Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 話し方をより流暢で簡潔にし、語順と文法を正確に整えること。具体的には、フィラー（uh, umm）を減らし、主語と動詞の一致を確認し、1〜2文で要点を述べた後に1文で理由を添える練習をすること。例文を音読して自然なリズムを身につけ、'psychology'や'understand'などの発音と形を正しく使うように意識してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy several hobbies, especially reading psychology books. They help me understand people's behaviour better, so I often read to learn about human nature.

Sugestão: 過去形で一貫して話す練習をしてください（例：liked, made）。不要な言い直し（"It's very it was very"）を避け、文を整理して理由や結果を簡潔に示すこと。具体的には、過去の出来事を時系列で2〜3文にまとめ、語尾の一致（it made me）と冠詞・複数形を確認しましょう。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I liked singing and took part in competitions at large school festivals. Participating in them made me more confident on stage and I enjoyed the experience.

Sugestão: 文法（継続を表す現在完了形の使い方）と三人称単数の一致（help→helps）を確認してください。重複表現（'all the time I love'）を避け、理路整然と一貫した2〜3文で述べる練習を。接続詞（because, so）を用いて理由を明確にするとよいです。

Exemplo: Yes, I've enjoyed reading since childhood. I often read in my free time because it helps me relax and learn new things.

Sugestão: 語順と語法を改善し、複数形・不定冠詞の使い方を確認すること（a same hobbies → the same hobby/hobbies）。文を分けて明確にし、現在形の習慣表現を使う（we jog or play badminton every weekend）。フィラーを減らし、語彙（sporting→sports）を文脈に合わせて選んでください。

Exemplo: Yes, we share similar hobbies. We enjoy sports as a family, and every weekend we either go jogging or play badminton together.

× I like reading, just like reading psychological books.

✓ I like reading, especially psychological books.

The original repeats 'reading' and uses an awkward phrase 'just like reading psychological books.' Replace with 'especially' to express preference clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use present simple 'like' to state a habitual preference.

× It can make me, uh, more understand, umm, people's behavior.

✓ It can help me better understand people's behavior.

'More understand' is incorrect; English uses 'understand' with an adverb such as 'better' or the structure 'help me to understand.' Use 'help me better understand' or 'help me to understand better' for correct adverb placement and natural phrasing.

× It's uh.

✓ It helps me a lot.

'It's uh.' is an incomplete utterance without clear meaning. Provide a complete sentence that conveys the intended idea, e.g., 'It helps me a lot.' This fixes sentence fragment and gives the examiner useful information.

× When I was a child, I remember that I like singing.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that I liked singing.

The recollection refers to the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like.' Use past tense consistently when describing past habits.

× I even took part in singing competitions at a large school festival.

✓ I even took part in singing competitions at a large school festival.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed. It is kept to indicate no change is required.

× It make me gain confidence on stage.

✓ It made me gain confidence on stage.

The verb must agree with the past context. Use past tense 'made' to match 'took part' and the time frame 'When I was a child.' Also 'on stage' is acceptable; no change needed there.

× It's very it was very interesting, right?

✓ It was very interesting, right?

The original mixes present and past ('It's very it was very'). Choose past 'It was very interesting' to match the recalled event and remove the duplicated phrase.

× Yes maybe reading.

✓ Yes, maybe reading.

Add a comma for natural pause. The phrase is acceptable as a short spoken answer; no major grammatical change beyond punctuation is needed.

× Reading has been my hobby since childhood.

✓ Reading has been my hobby since childhood.

This sentence is correct as written: present perfect 'has been' appropriately expresses an action continuing from the past to the present.

× I always reading in my free time because it help me relax and learn new things all the time I love.

✓ I am always reading in my free time because it helps me relax and learn new things; I love it.

The original lacks auxiliary 'am' for continuous tense 'am always reading' and uses incorrect verb form 'help' instead of 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). Also the final fragment 'I love' should be completed as 'I love it.' Use a semicolon or period to separate ideas for clarity.

× OK yes we have uh, a same hobbies that is uh, sporting umm at uh every weekend we jogging or play badminton with family.

✓ OK, yes. We have the same hobby: we play sports every weekend; we go jogging or play badminton with my family.

Multiple issues: 'a same hobbies' is wrong number and article—use 'the same hobby' (singular) or 'the same hobbies' without 'a.' 'Sporting' is awkward; use 'play sports.' Add 'go' before 'jogging' for correct verb usage and 'with my family' for a natural possessive. Punctuation and sentence splitting improve clarity.