Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share everyday experiences. For example, we often talk about work or personal plans, which makes me feel supported and less stressed.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific example with a brief detail. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words such as for example or such as to introduce the example.

Exemplo: We usually talk about daily life and work. For example, my sister often tells me about her job challenges, and I give her advice or ask follow-up questions to help her solve problems.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give a concise reason and one brief example. Use linking words (because, so) and correct small grammar errors (e.g. "one person" not "one people").

Exemplo: I prefer talking with one person because I am quite shy and find it easier to express myself in a one-to-one conversation. For instance, I can speak more freely with a close friend than in a noisy group.

Sugestão: Give a clear choice or explain a condition, then support it with a specific reason and example. Use correct grammar and linking words (however, if). Clarify conditional structure ("If they are close friends, I prefer...").

Exemplo: It depends: if someone is a close friend, I prefer face-to-face meetings because they feel more personal and natural. However, if the person is a stranger or not very close, I usually use social media because it's more convenient and less awkward.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a brief explanation plus a consequence. Use linking words (because, but, however) and provide a complete concluding idea (e.g., reconcile afterwards). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions, especially about important decisions. However, we usually discuss calmly and reconcile afterwards, which often makes our friendship stronger.

× Yes, I really like chatting with my friends and we can share our life and in and enjoying our emotional and I think that we can make our relax and sometimes we can talk about our life.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends; we can share our lives and enjoy our emotions, and I think it helps us relax. Sometimes we just talk about what's going on in our lives.

Errors: incorrect use of 'enjoying' and 'make our relax' and inconsistent verb forms. Use the base verb 'enjoy' after 'can' or use gerund correctly. 'Share our life' should be plural 'lives'. 'Make our relax' is ungrammatical; use 'helps us relax'. Combine clauses with proper connectors and punctuation. Suggestion: Use parallel verb forms and correct collocations (enjoy emotions -> enjoy our emotions, help someone relax).

× Sometimes just about just like just about like share our life.

✓ Sometimes it's just about sharing our lives.

Errors: missing auxiliary and wrong verb form. After 'about', use the -ing form 'sharing'. 'Share our life' should be 'sharing our lives' for natural plural. Also remove filler words ('just like just about like'). Suggestion: Use concise phrasing and correct verb form after prepositions ('about' + gerund).

× You know, my I I have a sister and she sometimes works in she will share she work life with me and we talk about we we talk about about her life and give give.

✓ I have a sister, and she sometimes shares her work life with me; we talk about her life and she gives me advice.

Errors: wrong pronoun placement ('my I I'), incorrect verb forms ('she will share she work life'), repetition. Use correct subject pronoun order and third person singular verb 'shares'. 'Share her work life' is better and clarify 'give give' as 'gives me advice' or similar. Suggestion: Remove repetitions, use correct subject-verb agreement, and complete the thought ('gives advice').

× There only have one choice yes, I I like to talk with one people and not group because I am a shy I am a kind of shy, so I can't take control of I I can't take control of talk with most people.

✓ There is only one choice: yes, I like to talk with one person and not in a group because I am shy; I can't take control when talking with many people.

Errors: 'There only have' wrong verb and number; use 'There is'. 'One people' should be 'one person'. 'Most people' vs 'many people'—use 'many' for quantity. Repetition and awkward 'take control of talk' corrected to 'take control when talking'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are', use singular/plural correctly, and use appropriate expressions ('be shy', 'talking with many people').

× I just can't talk with one people because when I talk with a lot.

✓ I just can't talk with many people because when I talk with a lot of people I feel nervous.

Errors: 'one people' incorrect; 'a lot' incomplete. Replace with 'many people' and complete the clause to explain why. Suggestion: Use 'many people' for plural and finish sentence clauses for clarity.

× There have two trees if the friends is my good friends and I can talk with him face to face and use social media is as well.

✓ There are two ways: if the friend is a good friend, I can talk with him face to face, and I also use social media.

Errors: 'There have' should be 'There are'. 'two trees' likely meant 'two ways'. Plural agreement and word choice errors. 'friends is my good friends' should be 'if the friend is a good friend' or 'if they are my good friends'. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for existence and correct nouns ('ways' not 'trees'). Maintain subject-verb agreement and consistent pronouns.

× But if the is a difference is it stranger? And I'm not family so maybe the social media is better than face to face.

✓ But if the person is a stranger and not family, then maybe social media is better than face-to-face communication.

Errors: 'the is a difference is it stranger' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'the person is a stranger'. 'the social media' unnecessary article; use 'social media' and hyphenate 'face-to-face' as an adjective or use 'face to face' as noun phrase. Suggestion: Use clear noun ('person' or 'stranger') and avoid unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns ('social media').

× Absolutely, I will argue with my friends because sometimes we will have have some different opinion and then we will talk about, we will talk about and if we can't accept the opinion and we will argue.

✓ Absolutely, I argue with my friends because sometimes we have different opinions; we discuss them, and if we can't accept each other's opinions, we might argue.

Errors: overuse of 'will' for habitual actions; use simple present for habitual behavior. Repetition ('we will talk about, we will talk about') and missing plural 'opinions'. Use 'might' for possibility. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines ('we argue'/'we have') and modal 'might' for possibility of arguing.

× But when we argue, when finished argue and we will become.

✓ But when we finish arguing, we usually make up afterwards.

Errors: incomplete clauses and incorrect verb forms ('when finished argue', 'we will become' without object). Use 'finish arguing' and express the result ('make up' or 'become friends again'). Suggestion: Complete the sentence with a clear result and use correct verb forms ('finish + -ing').