Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно и кратко: начните с общего утверждения, затем приведите 2–3 хобби с краткими деталями. Избегайте разговорных пауз («uh») и грамматических ошибок (например, «ride a bike» → «riding a bike»). Максимум 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy swimming and riding my bike because they keep me fit, and I also like driving to explore new places on weekends.

Sugestão: Избегайте неуверенных фраз и повторов; дайте чёткий ответ с примером. Используйте простое прошедшее время для описания детских увлечений и поясните один конкретный пример (например, как часто занимались или почему нравилось).

Exemplo: I can't remember everything clearly, but as a child I enjoyed drawing and swimming. I used to draw every day after school and went swimming with my friends at the local pool on weekends.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте связное предложение: используйте правильные времена и формы глаголов (например, «liked» для прошлого, «I have liked… since childhood» или «I have played… since childhood»). Добавьте одну-две детали о том, что вы делаете сейчас в хобби. Не повторяйте одно и то же слово без смысла.

Exemplo: Yes, I have loved football since childhood. I used to play it with my friends, and now I still play regularly and watch matches to learn new tactics.

Sugestão: Дайте полностью завершённый ответ: начните с «Yes» или «No», затем уточните, с кем у вас общие хобби и в чём это выражается. Избегайте неясных фраз и неполных предложений. Приведите пример совместного занятия и частоту встреч.

Exemplo: Yes, I share a hobby with my grandfather — we both enjoy football. We often watch matches together on weekends and sometimes play a casual game in the park.

× For example, I like swimming, uh, ride a bike, driving and that's all.

✓ For example, I like swimming, riding a bike, driving, and that's all.

The verbs after 'like' should be in the -ing form when listing activities. Use parallel structure: 'swimming, riding, driving.' Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity.

× Actually, I cannot remember where remember very well, but I think, uh, in my childhood, I like my hobby, uh, maybe swimming and driving, drawing actually.

✓ Actually, I cannot remember very well, but I think that in my childhood I liked hobbies such as swimming, driving, and drawing.

The sentence refers to the past (childhood), so the verb should be in past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like.' Also remove redundant words and fix word order for clarity.

× Yes, of course, in my childhood I like play football and nowadays I like play football and I more learn in football. I watch football and I love football.

✓ Yes, of course, in my childhood I liked playing football, and nowadays I like playing football. I am learning more about football. I watch football and I love it.

When saying 'like' followed by a verb, use the -ing form ('like playing'). For past habits use past tense 'liked.' 'I more learn in football' is ungrammatical; use 'I am learning more about football' to express ongoing improvement. Replace repeated 'football' with 'it' for naturalness.

× Yes, of course I and my grandfather like watch play, play football and we. That's all.

✓ Yes, of course my grandfather and I like watching and playing football. That's all.

The subject order is more natural as 'my grandfather and I.' After 'like' use the -ing form ('watching' and 'playing'). Remove the incomplete fragment 'and we.' Ensure parallelism in the list of verbs.