Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: use one clear topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., “meeting friends” not “meeting meet friends”). Vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., ‘relax’ → ‘unwind’).

Exemplo: I have a few hobbies: reading, playing sports and cycling. Reading helps me unwind after a busy day, and I play sports to stay fit and social because I often meet friends for matches.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and clearer sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific details with linking words and avoid repetition/hesitations. Correct grammar: ‘was’ → ‘were’? actually subject-verb: ‘My favorite hobby when I was a child was playing football.’ Clarify frequency and who you played with.

Exemplo: My favorite hobby as a child was playing football. In fact, I trained for about four hours each day, and I usually played with my friends every Monday after school.

Sugestão: Organize into one clear sentence then support with specific details. Remove hesitations and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘non-fiction’ or ‘life stories’ instead of unclear phrase). Use linking words like ‘and’ or ‘especially’.

Exemplo: Yes. I have enjoyed reading since childhood and I still read about two hours a day. I read a variety of books, especially non-fiction about everyday life and personal development.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and a reason or example. Fix pronunciation/writing errors (‘hub’ → ‘hobby’), grammar (subject-verb agreement), and avoid redundant words. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’ properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I share at least one hobby with my family: football. My father plays regularly, so we often play together on weekends, which makes it a shared family activity.

× I have a few hobbies, reading, uh, playing sports and cycling. I especially enjoy reading because it's helped me relax and I play sports to stay fit and meeting uh meet friends.

✓ I have a few hobbies: reading, playing sports and cycling. I especially enjoy reading because it helps me relax. I play sports to stay fit and to meet friends.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments and mixed verb forms. 'It's helped me relax' incorrectly uses present perfect; present simple 'it helps me relax' fits general habit. 'meeting uh meet friends' is ungrammatical; use infinitive 'to meet friends' to express purpose. Also separate into clearer sentences and use a colon to list hobbies for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present simple) for habits and use 'to' + base verb for purpose. Grammar problem type ID:6 | 26 | 8 | 9 | 27

× My favorite hobbies when I was a child is playing football. Uh, I, I was playing for around 4 hours every day and uh, I enjoy playing with my friends. Uh, we and he always play, uh, every uh, Monday.

✓ My favorite hobby when I was a child was playing football. I played for about four hours every day and I enjoyed playing with my friends. We always played together on Mondays.

'Hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' because one favorite; subject-verb agreement requires past tense 'was' (childhood). Use simple past 'played' for past habits rather than 'was playing' which suggests continuous action; 'I enjoy' should be past 'I enjoyed' to match timeframe. 'We and he always play' is awkward and unclear; use 'We always played together' and specify 'on Mondays' for time expression. Suggestion: use simple past for repeated past actions and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:1 | 5 | 26 | 27

× Yes, uh, reading books is my hobby, uh, when I was a child until now and I read a book every day, uh, for around, uh, two hours. Uh, I read different, uh, different type of books, but especially, uh, who's these books of, uh, uh, daily life.

✓ Yes, reading books has been my hobby since I was a child and I read a book every day for about two hours. I read different types of books, but especially books about daily life.

Use present perfect 'has been' to express a hobby that started in the past and continues now. 'When I was a child until now' is awkward; replace with 'since I was a child'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. 'Who's these books of' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'books about daily life'. Suggestion: use present perfect for continuing actions and cleaner phrases like 'books about' for topics. Grammar problem type ID:6 | 26 | 13 | 11

× Yes, my hub is the same as football, uh, because my father always, always play football and me also, uh, so we are on the same way with the hobbies this.

✓ Yes, my hobby is the same: football, because my father always plays football and I do too, so we have the same hobby.

Many issues: 'hub' is wrong word; use 'hobby'. 'My hobby is the same as football' is incorrect structure — say 'my hobby is the same: football' or 'my hobby is football'. 'My father always, always play' requires third-person singular 'plays'. 'Me also' should be 'I do too'. 'We are on the same way with the hobbies this' is unidiomatic; use 'we have the same hobby'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'hobby', ensure subject-verb agreement for third person, and use 'I do too' for agreement. Grammar problem type ID:13 | 12 | 27 | 22 | 26