Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (use 'some hobbies' or 'a few hobbies'), and limit to at most 3–4 sentences. Use linking words to list hobbies and give one reason why you prefer cooking with a specific detail. Pronunciation and fluency: practice smoother phrasing and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I have several hobbies, including cooking, reading books and listening to music. Among these, cooking is my favourite because I enjoy experimenting with new recipes and sharing meals with friends. For example, last weekend I tried a spicy chicken curry that everyone liked, which made me feel proud.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies; avoid contradictions (saying 'not at all' then recalling a hobby). Use past tense and give a specific example of a childhood activity with a reason or brief detail. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and remove hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I had hobbies as a child. I loved playing outdoors, especially football, because it helped me make friends and stay active after school.

Sugestão: State the hobby clearly and use past-to-present link (e.g., 'I have enjoyed X since childhood'). Remove filler words, correct unknown words ('Barry' unclear), and give a specific detail about your involvement (team, achievements, practice). Use 2–3 coherent sentences with linking words like 'and' or 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have played kabaddi since I was a child. I joined a local team at age ten and trained twice a week, and that experience made me more disciplined and competitive.

Sugestão: Answer directly about whether your family share hobbies. Use clear grammar (e.g., 'Yes, my cousin and I share a hobby') and provide a reason or example (study together, attend same club). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, my cousin and I enjoy the same hobbies. We both like cooking because we studied at the same school where we attended a cooking club together, so we often try new recipes on weekends.

× Yes, I have any hobbies like a cooking, uh, reading books and uh listen music because uh, uh, I love my hobbies uh, in which most uh, likely uh cooking because the cooking made me feel happy and I love cooking.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies like cooking, reading books and listening to music because I love my hobbies; most likely cooking, because cooking makes me feel happy and I love it.

Use 'some' not 'any' in affirmative sentences when mentioning hobbies (quantifier error). Remove the article 'a' before 'cooking' because here cooking is a hobby (uncountable noun). Use gerunds 'cooking', 'reading', 'listening to' for activities. Use 'listening to music' with preposition 'to'. Use present simple 'makes' to express a habitual or general truth. Simplify repetition ('I love it') for clarity.

× Uh, not at all. At all. I have any hobbies when I child, but uh, vividly remember, uh, my uh, one, uh, my hobbies in my, uh, childhood, uh, it's uh, playing.

✓ No, not really. I did not have any hobbies when I was a child, but I vividly remember one hobby from my childhood: playing.

Use 'did not have' for past negative (past tense and polarity). 'Any' is correct in negative past, but the sentence needed past tense 'was a child'. 'Hobbies' plural vs singular: 'one hobby' is singular. Replace 'it's playing' with 'playing' or 'one hobby: playing' for correct structure.

× Yes, I have a hobby that I had since childhood. It's hobby, uh, playing uh, games, uh, like uh, kabaddi because I am a Barry, uh, uh, famous player in kabaddi and I love kabaddi and kabaddi team.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby that I have had since childhood. My hobby is playing games like kabaddi because I am a fairly well-known kabaddi player and I love kabaddi and my kabaddi team.

Use present perfect 'have had since childhood' to indicate a hobby continuing from the past to present. 'It's hobby' is incorrect; use 'My hobby is'. Use 'playing games' as gerund phrase. 'Barry' is likely 'fairly'; replace with 'fairly well-known' (adjective phrase). Add 'my' before 'kabaddi team' for possession. Maintain present simple for current states.

× Yes, definitely my, uh, my cousin's sister is the same hobby as my, uh, my family member her because, uh, my cousin and me, uh, to, uh, both of going, uh, study in uh, same school and that's why I and me and my sister, cousin sister same.

✓ Yes, definitely my cousin's sister has the same hobby as my family members because my cousin and I both went to the same school, and that is why my cousin's sister and I have the same hobby.

Pronoun usage: use subject pronoun 'I' not 'me' in subject position. 'My family member her' is incorrect; use 'my family members' or 'my family member'. Use 'has' for singular 'cousin's sister'. Use past tense 'went' for completed action. Clarify possessive 'my cousin's sister' and restructure sentence for clarity and correct pronoun placement.