Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "craft coffee" and repeated words.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, we often have deep conversations about life and personal concerns, which makes me feel more connected to them.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then explain with concrete examples. Use linking words (for example, such as) and correct vocabulary (e.g., "challenges" instead of "adverse").

Exemplo: We usually talk about life and our plans for the future. For example, we discuss career goals and how to overcome challenges, and we share advice to support each other.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference sentence and follow with specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and avoid repetitions. Mention concrete benefits of one-on-one chats.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group. This is because I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations, and we can focus on personal topics while the other person pays more attention.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then give two clear reasons linked with connectors (because, and). Correct phrasing (e.g., "it's hard to tell if someone is honest online") and avoid extra words like "listen there".

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's hard to tell if someone is honest on social media, and in-person conversations let you read body language and tone of voice, which helps build trust and avoid misunderstandings.

Sugestão: This answer is good. To improve, briefly add a linking phrase and one specific example of how you resolve arguments to show maturity and coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue, but only about minor things like where to eat or which movie to watch. For example, if we disagree, we usually make a joke and compromise by taking turns choosing where to go.

× Yes, I like to craft coffee and speak with friends and talk about anything about life and mostly I want to talk about with them is deep concern conversation and it makes me feel connected to them more.

✓ Yes, I like making coffee and speaking with friends and talking about anything related to life, and mostly I want to have deep, meaningful conversations with them because it makes me feel more connected.

The sentence uses inconsistent verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Like to craft coffee' is unnatural; 'making coffee' uses the gerund to match 'speak' and 'talk' as activities. Use parallel gerunds: 'making, speaking, talking'. 'Anything about life' should be 'anything related to life'. 'Talk about with them is deep concern conversation' is ungrammatical; correct to 'have deep, meaningful conversations with them'. Also reposition 'more' to 'more connected'. Suggest using parallel structure and gerunds for preference statements.

× We usually talk about things about life and future, and we just say things how we want, how we want to be in the future and adverse and the thoughts of adverse, they're gonna be friends.

✓ We usually talk about things related to life and the future, and we just say how we want to be in the future. We also discuss difficulties and our thoughts about them; those who share similar views often become friends.

Repeated 'about' is redundant; use 'related to' or 'about' once. 'Future' needs an article: 'the future'. 'Say things how we want' should be 'say how we want to be'. 'Adverse' is the wrong form; use 'adversity' or 'difficulties'. 'Thoughts of adverse' is incorrect; use 'thoughts about them'. 'They're gonna be friends' is informal and unclear; clarify as 'those who share similar views often become friends'. Suggestions: use correct nouns ('adversity') and clearer sentence structure, avoid slang 'gonna'.

× I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend rather than with a group of friends.

'Group friend' is incorrect; use 'a group of friends'. Also add 'with' after 'rather than' for clarity. Use plural 'friends' when referring to multiple people. Suggest using standard collocation 'a group of friends'.

× We I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversation because they more they they pay more attention and we can talk more oftenly about personalities.

✓ I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations because the other person pays more attention and we can talk more often about our personalities.

Sentence has extra 'We' and repeated words 'they more they they', causing structure errors. 'One-on-one conversation' should be plural 'conversations' for general statements. 'They' is wrong pronoun for 'the other person' in singular; use 'the other person' or 'the person'. 'Oftenly' is not a word; use 'often'. Also 'about personalities' should be 'about our personalities' for clarity. Suggest removing repetitions and fixing pronouns and adverb.

× I prefer face to face communication because on social media for example Instagram you can always tell whether someone is being honest.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because on social media, for example Instagram, you cannot always tell whether someone is being honest.

Missing hyphens in 'face-to-face' (compound adjective). The logic is incorrect: social media makes honesty harder to judge, so use 'cannot always tell'. Also add commas around 'for example Instagram'. Suggest using hyphens for compound modifiers and proper comma placement.

× In person conversation allow you to read body language and tone of voice which makes it easier to build trust and avoid listen there misunderstandings.

✓ In-person conversation allows you to read body language and tone of voice, which makes it easier to build trust and avoid misunderstandings caused by mishearing or misreading.

'In person' should be hyphenated as 'In-person' when used as an adjective. Subject-verb agreement: 'conversation allows' (singular). 'Avoid listen there misunderstandings' is ungrammatical; remove 'listen there' and use 'avoid misunderstandings' or clarify 'misunderstandings caused by mishearing'. Add comma before 'which'. Suggest fixing hyphenation, verb agreement, and removing unnecessary words.

× Yes, my friends and I do argue sometimes, but usually about minor things like where to eat or what movie to watch and we often make jokes about it so they don't become serious.

✓ Yes, my friends and I sometimes argue, usually about minor things like where to eat or what movie to watch, and we often make jokes about it so the arguments do not become serious.

Use more natural word order: 'sometimes argue' rather than 'do argue sometimes'. Add commas for clarity. 'They don't become serious' is vague; specify 'the arguments do not become serious'. Suggest smoothing word order and clarifying the subject of 'don't become serious'.