Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'listening to music'), avoid redundancy, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy several hobbies, but my main hobby is listening to music. I usually listen to music for about an hour each evening because it helps me relax after work. For example, I often choose instrumental or acoustic playlists to calm my mind before sleeping.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-tense topic sentence and explain the change with specific reasons. Use correct verb forms and linking words (e.g., 'but', 'so', 'because'). Avoid vague phrases like 'too much difference'.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I loved singing nursery rhymes and short poems. However, now I prefer listening to recordings because I have less time and enjoy more polished performances. Therefore, my hobby shifted from singing to listening.

Sugestão: Stay relevant and polite: answer the examiner's question directly with one clear sentence in correct tense and avoid unrelated or inappropriate comments. Provide a brief supporting detail using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I have liked music since childhood and I still listen to it regularly. For example, I used to listen to lullabies as a child, and now I enjoy contemporary acoustic music during my free time.

Sugestão: Maintain politeness and answer the question directly. Provide a brief comparison between your hobbies and your family's using linking words (e.g., 'although', 'however'), and include a specific example.

Exemplo: Some of my hobbies are similar to my family's. For instance, my mother and I both enjoy listening to music, although she prefers classical music while I like pop and acoustic songs.

× I have a lot of hobbies but one of them is listening the music.

✓ I have a lot of hobbies but one of them is listening to music.

Use the gerund with the correct preposition: 'listening to' is the fixed pattern; also omit the definite article before uncountable 'music'. Suggestion: learn verb + preposition collocations (e.g., listen to, look at).

× As we know that music make us very calm and relax even in a day.

✓ As we know, music makes us very calm and relaxed even during the day.

Subject-verb agreement: singular 'music' requires 'makes'. 'Relax' should be past participle 'relaxed' to describe the state. Also use 'during the day' for time expression and add a comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use correct participle for adjectives describing feelings.

× Usually I spend one hour to listen the music.

✓ Usually I spend one hour listening to music.

Use 'spend + time + doing' pattern rather than 'spend time to do'. Also use 'listening to' and drop the article before uncountable 'music'. Suggestion: practice 'spend time doing' constructions and verb+preposition pairs.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

✓ Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

This question sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed. It correctly uses past tense 'did' for a past-time question. No change required.

× Well when I was a child of I love to sing the poems but now I love to listen them as too much difference is create between in me and my childhood.

✓ When I was a child, I loved to sing poems, but now I like to listen to them because I have changed a lot since my childhood.

Multiple issues corrected: verb tense (use past 'loved' for childhood), remove extraneous 'of', use 'sing poems' (no article), use 'listen to' with preposition, use a clear causal clause 'because' and proper phrasing 'I have changed a lot since my childhood'. Suggestion: keep time references consistent and use simple clauses for clarity.

× Listening too much to music when I was a child.

✓ I listened to music a lot when I was a child.

Sentence lacked a main finite verb and had incorrect word order ('listening too much to music' is a fragment). Use past simple 'I listened' to match past time frame and correct 'listen to music a lot'. Suggestion: always include a subject and finite verb in a sentence and place adverbial phrases naturally.

× I love to listen to music. You do come for me. OK bad girl, you are very bad.

✓ I love to listen to music.

The first sentence is fine. The following sentences ('You do come for me. OK bad girl, you are very bad.') are inappropriate and unclear in context; they contain pronoun and pragmatic issues. 'You do come for me' is ungrammatical in this context; if the student intended 'You don't understand me' or 'You are teasing me,' rephrase accordingly. Suggestion: keep responses relevant and polite; use clear pronouns and correct negative forms (e.g., 'You don't come for me' if negative).

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This examiner question is correct as written; no correction needed.

× Why should I tell you who are you? Why should I tell you who are you?

✓ Why should I tell you who you are?

In indirect or embedded questions, the verb and subject order is subject + verb ('who you are'), not the question order 'who are you'. Also avoid repeating the sentence. Suggestion: use statement word order after verbs like 'tell' (e.g., 'tell me where you live', 'tell me who you are').