Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense or word forms (e.g., say “listening to music,” “draw new ideas”).

Exemplo: I enjoy drawing and listening to music. For example, I often sketch nature scenes when I have free time during a busy week, and I always listen to music while travelling to relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear, structured reply: state whether you had hobbies, then give a specific detail or example and use correct tenses. Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I had similar hobbies as a child. When I was at school I practised painting a lot and even won several trophies in art competitions.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but brief. Add one or two specific supporting details and a linking word to make it more informative and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy drawing, which I have done since childhood. For instance, I continue to practise sketching landscapes every weekend to improve my technique.

Sugestão: Be concise and polite; state the answer clearly and give a specific reason using linking words. Avoid filled pauses and awkward phrasing like “against my hobby.”

Exemplo: Not really. My parents and sister don't share my interest in drawing, so I usually work on my paintings by myself at home.

× Yes, my hobby is drawing and listening music.

✓ Yes, my hobbies are drawing and listening to music.

The sentence lists two hobbies so use plural 'hobbies' (subject-verb agreement). 'Listening' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object 'music'. Also use plural verb agreement 'are'. Suggestion: Say 'My hobbies are drawing and listening to music.'

× Apart from that when I was free busy free in busy week then I after that I Draw Something new ideas like nature and I listening music and I always listening music when I was travelling.

✓ Apart from that, when I am free during a busy week I draw new things inspired by nature and listen to music; I always listen to music when I am travelling.

Original has mixed tenses, repeated words, incorrect capitalization, and missing prepositions. Use present simple 'am' or 'draw' for habitual actions. Replace 'busy free in busy week' with 'free during a busy week'. Use 'listen to music' (verb + to) and maintain consistent tense: present simple for habits. Remove unnecessary repetitions. Suggestion: Break into shorter sentences and keep consistent tense for habits.

× Uh, yes, I had a similar hobbies as a, as a child.

✓ Uh, yes, I had similar hobbies as a child.

Use 'hobbies' (plural) without 'a' which is singular. 'A similar hobbies' is incorrect; remove the article 'a'. Suggestion: 'I had similar hobbies as a child.'

× However, when I, when I am, when I was school, uh, and uh, I won trophies, uh, in win trophies of painting and.

✓ However, when I was at school I won trophies for painting.

Original uses incorrect tense fragments and missing preposition 'at' with 'school'. 'Won trophies of painting' should be 'trophies for painting'. Remove filler repetitions and incomplete phrase 'and.' Suggestion: Use 'when I was at school' and 'won trophies for painting.'

× Yes, I still have the same hobbies that I had during my childhood.

✓ Yes, I still have the same hobbies that I had during my childhood.

This sentence is correct; it correctly contrasts present possession with past. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× Uh, no, not really. My parents and my sister are uh, against my hobby.

✓ Uh, no, not really. My parents and my sister are against my hobby.

Original contains extra filler 'uh,' which can be omitted for clarity. Grammatically sentence is fine after removing stutters. 'Are against my hobby' is acceptable. Suggestion: Say 'My parents and my sister are against my hobby.'

× So because it's so uh, because they, uh, they do not uh, as well draw painting.

✓ They do not draw or paint as well.

Original repeats conjunctions and pronouns and uses 'draw painting' which is redundant. Use parallel verbs 'draw or paint' and place 'as well' or 'either' appropriately: 'do not draw or paint either' or 'do not draw or paint as well.' Suggestion: 'They do not draw or paint either.'