Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear adjectives. Also correct basic grammar (articles, verb forms) and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., “challenging” instead of “thoughtable”).

Exemplo: I enjoy playing snooker. I play regularly at a local club with my friends, and I find the game challenging because it requires concentration and precise cue control. Because of that, it helps me relax and improve my focus.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about your childhood hobby, then add specific details (who, where, why you liked it) using linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., “I played football with my friends and cousins at the local field near my house”). Avoid vague phrases like “some messages.”

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I used to play football with my friends and cousins at the local field near my house. We practiced together every weekend, which helped me develop teamwork and basic tactical skills.

Sugestão: Provide one clear, grammatically correct sentence stating whether you still have that hobby, followed by one concise supporting detail explaining continuity (how often, what changed). Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I have continued playing football since childhood. I still play with a local amateur team every weekend, so it remains an important part of my routine.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Explain one or two differences with correct vocabulary (e.g., “snooker” not “smoker”) and simple grammar. Use linking words like “however” or “but” to show contrast. Avoid confusing or unrelated phrases.

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For example, I enjoy playing snooker and running, but most of my family prefer watching football on TV rather than playing sports.

× Yes, I have hobby of playing snooker.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby of playing snooker.

Missing article 'a' before countable noun 'hobby'. Use 'a hobby' for a single, countable interest.

× I play in local club with my friends.

✓ I play at a local club with my friends.

Use preposition 'at' with 'club' to indicate location; also add article 'a' before 'local club'.

× Snooker is my favorite game I like very much.

✓ Snooker is my favorite game; I like it very much.

Run-on sentence missing connector or pronoun. Insert a semicolon or conjunction and the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'snooker'.

× This game is very thoughtable and understandable game.

✓ This game is very thoughtful and easy to understand.

'Thoughtable' is not a correct adjective; use 'thoughtful' or better 'requires thought'. 'Understandable' is fine but repeat of 'game' is unnecessary; restructure to 'easy to understand'.

× It is very.

✓ It is very interesting.

Sentence fragment; 'very' needs an adjective to complete the meaning. Provide an appropriate adjective like 'interesting'.

× Some messages when I was little.

✓ I had some hobbies when I was little.

Original is unclear and lacks grammatical subject and verb relating to hobbies. Replace 'messages' with 'hobbies' and add verb 'had'.

× I play football with my friends and and cousins.

✓ I played football with my friends and cousins.

Talking about past habit 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'played'. Also remove duplicate 'and'.

× I play local ground in near my house.

✓ I played on the local ground near my house.

Use 'on the local ground' or 'at the local ground' and place 'near my house' after it; use past tense for childhood actions.

× It is very skillful and strategic.

✓ It is a skillful and strategic sport.

Add article 'a' and use 'sport' to make the sentence natural; 'skillful' describes players, but 'skillful and strategic' as adjectives for a sport are acceptable when phrased this way.

× Yes, of course I play football this time also my teenage childhood and I am playing football also this time.

✓ Yes, of course. I have played football since my teenage years and I still play football now.

Original mixes tenses and is unclear. Use present perfect 'have played since' to show continuity from past to present and state present activity 'still play' or 'I still play'.

× No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family's bazaar.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family.

'Family's bazaar' is incorrect and makes no sense. Use 'my family' to compare hobbies; remove unnecessary possessive.

× I have running smoker, my family does not make smoker and he's not lying soccer.

✓ I enjoy running and smoking; my family does not smoke and they are not interested in soccer.

Original is confused: 'running smoker' is unclear. Separate activities 'running' and 'smoking' if intended. Use 'my family does not smoke' and 'they are not interested in soccer' for clarity and correct pronoun agreement.

× My family views are not like smokers.

✓ My family's views are not supportive of smoking.

Awkward phrasing. Use possessive 'family's views' and 'not supportive of smoking' to convey disapproval. Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper noun phrase.