Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and grammatical: state the hobby clearly, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, avoid repetition and fillers. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, say when you watch them and mention a specific film or director to add detail.

Exemplo: I enjoy watching old films, especially those from the 1950s, because their slower pace helps me relax. For example, I like classic comedies by Billy Wilder, which calm me after a stressful day. I usually watch them in the evening to unwind.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, avoid repetition, and add a short reason or memory to make the answer specific. Use a linking word to connect cause and effect.

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child I enjoyed playing badminton because my parents played and encouraged me to join them. As a result, I learned basic skills early and liked the exercise and friendly competition.

Sugestão: This answer is clear and relevant but can be tightened and varied slightly: avoid repeating "because", add a brief example of what you draw and when you draw to add concreteness and natural flow with a linking phrase.

Exemplo: Yes, I have drawn since childhood. I sketch animals and landscapes, which stimulates my creativity and relaxes me; for example, I often draw local birds during weekend park visits.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and more fluent: state the contrast clearly, use linking words like "however" or "instead", and give a brief detail about how you pursue your hobby alone to make the answer specific.

Exemplo: No, my family don't share my interest in drawing. Instead, they prefer outdoor activities such as hiking and fishing, so I usually draw at home on my own, often in the evenings when it's quiet.

× My hobby is watching old movies especially 1950s because it has a slow paced, uh slow paced so it helps me more relax and calm.

✓ My hobby is watching old movies, especially those from the 1950s, because they are slow-paced and help me relax and feel calm.

Error: article and noun reference with decades and incorrect singular/plural agreement. Use 'the 1950s' or 'those from the 1950s' and match plural 'movies' with plural pronoun 'they'. Also 'slow paced' should be hyphenated as 'slow-paced' when used as a compound adjective. Remove unnecessary filler words and reorder to natural English. Suggestion: refer to decades with 'the' and keep subject-pronoun agreement, hyphenate compound adjectives.

× So I when I was stressful umm I watching this I watched this it helps me.

✓ So when I am stressed, I watch these movies and they help me.

Error: incorrect tense and verb forms. Use present simple 'I watch' for habitual action and 'I am stressed' (adjective) rather than 'I was stressful'. Also 'this' should match plural 'movies' => 'these movies' and pronoun agreement 'they help me'. Suggestion: use 'stressed' for state and present simple for habitual actions.

× Uh, when I were a child and when I was a child, I had enjoy, uh, and I had enjoy playing, uh, badminton because it, uh, because my parents have it.

✓ When I was a child, I used to enjoy playing badminton because my parents had a badminton set.

Errors: 'were' is wrong for first person singular; use 'was'. 'I had enjoy' is ungrammatical — use 'used to enjoy' or 'enjoyed'. 'My parents have it' should be past tense 'had' to match the timeframe and be specific: 'had a badminton set'. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' and 'used to' or past simple for habitual past actions, and keep tense consistent.

× So I follow them. I follow them, yeah, I enjoy the exercise.

✓ So I followed them and enjoyed the exercise.

Errors: repetition and tense inconsistency. 'I follow them' in present conflicts with past context; use past 'followed'. Combine sentences for clarity and use past tense 'enjoyed' to match the childhood timeframe. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I have had a hobby of drawing since I was a child because I enjoy sketching everything from animals to landscape because it stimulates my creativity and helps me relax.

✓ I have had a hobby of drawing since I was a child because I enjoy sketching everything from animals to landscapes; it stimulates my creativity and helps me relax.

Minor errors: 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'animals' and generalize, and sentence flow improves with a semicolon or splitting into two sentences. Tenses are correct (present perfect for duration and present simple for general truths). Suggestion: use plural nouns for parallel lists and improve punctuation for clarity.

× No, my family members are interest are not interested in drawing.

✓ No, my family members are not interested in drawing.

Error: incorrect word forms and duplication. 'Are interest' is wrong; use 'are not interested'. Remove the duplicate phrase. Suggestion: use the adjective 'interested' with 'be' to describe feelings or attitudes.

× They prefer to do outdoor activities like hiking or fishing. So yeah, I usually draw draw my by myself at home.

✓ They prefer outdoor activities like hiking or fishing. So yeah, I usually draw by myself at home.

Errors: 'draw draw my by myself' contains repetition and incorrect word order. Correct phrase is 'draw by myself' or 'draw on my own'. Also 'prefer to do outdoor activities' is acceptable but 'prefer outdoor activities' is more natural. Suggestion: remove repetition and use correct prepositional phrase 'by myself' or 'on my own'.