Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your main hobby, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (why you enjoy it and when you do it). Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and replace vague phrases with concrete reasons. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding detail (e.g., because, so).

Exemplo: I enjoy several hobbies, but my favourite is listening to music. I listen to upbeat songs because they lift my mood and help me relax after a long day.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past tense for childhood. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did). Give one clear supporting detail about the childhood hobby (what type of dancing and why) and then briefly state how your hobby changed, using a linking word like 'but' or 'however.' Avoid hesitation fillers and repeated words.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I loved dancing, especially folk and pop styles, because it let me express myself. However, as I grew older I started to prefer listening to music more than dancing.

Sugestão: Give a direct yes/no and explain briefly. Use correct tense and sentence structure: say whether a hobby has continued since childhood, then give a concise reason and an example (when you use the hobby). Use linking words like 'so' or 'now' to show change. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a hobby that I've kept since childhood. I used to dance as a child, but now I mainly listen to music to relax when I feel stressed.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and politely. Say whether your hobbies match and then compare briefly with a specific example of your family's interests. Avoid unclear phrases and cultural terms that may be misunderstood; use simple descriptions (e.g., older generation prefer traditional activities). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'while' or 'whereas.'

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. While my parents prefer traditional activities such as religious ceremonies and home gatherings, I enjoy listening to music and travelling.

× Yes I do I have the many hobbies but I one of my best hobby is listening music.

✓ Yes, I do. I have many hobbies, but one of my best hobbies is listening to music.

The errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'many hobbies' (Article errors), missing plural form 'hobbies' for 'one of my best hobbies' (Singular and plural issue), and missing preposition 'to' after 'listening' (Verb + -ing form). Correction uses no 'the', plural 'hobbies', and 'listening to music' which is the correct verb + preposition combination. Suggested improvement: remove 'the' before general plural nouns, ensure noun forms agree in number, and use 'listening to' when referring to music.

× It's give me the give me feel, city likes and happy.

✓ It gives me a feeling of calmness and happiness.

Original has wrong verb form 'give' (third person singular issue) and awkward noun phrases. Use 'gives' for third person singular subject (it), include an article 'a' before 'feeling', and choose appropriate nouns 'calmness and happiness'. Suggested improvement: match verb forms to subjects, use articles with singular countable nouns, and prefer clear emotion words.

× I always prefer to everyone to happy music it's always best for us.

✓ I always prefer happy music for everyone; it's always best for us.

Problems: incorrect verb 'prefer to everyone to' and missing preposition (Incorrect use of pronouns/structure). Use 'prefer X for Y' or 'prefer X to Y'. Also add a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggested improvement: use correct verb patterns: 'prefer something for someone' or 'prefer A to B' and separate clauses for clarity.

× Uh, yes, I, I have, uh, when I was a child, I'm always a dance lover because dance is my fashion.

✓ Uh, yes. When I was a child, I was always a dance lover because dancing was my passion.

Mixing present 'I'm always' with past context 'when I was a child' (Tense issue). Also 'dance is my fashion' is incorrect word choice; use 'dancing was my passion' and change 'dance lover' to 'I loved dancing' or 'I was a dance enthusiast'. Suggested improvement: keep past tense throughout when talking about childhood and use natural collocations like 'love dancing' or 'was passionate about dancing'.

× Sometimes when I get get over, then my hobbies are also changed.

✓ Sometimes when I grew older, my hobbies changed.

Phrase 'get get over' is incorrect; intended meaning likely 'grew older' (past tense). Use past simple 'changed' to match timeframe. Suggested improvement: use clear time phrases like 'as I grew older' and maintain past tense for past events.

× So that's why I'm recently love. Uh, I recently love is listening.

✓ So recently I have come to love listening to music.

Incorrect tense and word order: 'I'm recently love' mixes present continuous with stative verb; use present perfect 'have come to love' to show a recent change. Also need 'listening to music' with preposition. Suggested improvement: use 'have come to' for recent changes and 'listening to' with the object 'music'.

× No, this time is I love me, uh, listening music when I'm stressed and I feel, I'm listening music that my, uh, I feel relaxed and happy when I was the child that, uh, that was my dancing.

✓ No. Nowadays I love listening to music when I'm stressed; when I listen to music I feel relaxed and happy. When I was a child, my hobby was dancing.

Many tense and structure errors: 'this time is I love me' incorrect word order; missing 'to' after 'listening'; run-on sentences and mixed tenses. Separate present habit (nowadays) from past habit (when I was a child) and use correct forms: 'I love listening to music' and 'my hobby was dancing'. Suggested improvement: split ideas into clear sentences, use 'nowadays' for current habits, and 'when I was a child' with past tense.

× No, my family members are like a old, old generation type.

✓ No. My family members belong to an older generation.

Awkward phrasing 'are like a old, old generation type' and article error 'a old' (should be 'an older'). Use natural expression 'belong to an older generation' or 'are from an older generation'. Suggested improvement: use 'older generation' and correct articles ('an older').

× So yeah, they are always like Sanskriti calls her lover.

✓ So yeah, they always prefer traditional culture.

Original 'Sanskriti calls her lover' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'they prefer Sanskriti' (culture) or 'they like traditional culture'. Use 'prefer traditional culture' for clarity. Suggested improvement: choose accurate vocabulary and simple structures: 'they prefer traditional culture'.

× But I love me listening, music, traveling, whole world so.

✓ But I love listening to music and traveling around the world.

Incorrect pronoun 'I love me listening' and missing 'to' after 'listening'; awkward 'whole world so'. Correct phrase is 'traveling around the world'. Suggested improvement: use 'I love listening to music' and 'traveling around the world' and avoid redundant pronouns like 'me' after 'I love'.