Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, chính tả và mạch câu. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “from from”), dùng chủ ngữ số nhiều/số ít đúng (friend -> friends), và rút gọn câu dài thành tối đa 3-4 câu rõ ràng. Thêm liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc (e.g., “because” + result). Nói trực tiếp và tự nhiên hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể với ví dụ.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends at the weekend or in my free time because it helps me get advice and new ideas. For example, last weekend we discussed plans for a group project and exchanged useful tips.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng cụm từ tự nhiên hơn: “we are a girls” không đúng, nên dùng “we are all girls” hoặc “we have similar interests”. Kết hợp câu bằng liên từ (e.g., “so”, “for example”) và tránh câu rời rạc. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn (ví dụ nêu tên phim hoặc tip trang điểm cụ thể).

Exemplo: I usually talk about relationships, movies and makeup because we are all girls and have similar interests. For example, I often ask for makeup tips like how to blend foundation, and my friends recommend new films such as a recent romantic comedy.

Sugestão: Làm rõ ý chính ngay từ đầu và tránh yếu tố lặp từ/tiếng thừa (uh, so much). Dùng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc: nêu sở thích, giải thích lý do với các từ nối hợp lý (e.g., “because”, “so”). Thay cụm từ lạ như “accommodation of many people” bằng “opinions from many people”. Giữ tối đa 3 câu, cụ thể hóa ví dụ khi cần.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because I can hear different opinions from several people. For example, when choosing a restaurant, my friends give many suggestions so I can pick the best place.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ phù hợp: “I am a person not confident” nên là “I’m not very confident”. Tránh từ thừa (umm) và lỗi chính tả (conservation -> conversation). Giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao chọn mạng xã hội; có thể đưa ví dụ cụ thể về filter và cách nó giúp giao tiếp. Giữ cấu trúc: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I’m not very confident in person. For example, I use filters during video calls which make me feel more comfortable and help me focus on the conversation rather than my appearance.

Sugestão: Sắp xếp lại câu cho rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và loại bỏ lặp từ. Dùng câu chủ đề ngắn: “Not really” + giải thích rõ ràng vì sao (we have similar views). Tránh cụm từ mơ hồ như “same frequency”. Có thể thêm một ví dụ thể hiện cách giải quyết khi bất đồng xảy ra. Giữ tối đa 2-3 câu.

Exemplo: Not really. My friends and I usually have similar views, so we rarely argue. If we ever disagree, we talk calmly and try to understand each other’s point of view.

× I usually chat with my friend at the weekend or in free time.

✓ I usually chat with my friends at the weekend or in my free time.

Use plural 'friends' because the student mentions chatting with multiple people elsewhere; also use 'my free time' to specify possession and natural phrasing. Use 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' and 'in my free time' or 'during my free time' for idiomatic English.

× I like this activity because I can get advice or get new ideas from from conservation and I love.

✓ I like this activity because I can get advice or new ideas from conversations, and I love it.

Use the noun 'conversations' (spelling corrected) rather than 'conservation'. Also add the pronoun 'it' after 'I love' to complete the clause. 'From conversations' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I usually chat with my friends about relationships, movies and makeup. Because we are a girls and have familiar interest, we often exchange advice and recommendation.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about relationships, movies and makeup. Because we are girls and have similar interests, we often exchange advice and recommendations.

Remove the article 'a' before 'girls' because 'girls' is plural. Use 'similar interests' not 'familiar interest' for correct collocation and plural form. Use plural 'recommendations' to match 'advice' as multiple suggestions.

× For example, I ask for makeup tips or they tell me about a new film they like.

✓ For example, I ask for makeup tips, and they tell me about a new film they like.

Add the conjunction 'and' to connect clauses smoothly; punctuation improves clarity. Pronouns are otherwise correct, but sentence flow benefits from this connector.

× I like chatting with a group because I want exchange many, uh, advice and accommodation of many people so that I will choose the best option for me.

✓ I like chatting with a group because I want to exchange a lot of advice and hear many people's opinions so that I can choose the best option for me.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun so use 'a lot of advice' not 'many advice'. 'Accommodation' is incorrect in this context; use 'opinions' or 'views'. Use 'people's opinions' to express possessive plural. Use 'can' rather than 'will' for capability in this context.

× So it is very helpful so much.

✓ So it is very helpful.

'So much' is redundant when 'very' is used; choose one intensifier. The shorter phrase is natural and grammatically correct.

× I like communicate on social media because I am a person not confident.

✓ I like to communicate on social media because I am a not very confident person.

Use the infinitive 'to communicate' after 'like'. Reorder 'not very confident' before 'person' or use 'a not very confident person' for natural adjective placement.

× So I use filter during video calls.

✓ So I use filters during video calls.

Plural 'filters' is more natural unless referring to a single filter. Use plural 'filters' and include article if specifying a particular filter. Also use 'during video calls' is correct.

× This helps me more confident and focus on conservation umm and not care about my appearance during the video call.

✓ This helps me feel more confident and focus on conversation, and not worry about my appearance during video calls.

Use 'feel more confident' instead of 'more confident' after 'helps me'. Use 'conversation' not 'conservation'. Use 'worry about' rather than 'not care about' for natural phrasing. Make 'video calls' plural to match general statement.

× Not really my friend all the way have same mindset and same frequency with me.

✓ Not really, my friends generally have the same mindset and the same wavelength as me.

Add comma after 'Not really' for readability. Use 'friends' plural and 'generally' for adverb. 'Same frequency' is unnatural; 'same wavelength' is idiomatic for similar thinking. Use 'as me' for comparison.

× So we tend to have same things and save the way we think so we don't so we we we never have this.

✓ So we tend to think similarly, and we rarely have arguments about these things.

Rewrite needed for clarity and grammaticality. 'Have same things' and 'save the way we think' are unclear; use 'think similarly' and 'rarely have arguments about these things' to convey intended meaning. Remove repetitions and filler words.