Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Trả lời trực tiếp và nêu sở thích cụ thể, nhưng cần sửa cấu trúc song song trong danh sách: dùng “reading, playing and listening”. “When I freeze time” không phù hợp với ý “khi có thời gian rảnh”; hãy dùng “in my free time”. Sau “I” cần động từ chia đúng, chẳng hạn “I listen”. Có thể thêm một lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a few hobbies, including reading, playing sports and listening to music. I usually listen to music every day in my free time because it helps me relax.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhắc đến hai sở thích cụ thể, nhưng nên gộp các ý thành câu hoàn chỉnh thay vì ngắt câu sau “child” và “draw”. Vì câu hỏi ở quá khứ, hãy dùng “liked” và “enjoyed drawing”. Có thể giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao bạn thích chơi cầu lông; cụm “after a busy day” không thật hợp với bối cảnh tuổi thơ, nên hãy diễn đạt đơn giản hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I enjoyed drawing and playing badminton. I especially liked badminton because it was fun and gave me a chance to play with my friends.

Sugestão: Cần nêu rõ sở thích ngay từ đầu; “it plays” không đúng cấu trúc và người nghe khó xác định bạn đang nói về hoạt động nào. Hãy dùng “I’ve enjoyed playing badminton since I was a child” nếu ý bạn là chơi cầu lông. Khi nói về lợi ích, dùng “it helps me stay fit and healthy”; đồng thời bỏ phần lặp “I like”.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I’ve enjoyed playing badminton since I was a child, and I still play it now. It helps me stay fit and healthy, and I also enjoy the friendly competition.

Sugestão: Ý chính là bạn có sở thích khác các thành viên trong gia đình, nhưng câu mở đầu chưa rõ nghĩa (“in my family is taught…”). Hãy nói trực tiếp “No, we have different hobbies”. Sửa chia động từ thành “my father likes” và “my mother likes”, đồng thời dùng “books” nếu nói chung. Để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, hãy nêu sở thích của bản thân và nói rõ bạn không thích nấu ăn hay chỉ ít nấu ăn.

Exemplo: No, we have different hobbies. My father enjoys reading books, while my mother likes cooking. I’m more interested in listening to music, so I don’t really share their hobbies.

× Yes I have some hobbies umm I like reading books, play sport and listening to music.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies. I like reading books, playing sports, and listening to music.

The verbs in this list should use the same grammatical form. Use gerunds consistently: reading, playing, and listening. Sports is also the usual plural form when referring generally to athletic activities.

× Yes I have some hobbies umm I like reading books, play sport and listening to music.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies. I like reading books, playing sports, and listening to music.

When referring to sports or athletic activities in general, use the plural noun sports.

× Especially when I freeze time I listening to music every day.

✓ Especially when I freeze time, I listen to music every day.

The sentence describes a regular habit, so use the simple present listen. Listening needs an auxiliary verb such as am if you intend to use the present continuous.

× MMM, yes, when I was a child. I like draw. And play badminton because they help me relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked drawing and playing badminton because they helped me relax after a busy day.

The question asks about childhood, so use past-tense verbs: liked and helped. Keep the verbs in the same time frame as was.

× MMM, yes, when I was a child. I like draw. And play badminton because they help me relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked drawing and playing badminton because they helped me relax after a busy day.

After liked, use a gerund (-ing form), such as drawing. For a balanced list, use playing badminton as well.

× Yes I like I like it plays when I was child and now I also like it because it's help me keep fit and health.

✓ Yes, I've liked playing it since I was a child, and I still like it because it helps me keep fit and healthy.

Use the present perfect I've liked with since to describe something that began in the past and continues now. This also makes the time relationship clear.

× Yes I like I like it plays when I was child and now I also like it because it's help me keep fit and health.

✓ Yes, I've liked playing it since I was a child, and I still like it because it helps me keep fit and healthy.

Use playing after liked to refer to the activity. The -ing form is the natural form here.

× Yes I like I like it plays when I was child and now I also like it because it's help me keep fit and health.

✓ Yes, I've liked playing it since I was a child, and I still like it because it helps me keep fit and healthy.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the simple-present verb needs -s: it helps, not it help.

× Yes I like I like it plays when I was child and now I also like it because it's help me keep fit and health.

✓ Yes, I've liked playing it since I was a child, and I still like it because it helps me keep fit and healthy.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child: a child.

× Yes I like I like it plays when I was child and now I also like it because it's help me keep fit and health.

✓ Yes, I've liked playing it since I was a child, and I still like it because it helps me keep fit and healthy.

Healthy is the adjective needed to describe the person who stays fit. Health is a noun.

× No, in my family is taught everyone has deep urban hobbies like my father.

✓ No, everyone in my family has different hobbies, like my father.

The original clause has no clear subject for is taught and is difficult to understand grammatically. Place the subject everyone before the verb has to form a complete, clear clause.

× My father like reading book and my mother like cooking and I don't like it.

✓ My father likes reading books, and my mother likes cooking, but I don't like it.

My father and my mother are third-person singular subjects, so use likes rather than like.

× My father like reading book and my mother like cooking and I don't like it.

✓ My father likes reading books, and my mother likes cooking, but I don't like it.

Use the plural form books when speaking generally about what someone enjoys reading.

× My father like reading book and my mother like cooking and I don't like it.

✓ My father likes reading books, and my mother likes cooking, but I don't like it.

But is more suitable than and because the final clause contrasts with the statement that your mother enjoys cooking.