Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng dùng sai (ví dụ “happy” thay vì “hobbies”), câu lặp lại và thiếu liên kết logic. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, nêu vài sở thích cụ thể (mỗi sở thích một cụm từ), dùng liên từ để nối nếu cần, và giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu. Chú ý thì động từ và danh từ (have hobbies, read books, watch TV, sing) và sửa các cấu trúc như “Singing is my very good hobby for me.”

Exemplo: I have several hobbies, such as reading books, watching TV and singing. Singing is my favourite because it helps me relax and express myself. I usually sing at home or with friends when I have free time.

Sugestão: Nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp về thì (sử dụng thì hiện tại thay cho quá khứ), động từ (I singing), danh từ sai (music texts? brides?) và câu thiếu rõ nghĩa. Trả lời quá lộn xộn; nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn để mô tả thói quen trong quá khứ, nêu cụ thể hoạt động bạn tham gia và kết quả/ảnh hưởng. Sử dụng liên từ (and, so, because) để nối ý. Giữ 2-3 câu súc tích.

Exemplo: When I was a child, my main hobby was singing and I practised every day. I often took part in school concerts and local competitions, which helped me gain performance experience.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời lặp từ, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu hỏi tu từ không cần thiết. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: yes/no + hobby and duration. Dùng thì hiện hoàn thành (have had) để nhấn kéo dài đến hiện tại, sau đó đưa ví dụ cụ thể (practice routine, performances) và kết luận ngắn về lợi ích. Tránh lặp từ như “singing sing” và sửa cấu trúc như “this helping help me a lot in the life.”

Exemplo: Yes, I have had a hobby of singing since I was a child. I practise every day and regularly perform at school events, which has helped me become more confident and improved my communication skills.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý rõ nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp yếu (số ít/những, thì, mạo từ, trật tự từ). Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, mô tả thói quen chung (when/how often), nêu cảm nhận ngắn gọn và lí do cụ thể. Sử dụng tính từ phù hợp (helpful, enjoyable) và tránh lặp từ như “every every”. Giữ 2-3 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, my family and I share hobbies like watching TV and reading books on weekends. We usually spend Sunday evenings together watching programmes or reading, which is relaxing and helps us bond.

× I have many happy such as reading a book, watching TV and the good hobby is singing.

✓ I have many hobbies such as reading books, watching TV, and my favorite hobby is singing.

The sentence misuses 'happy' instead of the noun 'hobbies' and uses 'the good hobby' awkwardly. Use the noun 'hobbies' (plural) and 'favorite' as the adjective to describe the preferred hobby. Also pluralize 'book' to 'books' to match 'reading' as a general activity. Suggestion: use nouns for activities and appropriate adjectives (favorite) to describe preference.

× Singing is my very good hobby for me.

✓ Singing is a very good hobby for me.

The phrase 'my very good hobby for me' is redundant and uses the possessive 'my' unnecessarily with 'for me.' Use the indefinite article 'a' and 'for me' or 'to me' but not both redundantly. Also place 'very' before 'good' as an adverb modifying the adjective.

× When I was a child, my biggest hobby is singing.

✓ When I was a child, my biggest hobby was singing.

The time clause 'When I was a child' sets the past context, so the verb must be past tense 'was' not present 'is.' Maintain consistent past tense for actions or states in that timeframe.

× I singing every day and I take part in many music concerts, many music texts.

✓ I sang every day and took part in many music concerts and music contests.

The original mixes verb forms and has incorrect nouns. In past context, use past tense verbs 'sang' and 'took part.' 'Music texts' is incorrect; likely meant 'music contests' or 'competitions.' Ensure parallel structure with 'and' between activities.

× So I have so many brides in this my hobby.

✓ So I had many successes in this hobby.

'Brides' is incorrect here; likely a wrong word choice. In past context, use 'had' and replace with appropriate noun such as 'successes' or 'achievements.' Also remove awkward 'this my hobby' and use 'this hobby.'

× My the hobby I have had since I try who is singing?

✓ The hobby I have had since I was young is singing.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'The hobby I have had since I was young' to indicate duration. 'Try who' is incorrect; replace with a proper time expression like 'since I was young' or 'since childhood.' Maintain correct word order.

× I really love singing sing.

✓ I really love singing.

Repeated verbs 'singing sing' are redundant. Use one form: 'singing' (gerund) after 'love' to indicate enjoyment of the activity.

× I practice singing every day and I perform in the school events which help me become more confident and this helping help me a lot in the life.

✓ I practice singing every day and perform at school events, which help me become more confident and help me a lot in life.

Use 'perform at' school events (correct preposition). Remove 'the' before 'school events' unless specific. Change 'which help' to match plural 'events.' Replace awkward 'this helping help me a lot in the life' with 'help me a lot in life.' Ensure parallel verbs and concise phrasing.

× My family have the same hobby as watching TV and reading a book every weekend.

✓ My family have the same hobbies, such as watching TV and reading books, every weekend.

Depending on dialect, 'family' can be collective; to avoid disagreement, keep 'family' + 'have' (British) or use 'family members have.' Also 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because more than one activity is listed; 'a book' should be 'books' for general activity. Suggest consistent plurality.

× If everyone have a free time every every member in my family always watching TV together or reading a book together, I think it's a very help, happy and useful for all the members in my family.

✓ If everyone has free time, every member of my family always watches TV together or reads books together. I think it's very helpful, enjoyable, and useful for all the members of my family.

Use 'has' with singular 'everyone.' Use proper subject-verb agreement: 'every member ... always watches' and 'reads.' Remove duplicated 'every.' Use 'free time' without article. Replace 'a very help, happy and useful' with adjectives 'helpful, enjoyable, and useful' and adjust word order. Use 'members of my family' instead of 'in my family.'