Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming your main hobbies, avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g. 'manure' is wrong here). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 short sentences). Add one specific detail about why you like cricket using a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'as').

Exemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies, but my main hobby is playing cricket. I enjoy cricket because it keeps me fit and I like the teamwork involved. I also like reading novels occasionally.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words ('for example', 'also', 'and'). Correct grammar: use past tense consistently ('I used to...'). Avoid vague phrases like 'I had many movies'.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. As a child, I used to play cricket every weekend and I also went running every morning to stay active. For example, my friends and I would practice batting after school.

Sugestão: Start directly: say which hobby you've had since childhood, then explain briefly how you practice it now. Use linking words ('and', 'so', 'now') correctly and choose natural phrases ('I have continued playing cricket').

Exemplo: Yes, I have played cricket since I was a child. I have continued playing cricket and now I train with a local club every weekend to improve my skills.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two specific comparisons using linking words ('however', 'for example'). Correct pronouns and vocabulary. Avoid confusing or irrelevant details (e.g. 'massage members', 'return', 'handwriting').

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from most of my family members. For example, I like playing cricket, while my sister prefers painting and my brother enjoys playing the guitar.

× Cortana Yes, I have many hobbies in my lifetime, but I like to play cricket and also I'm fond of manure.

✓ Yes, I have had many hobbies in my life, but I like to play cricket and I'm also fond of music.

The original sentence has several issues: incorrect pronoun/noun choice 'manure' (wrong word) and awkward tense 'in my lifetime'. Use 'in my life' or 'have had' for life experience. Also move 'also' for natural order. Suggest replacing 'manure' with likely 'music' based on context and using present perfect 'have had' for experiences up to now.

× Yes, in which I do. I had many movies like I I used to play cricket and also I used to go to running in the morning.

✓ Yes, I did. I watched many movies, and I used to play cricket and go running in the morning.

'Yes, in which I do' is incoherent; use 'Yes, I did.' 'I had many movies' is incorrect verb and article use; say 'I watched many movies.' 'Used to go to running' has incorrect preposition and gerund; use 'go running' or 'used to run.' Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity.

× Like I said more, I am fond of cricket, so that hobby is my childhood and now I also make it work.

✓ As I said, I am fond of cricket; it has been my hobby since childhood and I still enjoy it now.

'Like I said more' is ungrammatical; use 'As I said.' 'That hobby is my childhood' is incorrect expression — use 'has been my hobby since childhood.' 'Make it work' is incorrect collocation for continuing a hobby; use 'I still enjoy it' or 'I still pursue it.' Keep present perfect 'has been' for continuing state.

× No, no massage members there are not same hobbies to meet people.

✓ No, my family members do not have the same hobbies as me.

Original sentence has many wrong words and word order. 'Massage' is wrong for 'family' or 'my'; 'there are not same hobbies to meet people' is ungrammatical. Use subject 'my family members' and structure 'do not have the same hobbies as me' for comparison.

× All my family members are different hobbies to me.

✓ All my family members have different hobbies from mine.

'Are different hobbies to me' is incorrect; use 'have different hobbies from mine' or 'different hobbies than me.' Correct verb 'have' and possessive 'mine.'

× That is one of my sister like to return because his handwriting is best and apart from that he's she's playing cricket.

✓ For example, one of my sisters likes drawing because her handwriting is the best, and she also plays cricket.

Multiple pronoun and agreement errors: 'That is one of my sister' should be 'one of my sisters.' 'Like to return' likely intended 'likes drawing' or another hobby; choose plausible 'drawing.' Pronoun 'his' should be 'her' to agree with 'sister.' 'He's she's' is mixed; use 'she also plays cricket.' Ensure subject-verb agreement 'sister likes.'