Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct plural and verb forms, and give one or two specific examples. Avoid vague phrasing like "many hobby" or unnecessary filler.

Exemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies in my free time. For example, I enjoy reading novels and going for short bike rides around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Use past tense for childhood and reduce hesitations. Give a clear topic sentence (I used to enjoy...), then one supporting detail about why and how often. Avoid confusing tense and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I loved riding my bike. I thought having a bike was very cool, so I rode it every day around the park with my friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear and fluent response using present perfect for a hobby that continues. Limit hesitations and be specific about what you read and how it influenced you. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Yes, I've loved reading since childhood, especially comic books and adventure novels. I used to buy many comics when I was younger, and I still enjoy reading them today.

Sugestão: Answer directly and confidently. Correct vocabulary (not "coffees"), use parallel structure and name specific shared activities. One topic sentence plus a brief supporting detail is enough.

Exemplo: Yes, some of my hobbies are the same as my family's. For instance, my brother and I both like watching TV shows and playing online games together on weekends.

× Yes, I have many hobby to do in my free time.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies to do in my free time.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural when used with 'many'. Use 'hobbies' to match the plural quantifier 'many'. Suggestion: Use 'many' with plural nouns (many hobbies).

× Oh, of course, uh, my hobbies when I will try is uh, riding a bike because, uh, I think that uh, the age having a bike is very cool and I riding a bike every day.

✓ Oh, of course. When I was a child, my hobby was riding a bike because I thought having a bike was very cool and I rode my bike every day.

The original mixes future/incorrect auxiliaries and present forms. Use past tense to describe childhood (was, thought, rode). Also correct verb forms ('riding a bike' as noun phrase is fine but needs past copula 'was') and subject-verb agreement ('my hobby was'). Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense when referring to past events: 'When I was a child, my hobby was... I rode... I thought...'. Replace awkward phrases ('the age having a bike') with 'having a bike'.

× Yeah, the hobby that I have since childhood, I think it uh, reading books and comic books.

✓ Yeah, the hobby that I have had since childhood, I think, is reading books and comic books.

Talking about a hobby continued from childhood to present requires present perfect ('have had') and a proper copula 'is' before the gerund phrase. Also place commas and verbs correctly. Suggestion: Use 'have had since childhood' for an activity started in the past and continuing now, and include 'is' before the activity: 'is reading books'.

× I really, uh, I really love reading comic books When I will try, uh, I spend a lot of money of it, and now it hobby is oh, is still remain.

✓ I really loved reading comic books. When I was younger, I spent a lot of money on them, and now that hobby still remains.

Describing past behavior requires past tense ('loved', 'spent'). 'When I will try' is incorrect; use 'when I was younger' or 'when I was a child'. Use 'spent money on' (correct preposition). 'Now that hobby still remains' is a clearer present-state clause. Suggestion: Use 'spent money on them' and keep tenses consistent: past for past actions, present for current states.

× Umm, I think, I don't know, but I think if uh, I have the same coffees as my family members, I think it's uh, my, uh, my brother, uh, we have the same hobbies is uh, watching TV and uh, playing games, uh, like umm, live some games.

✓ Umm, I think... I'm not sure, but if I have the same hobbies as my family members, my brother and I have the same hobbies: watching TV and playing video games.

'Coffees' is the wrong word; context requires 'hobbies'. Pronouns and subjects are confusing: use 'my brother and I' for the compound subject and a colon to list hobbies. 'Live some games' is unclear; 'playing video games' is a typical phrase. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('we have'). Suggestion: Replace incorrect nouns with intended words ('hobbies'), use clear subjects ('my brother and I'), and use standard collocations ('playing video games').