Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更自然、语法正确并完整表达原因。注意时态和单复数，用连接词使句子连贯，避免句子残缺。可以先给出主题句，再用一两句具体细节补充（如练习频率、带来的具体好处）。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy practising yoga. I do it three times a week because it helps improve my flexibility and reduces stress. As a result, I feel calmer and more energetic during the day.

Sugestão: 注意时态一致（描述过去用过去式），避免重复表达并用连接词提高连贯性。可以具体说明喜欢的书籍类型或读书时的环境。

Exemplo: Yes, I loved reading when I was a child. After finishing my homework I often read by myself in my bedroom, mainly adventure and fairy-tale books, which made me feel peaceful and safe.

Sugestão: 句子要统一时态并更自然表达经历和感受。使用连接词（for example, so, because）并给出具体细节（频率、路线、记忆）会更好。避免笼统的‘it's interesting’而是说明为何有趣。

Exemplo: Yes, cycling is a hobby I've had since childhood. I used to ride my bike to school every day, and I enjoyed watching how the streets and neighbourhoods changed, which made my commute feel more enjoyable and lively.

Sugestão: 表达要更简洁、语法正确，避免多余词汇。先给出主题句，再用一两句具体细节说明大家如何一起做（谁做什么、多久一次、喜欢做什么菜）。

Exemplo: Yes, my family and I share a love of food. We often cook meals together at weekends, trying new recipes or making traditional dishes, and we enjoy having homemade dinners as a family.

× Yoga can not only build a few bodies and can give you a healthy and peaceful emotions or mood.

✓ Yoga can not only help build your body, but also give you a healthy and peaceful mood.

原句中用詞和數量錯誤："build a few bodies" 不自然，應為幫助強壯或塑造身體；"a healthy and peaceful emotions or mood" 混合單複數且冗餘。建議使用 "help build your body" 或 "improve your fitness"，並將情緒統一為單數名詞 "mood"。此外使用連詞 "not only... but also..." 可使句子更流暢。

× It will make you feel.

✓ It will make you feel relaxed and peaceful.

原句不完整，僅有 "make you feel" 但未說明感受，造成語意不完整。建議在後面加上具體形容詞，例如 "relaxed and peaceful"，使句子完整且語義明確。

× When I was a child, I like to read a book on my own.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to read books on my own.

時間狀語為過去 "When I was a child"，主句應使用過去時態。原句使用現在時 "like" 與時間不一致；另外 "a book" 改為複數 "books" 更自然表達經常性行為。

× When I finish my homework, I like to read a book at my own room and make me feel peaceful and secure.

✓ After I finished my homework, I liked to read in my own room, which made me feel peaceful and secure.

句中時間為過去習慣，應使用過去時態（finished, liked, made）。"at my own room" 是不正確的介詞搭配，應為 "in my own room" 或簡化為 "in my room"。使用關係代詞 "which" 使從句更通順，表達出閱讀帶來的感受。

× I always like riding a bike to school since I was a child.

✓ I have always liked riding a bike to school since I was a child.

句中 "since I was a child" 表示從過去持續到現在，需用現在完成式 "have always liked" 來表示持續的狀態。原句使用一般現在 "like" 與 since 的時間點不匹配。

× It's interesting when you are on a bike you can see the changes of the roads and the people on the side.

✓ It's interesting: when you are on a bike, you can see how the roads and the people by the roadside change.

原句缺少標點或連詞使結構不清晰，且 "the people on the side" 不自然，應為 "people by the roadside" 或 "people along the way"。此外用 "how... change" 更自然表達觀察到的變化。

× I think the same hobby my family shares is could be we all love food.

✓ I think the hobby my family shares is that we all love food.

原句語序混亂且重複助動詞 "is could be" 不合語法。改為 "is that..." 用以引導名詞子句，表達家庭共同的愛好。

× We like to cook that together and having a homemade dinner.

✓ We like to cook together and have homemade dinners.

原句中動詞形式不一致："like to cook" 與後半句使用現在分詞 "having" 造成並列不平行。將兩個動作統一為不定式或原形動詞（cook ... and have ...）更自然。另 "a homemade dinner" 改為複數 "homemade dinners" 更符合習慣性活動表達。

× We enjoy food.

✓ We enjoy food.

此句本身語法正確，但在語篇中可以保留或與前句合併以避免重複，如 "We enjoy food and cooking together." 若單獨使用亦無錯誤。