, I often learn practical tips from self-help books that make my daily life easier. Reading helps me relax and improves my thinking.

Sugestão: 語彙と発音の誤り（leading→reading、scream→screen）を直すこと。明確な比較の構造（I prefer X to Y）を使い、理由を示す際に具体的な例を短く付けると良いです。文法的には比較の後に完全な理由文を続け、冗長な語（the better）を避けて自然な表現（remember better）を使ってください。流暢さのために簡潔に2〜3文で答えましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because I remember information better from physical books. For example, when I study from a textbook, highlighting pages helps me recall facts more easily.

Sugestão: 語彙と文法の基本を直してください（lead→read、leave→read?；I haven't to→I don't need to）。問いに対して明確に対照を示すこと（When I need to read carefully, when not）を意識し、トピック文をまず述べ、次に理由と短い例を加えてください。特に時制と冠詞に注意し、二つの状況を明確に分けて述べると採点が上がります。

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I study academic books because they contain detailed facts and complex ideas. I don't need to read magazines carefully if I'm just skimming for fun or light information.

Sugestão: 表現を整理して、正しい語彙と文法（detail leading→detailed reading、repeated fragmentsを削除）を使ってください。選好を述べる（I prefer X to Y）し、その理由を具体的に述べ、一つのクリアな例で裏付けると良いです。現在分詞や時制の誤り（when I scanning→when I scan / when I'm scanning）に注意し、同じ語の繰り返しを避けて簡潔にまとめてください。

Exemplo: I prefer scanning to detailed reading when I need to gather general information quickly. For example, when researching a topic, I scan articles to find the main points before deciding which ones to read in detail.

× Yes, I like leading very much because leading gives me a lot of information and wisdoms which helps me live a good life.

✓ Yes, I like reading very much because reading gives me a lot of information and wisdom, which helps me live a good life.

The student used 'leading' instead of the noun 'reading' and 'wisdoms' (plural) which is incorrect in this context. Use the noun 'reading' and the uncountable noun 'wisdom'. Also add a comma before the relative clause 'which helps...'. Suggestion: learn common noun forms and uncountable nouns and practice using commas before nonrestrictive clauses. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, when I leave the books of Mass, I can use the bus.

✓ For example, when I leave the house after mass, I can take the bus.

'leave the books of Mass' is incorrect. Likely meaning is 'leave the house after mass'. Also use 'take the bus' not 'use the bus'. Suggestion: review common collocations and prepositional phrases like 'after mass', 'leave the house', and 'take the bus'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer leading on a paper to scream because leading on the paper makes me remember the better.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to on a screen because reading on paper helps me remember better.

Multiple errors: 'leading' should be 'reading'; 'a paper' should be 'paper' or 'on paper'; 'scream' is incorrect for 'screen'; 'the better' is wrong—use 'better' (adverb). Suggestion: practice vocabulary (paper vs screen) and correct adjective/adverb forms. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, if I read the book on the computer, I can't read Seriously.

✓ For example, if I read a book on the computer, I cannot read it seriously.

Use 'a book' or 'books' instead of 'the book' in general statements, 'can't' -> 'cannot' for formality, and 'Seriously' should be lowercase and include object 'it'. Suggestion: pay attention to sentence capitalization and include necessary objects. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I need to lead carefully when I leave the academic books and I I haven't to read carefully when I reading the magazine books.

✓ I need to read carefully when I study academic books, and I do not need to read carefully when I read magazines.

'lead' should be 'read'; 'leave' is wrong for 'study' or 'use'; duplicate 'I I'; 'haven't to' is ungrammatical—use 'do not need to'; 'reading the magazine books' -> 'read magazines'. Suggestion: focus on verb choice and auxiliary verbs for negatives, and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer scanning to detail leading because when I scanning when I scanning.

✓ I prefer scanning to detailed reading because when I scan...

'detail leading' should be 'detailed reading'; 'when I scanning when I scanning' is ungrammatical—should be 'when I scan'. Suggestion: learn correct adjective forms ('detailed') and the correct verb form for simple present ('scan'). Grammar problem type ID:13

× When I am scanning I can get a lot of information in a short time, for example scanning.

✓ When I am scanning, I can get a lot of information in a short time; for example, scanning allows me to find key points quickly.

Sentence repeats 'scanning' without clarity. Improve by adding a clear clause explaining what scanning does. Suggestion: avoid repetition and provide complete clause after 'for example'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× The use of scanning helps me to lead a book.

✓ The use of scanning helps me to read a book quickly.

'lead a book' is incorrect—use 'read a book' and add 'quickly' or 'efficiently' to make meaning clear. Suggestion: review correct verb collocations with 'book' (read a book, write a book). Grammar problem type ID:13