Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add a brief reason and a plan with linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "in the future").

Exemplo: I don't have any regular hobbies at the moment because I'm busy with my university studies. When I was a child I enjoyed drawing and painting, which relaxed me after school. I hope to take up painting again in the future when I have more free time.

Sugestão: Answer directly with correct tense and clearer vocabulary. Use one topic sentence, then give a specific supporting detail with linking words. Avoid filler phrases like "Let me remember" and correct expressions for feelings (e.g., "cheered me up").

Exemplo: Yes. In primary and secondary school I was into drawing and painting because they helped me relax after a busy day. For example, I would spend an hour sketching landscapes or portraits, which made me feel calmer and more focused.

Sugestão: Be concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you still have a childhood hobby. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "now") and correct verb forms and collocations ("listen to music", "watch TV"). Provide a brief reason for the change.

Exemplo: My hobbies have changed over time. Although I used to enjoy drawing and painting as a child, now I'm usually too busy with my studies and prefer watching TV and listening to music to relax. I plan to return to painting when I have more free time.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: start with a direct statement, compare family members' hobbies with correct plurals and articles ("reading books", "video games"), and give a specific example of how you share or learn from each other. Use linking words like "however" or "although".

Exemplo: Not really. My parents enjoy reading books, while my younger brother prefers playing video games. Although it's sometimes hard to find an activity we all enjoy, it is interesting because we can learn from each other—for instance, my parents recommend books while my brother shows us new games.

× I don't have any hobbies now because I busy with my study in university, but when I was a child I like drawing and painting.

✓ I don't have any hobbies now because I am busy with my studies at university, but when I was a child I liked drawing and painting.

Errors: missing verb 'am' after subject and incorrect noun form 'study' should be plural 'studies' or 'my study' is less natural; tense inconsistency: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use 'am' for present continuous state, 'studies' for general academic work, and past tense 'liked' for past habits.

× I think I will start my hobby again in future.

✓ I think I will start my hobby again in the future.

Error: missing definite article 'the' before 'future'. Use 'the future' for a general future time. Suggestion: Include 'the' to form the idiomatic phrase 'in the future'.

× Let me remember when I was in the primary school and the secondary school.

✓ Let me remember when I was in primary school and secondary school.

Errors: unnecessary definite articles 'the' before types of school in general statements and slightly awkward 'Let me remember'. Suggestion: Use 'in primary school and secondary school' or better 'I remember when I was in primary and secondary school.'

× I am into the painting and the drawing because it's helped me feel unright after a busy day in school.

✓ I am into painting and drawing because they help me feel better after a busy day at school.

Errors: unnecessary definite articles 'the' before uncountable activities; incorrect verb form 'it's helped' should be present 'they help' to state a habitual effect; 'unright' is not correct — use 'better'; preposition 'at school' is standard. Suggestion: Use plural/pronoun agreement and correct fixed expressions.

× I especially love drawing and painting the.

✓ I especially love drawing and painting.

Error: stray definite article 'the' at end makes sentence ungrammatical. Suggestion: Remove 'the' to complete the sentence.

× I believe that my hobbies have changed.

✓ I believe that my hobbies have changed.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. Suggestion: None.

× Uh, when I try hard I have many times so I like drawing and painting.

✓ When I tried hard many times, I liked drawing and painting.

Errors: tense mismatch and unclear phrasing. 'Try' should be past 'tried' to match 'many times' in the past; 'I have many times' is ungrammatical — use 'many times' after the verb; 'so I like' should be past 'I liked' for past habit. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense and natural word order: 'When I tried hard many times, I liked drawing and painting.'

× But now I'm kind of busy with my study so I like watching TV and listen music.

✓ But now I'm kind of busy with my studies, so I like watching TV and listening to music.

Errors: 'study' should be plural 'studies' for general academic work; parallel structure: use gerunds for both activities ('watching' and 'listening'); missing preposition 'to' after 'listening'. Suggestion: Use parallel gerunds and correct collocations: 'listening to music.'

× Honestly my parents like reading book and my younger brother like a video game sometime it's so hard to find some activity we can enjoy together but it kind of interesting because we can learn from each other.

✓ Honestly, my parents like reading books and my younger brother likes video games sometimes. It's often hard to find activities we can enjoy together, but it's kind of interesting because we can learn from each other.

Multiple errors: 'reading book' needs plural 'books' or 'reading a book'; subject-verb agreement: 'brother like' should be 'brother likes'; 'a video game' -> plural or 'playing video games'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; run-on sentence needs splitting and articles/number adjustments. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general habits, ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'sometimes', and separate sentences for clarity.