Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: state your main hobbies directly, use correct verb forms and simple sentence structure, and avoid filler words. Mention frequency and who you do them with using linking words (e.g., 'and', 'also'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I have several hobbies. I play badminton once a week with my friends, and I read books every day with my family. I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things.

Sugestão: Use past tense for childhood activities and give a concise explanation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail and a linking word to compare past and present.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I watched cartoons and animations every day with my family. Now I still watch some shows, but I prefer reading more than watching TV.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar to express continuity (e.g., 'since' with a specific point or 'since childhood'). Provide one clear supporting detail about how the hobby continued and why. Avoid unclear phrases and filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I have loved reading since I was a child, and I still read many books every month. Reading has been a lifelong hobby because it helps me learn about different cultures and ideas.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, and explain with a specific example. If you mention a family activity, describe what it is and why you do it together. Avoid unclear or unrelated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, some of my hobbies are the same as my family’s. For example, we enjoy painting together for special occasions like my parents’ birthdays, and we also like reading and watching films as a family.

× Yes, I have half these.

✓ Yes, I have some of these.

The pronoun 'these' is used incorrectly with 'half'. 'Half these' is unnatural; likely intended meaning is 'some of these' or 'half of them'. Use 'some' or 'half of them' to refer to unspecified items. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I have some of these' or 'Yes, I have half of them.'

× My hobby is that I play with and done uh once a week and I read the books every day. With my family.

✓ My hobby is that I play games once a week, and I read books every day with my family.

This sentence has multiple structure and verb form issues. 'Play with and done' is ungrammatical; likely 'play games' and 'do' is incorrect. 'Done' is past participle used incorrectly. 'The books' should be 'books' (general activities do not need the definite article). 'With my family' should be part of the same sentence. Suggestion: use base verb forms for habitual actions ('play', 'read'), connect clauses properly with commas and conjunctions, and omit unnecessary articles when speaking about activities in general.

× Yes, I have hobby umm whenever a child I watch cartoon and animation every day with my family and now I just watch.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I watched cartoons and animations every day with my family, and now I still watch them sometimes.

The sentence mixes present and past incorrectly. 'Whenever a child' should be 'when I was a child'. Habitual past actions require past tense 'watched'. 'Cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons'. 'Now I just watch' is incomplete and needs an object or adverb ('them' or 'sometimes'). Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' for past time reference and plural nouns for repeated items; maintain consistent tense.

× Yes I have. I read a book since Cyprus. And I read more book uh, so I don't.

✓ Yes, I have. I have been reading books since I lived in Cyprus, and I read more books now, so I don't know (or 'so I don't remember').

The phrase 'I read a book since Cyprus' is ungrammatical because 'since' requires a starting point with present perfect ('have been reading') or a clear time reference. 'Read' needs to be present perfect continuous for an action continuing from the past to present. 'More book' should be plural 'more books'. The final fragment 'so I don't' is incomplete and needs an object or clause. Suggestion: use 'have been reading' with 'since' and pluralize countable nouns; complete the final thought.

× Yes I have the same hobbies with my family.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family.

The correct preposition for comparing similarity is 'as' or the structure 'the same ... as'. 'With' is incorrect in this comparison. Suggestion: use 'the same hobbies as' when comparing possession.

× Is a drop of paint the wall because my parents birthdays?

✓ Is there a drop of paint on the wall because it's my parents' birthday?

This sentence lacks the existential 'there' (There be issue) and misplaces articles and prepositions. 'Is a drop of paint the wall' is missing 'on' and the verb 'is there'. 'Parents birthdays' needs possessive apostrophe: 'parents' birthday' (if one day) or 'parents' birthdays' (if plural). Also tense and meaning are unclear. Suggestion: use 'Is there' to ask about existence, 'on the wall' for location, and possessive form for 'parents' birthday'.