Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 在回答中注意时态一致性和语法准确性，避免重复表达；将答案结构化：先给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节（如开始时间、频率、感受或原因）；使用连接词使表述更连贯。例如，把“I like”替换为正确的过去时或现在完成时，并说明原因或感受。

Exemplo: I enjoy playing football. I started playing seriously when I was 13 after joining my school football club, and I still play once a week because it helps me stay fit and socialise with friends.

Sugestão: 注意时态和语法（应使用过去时），减少直译式表达，提供更具体的细节（例如何时、在哪儿骑或为什么喜欢）；避免含糊短句，使用连接词如“but”或“so”来表达因果。将“不富裕”表达得更礼貌和自然。

Exemplo: As a child, I loved riding a bicycle. I dreamed of owning one, but my family couldn't afford it, so I could only watch other children ride in the neighbourhood.

Sugestão: 回答要更简洁自然，避免重复（多次提到家庭不富裕和现在能买车）。用更流畅的连接词（e.g., however, so）并补充具体信息（比如何时开始每周骑多长时间，为什么继续保持）。注意语法一致性。

Exemplo: Yes, I have ridden bicycles since I was a child. Although my family couldn't afford one back then, I bought a bike recently and now I cycle once a week for about an hour to relax and keep fit.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰且部分句子难以理解。避免含糊和不合适的评价（如“他们不欣赏他们的爱”），直接说明家人兴趣是否相同并举例。使用明确句子和连接词，给出具体对比（相同或不同的爱好及原因）。

Exemplo: I'm not sure. My parents don't have many hobbies that they talk about, so I don't share their interests. My brother, however, enjoys studying history, which is different from my hobbies like cycling and football.

× Well, to be honest, I like playing football. When I was 13 years old I like the football and then I joined our school football club and now I also play football once a week.

✓ Well, to be honest, I like playing football. When I was 13 years old I liked football and then I joined our school football club, and now I also play football once a week.

句中谈论过去的动作时应使用过去时。原句中“When I was 13 years old I like the football”将“like”写成一般现在时，但语境为过去时间点，应改为“liked”。另外在连词处加逗号以保持句子流畅。建议：描述过去发生的事情时统一使用过去时。

× When I was a child, I like riding bike. And it was my dream to have a basic, but my family is not rich so I can't have a bike. I only look.

✓ When I was a child, I liked riding a bike. And it was my dream to have one, but my family was not rich so I couldn't have a bike. I only looked.

此句涉及多处时态和词语使用问题：1) 谈过去时应使用过去时态，将“like”改为“liked”；2) 可数名词“bike”前需冠词，改为“a bike”；3) 表示不能在过去发生应使用过去时“couldn't”，而非现在时“can't”；4) “basic”显然用词错误，应改为“one”或省略以指代自行车。建议：回顾过去时的动词形式和冠词用法，注意代词或指示词替代重复名词。

× Yes, my favorite hobby is riding bicycle that I have had since childhood. But you know, my family wasn't wealthy so I couldn't afford a bike. But now I can buy it so I ride bicycle once a week.

✓ Yes, my favorite hobby is riding a bicycle, which I have had since childhood. But my family wasn't wealthy so I couldn't afford a bike. But now I could buy one, so I ride a bicycle once a week.

主要问题为时态和定冠词/冠词使用：1) “riding bicycle”需加冠词或改为“riding a bicycle”；2) 描述从过去持续到现在的经历可用现在完成时“have had”，此处保留，但结构上用“which”更自然；3) 描述现在能买时应使用现在时或现在完成时：原句“now I can buy it”可改为“now I can/bought one”，若保持现在能力用“can”；为句子一致性建议“now I could buy one”在口语中也可用“now I can buy one”；4) “ride bicycle”同样需冠词“ride a bicycle”。建议：注意冠词使用，过去与现在状态转换时保持时态一致。

× That's hard to say. For my parents, I don't know what they liked because they are adults, they don't appreciate their love. And for my brother, I think he should like history, but I don't like.

✓ That's hard to say. As for my parents, I don't know what they like because they are adults and I don't know their preferences. And for my brother, I think he likes history, but I don't.

原句中代词和表达不明确：1) “they don't appreciate their love”意义不清且不符合语境，应改为表达“我不知道他们的喜好”；2) 时态要与一般现在习惯相符，父母的喜好用一般现在时“like”；3) 句尾“but I don't like”缺少宾语，应改为“but I don't”或“but I don't like it”。建议：使用明确的代词和完整的句子结构，避免模糊的表达。