Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and structured: give a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, use correct tense and articles, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words (for example, "I enjoy ..., because ..." or "I keep them ... and sometimes ..."). Also correct grammar: say "I keep them in the corner of my room or on the balcony" and avoid future-tense if you mean current habit.

Exemplo: I enjoy taking care of plants. I have bought many varieties and keep them in the corner of my room and sometimes on the balcony. They brighten my space and I like watering and pruning them twice a week.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement, reduce repetition, and give a specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "when" or "so" correctly and correct grammar (e.g. "I used to play every afternoon after school"). Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes. I used to play outside every afternoon after school. My friends and I often played football in the park, which helped me stay active and make friends.

Sugestão: Organize into a clear topic sentence about continuity, use correct verb forms and articles, and provide specific details about how the hobby continues (activities, frequency, sources of plants). Remove fillers and unclear phrases. Use linking words like "since" and "so" or "and" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed gardening since I was a child. Today I still tend a small garden at home: I water and prune the plants twice a week and buy new varieties online or from a local nursery. Gardening relaxes me and lets me try growing different species.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer (yes/no) and explain with one or two specific details. Correct grammar and vocabulary (for example, "Yes, my family also likes plants"), avoid unclear words like "Roku" unless you mean something specific, and use linking phrases such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, my family shares my interest in plants. They enjoy gardening too and often help me care for the plants or give me new ones as gifts, which makes maintaining the garden easier.

× Yes I do, I love to take care of plants so I bought lots of plants and it will keep in my room corner, sometimes balcony.

✓ Yes, I do. I love taking care of plants, so I bought a lot of plants and keep them in the corner of my room or on the balcony sometimes.

Use 'love taking' (verb + -ing) rather than 'love to take' for natural preference; 'bought' (past) conflicts with present habit—use present simple 'bought' can remain if referring to a past purchase but maintain present 'keep' as 'keep them' for location; 'lots of' is informal—use 'a lot of'; use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'plants'; punctuation and article 'the corner' needed for clarity.

× Yes, for now I was just I love to play so I play in every afternoon time when my school was in.

✓ When I was a child, I loved to play, so I used to play every afternoon when I was at school.

The sentence mixes present and past. Use past tense 'loved' and 'used to play' or 'played' to describe habitual past actions; 'in every afternoon time' is unidiomatic—use 'every afternoon'; 'when my school was in' is incorrect—use 'when I was at school'.

× I have a hobby to making a garden when I was a child, but currently I have a small garden.

✓ I had a hobby of making a garden when I was a child, and currently I have a small garden.

'Hobby to making' is incorrect; use 'hobby of making' or 'used to make'; tense should be past 'had' for childhood hobby; connect ideas with 'and' rather than 'but' because both are true.

× I taking care of them even uh I brought a lots of new type of plants.

✓ I take care of them. I also bought a lot of new types of plants.

'I taking' lacks auxiliary—use 'I take care' (present simple) to describe a habitual action; 'brought' is past tense but acceptable if referring to past purchase—'bought' preferred; 'a lots of' is incorrect—use 'a lot of' or 'many'; 'new type of plants' should be 'new types of plants' or 'new varieties of plants'.

× Sometimes I already eat but online and sometimes I visit a nursery and I got them.

✓ Sometimes I buy plants online, and sometimes I visit a nursery and get them.

'I already eat' is wrong verb—should be 'I buy' regarding purchasing plants; tense consistency: use present simple 'buy' and 'get' for habitual actions; 'got' is past—use 'get' to match 'sometimes' habitual; clarify meaning: 'buy online' and 'visit a nursery'.

× It's a similar hobbies for Roku everyone will like plant so my family is all appreciated with me when my garden.

✓ My hobbies are similar to my family's—everyone likes plants, and my family appreciates my garden.

Multiple pronoun and number issues: 'It's a similar hobbies' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'hobbies'—use 'My hobbies are similar'; 'for Roku' unclear—removed as likely unwanted; 'everyone will like plant' should be 'everyone likes plants'; 'my family is all appreciated with me when my garden' is ungrammatical—use 'my family appreciates my garden' to express gratitude or pride.