Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail (e.g., what you enjoy about chats or an example). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., relaxed, catch up, exchange news).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and catch up on each other’s lives. For example, we often reminisce about fun college memories and update one another on recent events.

Sugestão: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Remove fillers and repetitions. Use linking words to group topics (for example, “mainly...; also...”). Provide 2–3 specific topics rather than vague phrases.

Exemplo: We mainly talk about our past experiences, especially funny college memories; we also discuss current events in each other’s lives and sometimes share light gossip about mutual friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference (or say balanced) and support it with brief reasons. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (for example, “on the one hand… on the other hand…”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don’t have a strong preference; both are enjoyable. On the one hand, group chats are lively and include many opinions; on the other hand, one-on-one conversations are more personal and allow deeper discussion.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a clear statement of preference and give concise reasons. Avoid contradictions and unclear phrasing. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “prefer online messaging” rather than “social media” if you mean messaging).

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted and feel more comfortable expressing myself in messages. It also gives me time to think before replying, which reduces my anxiety during conversations.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and explain why, with one or two specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and unnecessary hesitations. Use linking words to show reason (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often argue with friends because I enjoy playing devil’s advocate and challenging popular opinions. For instance, if everyone agrees on a movie, I might point out its flaws to start a discussion.

× Yes, I really like chatting with friends because when I chat with them I really feel so light and I gossip with them.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because when I chat with them I feel relaxed and I gossip with them.

Redundant use of 'really' and 'so' is stylistic; main grammatical issue is present tense consistency: use simple present 'I feel' instead of 'I really feel so light'. Replace 'feel so light' with natural collocation 'feel relaxed'. Keep present tense for habitual actions.

× I get so many information, we share many memories and I really enjoy chatting with them.

✓ I get a lot of information, we share many memories, and I really enjoy chatting with them.

Countable/uncountable issue combined with present tense: 'information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of information' not 'so many information'. Use commas and conjunction 'and' for correct sentence structure and maintain simple present for habitual actions.

× I really like my friends and talking with them.

✓ I really like my friends and enjoy talking with them.

Sentence lacks a parallel verb form. Use 'enjoy' to parallel 'really like' and maintain present tense. This improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× We do chat about a lot of things like we we we remind our old memories, cool memories, college memories and we also and also gossip about each other's life.

✓ We chat about a lot of things, like our old memories, fun college memories, and we also gossip about each other's lives.

Unnecessary 'do' is avoidable in affirmative simple present; remove filler repetitions. Use plural 'lives' for 'each other's life'. Keep simple present 'chat' and 'gossip' for habitual actions. Use natural adjectives ('fun') for clarity.

× MMM, I think it's uh, I think it's fun to chat with a group of people, but it's also fun to chat with only one friend.

✓ I think it's fun to chat with a group of people, but it's also fun to chat with just one friend.

Remove filler repetition and maintain simple present 'think' and 'is'. Replace 'only one friend' with 'just one friend' for natural usage. Keep tense consistent.

× I give equal, uh, importance to both.

✓ I give equal importance to both.

Remove filler 'uh' and keep simple present. Comma is unnecessary. Sentence correctly uses present tense to describe a general preference.

× Like I, I have fun in both ways, like while chatting in Group or chatting with a friend.

✓ I have fun both ways, whether chatting in a group or chatting with a friend.

Remove fillers and capitalize 'group' incorrectly; use 'a group'. Use 'whether' to present alternatives and keep simple present for habitual actions.

× No one too. I'm no, I think I'm too afraid to talk face to face because like I mean introvert, that's why.

✓ Not really. I think I'm too shy to talk face to face because I'm an introvert.

'No one too' is incorrect pronoun/phrase. Use 'Not really'. 'Afraid' can be replaced with 'shy' for natural collocation in social context. 'I mean introvert' should be 'I'm an introvert' using correct pronoun and article.

× So I think I really like to communicate through social media because I like chatting or talking on phone.

✓ So I prefer to communicate through social media because I like chatting or talking on the phone.

Use 'prefer' to express preference in present tense. Add definite article 'the' with 'phone' for natural English. Maintain present tense.

× Like I prefer chatting rather than talking on phone like social media.

✓ I prefer chatting rather than talking on the phone or using social media.

Correct article usage 'the phone' and clarify meaning: distinguish phone calls from social media. Maintain simple present 'prefer'.

× Umm yes maybe like I'm the one who most argues I like I have different mind from everyone like if everyone get agrees on one thing I will be on other side.

✓ Yes, maybe. I'm the one who argues the most; I often have different opinions from everyone. If everyone agrees on one thing, I will be on the other side.

Multiple issues: use superlative 'the most' with 'argues the most' and correct word order. Use 'have different opinions' rather than 'have different mind'. Correct verb agreement: 'if everyone agrees' not 'get agrees'. Maintain future/present conditional: 'I will be on the other side' is acceptable but keep tense consistent.

× I I think I'm the one who argues the most.

✓ I think I'm the one who argues the most.

Remove filler repetition and keep simple present 'think' and present continuous/state 'I'm'. Sentence is otherwise correct.

× Yes we have a lot of arguments like while chatting or while.

✓ Yes, we have a lot of arguments while chatting.

Original sentence ends abruptly and repeats 'while'. Simplify to a complete clause 'while chatting'. Maintain present tense for habitual events.