Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use linking words, and provide one or two specific examples. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'I really enjoy chatting with friends.'). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I really enjoy chatting with friends, especially about deep topics. For example, we often discuss current economic issues and our personal challenges, which helps us understand each other better. Overall, these conversations help me see different perspectives and strengthen friendships.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and linking words, and give one specific example of a topic or solution discussed. Replace unclear phrases like 'mental combinations' with clearer terms such as 'new ideas' or 'different perspectives.' Keep answers to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: We usually talk about challenges we are facing and possible solutions. For instance, when I struggled with time management, a friend suggested using a daily planner and that advice really helped me. These discussions let us learn from each other's experiences.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then briefly explain with a specific reason and example. Fix pronoun and repetition errors and finish sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however.' Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows for more private and honest conversations. For example, when I talk to my close friend about personal plans, we can focus on each other's thoughts without interruptions.

Sugestão: State preference clearly, then give concise, specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g., 'eye contact', 'express emotions'). Avoid vague phrases like 'didn't have others meaning.' Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'while.'

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because eye contact and body language help convey emotions more clearly. While social media is convenient, it often lacks tone and nonverbal cues, which can cause misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, correct grammar (e.g., 'I have a strong personality' and 'I argue'), and explain briefly how arguments can be positive. Use one specific example and linking words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do argue with friends occasionally because I can be stubborn. For example, we might disagree about plans, but resolving these arguments honestly helps us understand each other and strengthens our friendship.

× Yeah, I super like to chatting with my friend, especially the topic in deeps and then we can talk about the economy and talk about our thought and talk about our personalities and the thing we are facing the challenge we are struggling.

✓ Yeah, I really like chatting with my friends, especially deep topics; we can talk about the economy, our thoughts, our personalities, and the challenges we are facing.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'To chatting' is incorrect. Also plural nouns and articles were adjusted: use 'friends' (plural) when referring generally, 'deep topics' is the correct noun phrase instead of 'the topic in deeps', and parallel items should be joined with commas. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and ensure parallel structure for lists. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yeah, I super like to chatting with my friend, especially the topic in deeps and then we can talk about the economy and talk about our thought and talk about our personalities and the thing we are facing the challenge we are struggling.

✓ ... I really like chatting with my friends ... we can talk about the economy, our thoughts, our personalities, and the challenges we are facing.

The student used singular 'friend' and singular 'thought' and awkward 'the thing we are facing the challenge we are struggling.' These should be plural to match general meaning (Grammar Problem Type 1). Use 'friends', 'thoughts', and 'challenges'. Suggestion: when speaking about typical topics, use plural nouns for generality. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yeah, I super like to chatting with my friend, especially the topic in deeps and then we can talk about the economy and talk about our thought and talk about our personalities and the thing we are facing the challenge we are struggling.

✓ Yeah, I really like chatting with my friends about deep topics; we can talk about the economy, our thoughts, our personalities, and the challenges we are facing.

The original sentence is run-on and disorganized (Grammar Problem Type 26). It repeats 'talk about' and uses awkward phrases. Restructure into clearer clauses and use parallel list items. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter clauses and use parallelism when listing items. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Usually we will share that the challenge we're facing right now and what we are supposed to do that and excellent opinions or idea from each others.

✓ Usually we share the challenges we're facing right now, what we plan to do, and excellent opinions or ideas from each other.

Problems: 'that' is unnecessary, 'what we are supposed to do that' is redundant, 'idea' should be plural 'ideas', and 'each others' should be 'each other' (Grammar Problem Type 12). Suggestion: remove filler words, use plural for countable nouns, and use 'each other' for reciprocal pronouns. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× By this process we can first, know each other well and 2nd, actually we can get the mental combinations with others.

✓ By this process we can, first, get to know each other well and, second, gain mental support from others.

Awkward phrase 'get the mental combinations' and punctuation/word order issues; article usage in 'the mental combinations' is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type 22). Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions like 'get to know' and 'gain mental support' or 'mental compatibility' depending on intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Oh, actually I prefer to chat with only one friend because with one friend we can share the most personal things with others instead If you chat with a group of friends, maybe she she or she didn't want to talk that much to others, so it will interfere with our conversation a lot.

✓ Oh, actually I prefer to chat with only one friend because with one person we can share the most personal things. If you chat with a group of friends, someone may not want to talk that much, which can interfere with the conversation.

Errors: unnecessary 'the' and awkward 'with others instead If' and repeated 'she she' and incorrect tense 'didn't want' (should be present 'may not want') (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also pronoun and tense issues fixed. Suggestion: use 'one person' or 'one friend', avoid repetition, and use modal 'may' for possibility. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× If you chat with a group of friends, maybe she she or she didn't want to talk that much to others, so it will interfere with our conversation a lot.

✓ If you chat with a group of friends, someone may not want to talk that much to others, so it can interfere with our conversation a lot.

'She didn't want' is past tense and incorrect for a general statement; use 'may not want' or 'doesn't want' for present general situations (Grammar Problem Type 2). Also avoid repeating pronouns. Suggestion: use 'may not want' to express possibility. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× So I prefer to have a deep conversation with my.

✓ So I prefer to have a deep conversation with one friend.

The sentence is incomplete and missing an object after 'my' (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 23). It likely intended 'my friend'. Suggestion: always complete possessive phrases (my friend, my partner) and avoid trailing possessive pronouns. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I think the face to face can first build the eyes connection with others that can express the emotional and what you feel right now and that is really important during a conversation and aspect.

✓ I think face-to-face interaction can build eye contact with others, which can express your emotions and how you feel right now, and that is really important during a conversation.

Incorrect prepositions and phrases: 'build the eyes connection' should be 'build eye contact' and 'during a conversation and aspect' is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: use set phrases like 'face-to-face', 'eye contact', and 'express your emotions'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Oh definitely face to face. I think the face to face can first build the eyes connection with others that can express the emotional and what you feel right now and that is really important during a conversation and aspect.

✓ Oh, definitely face to face. I think face-to-face interaction can build eye contact with others that expresses your emotions and how you feel right now, which is really important during a conversation.

Awkward adjective/adverb use: 'the emotional' is incorrect; should be 'emotions' or 'emotional cues' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Suggestion: use correct noun forms and adjective-noun combinations like 'emotional cues' or 'your emotions'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Just checking with the social medias, there's only words and they are called didn't have others meaning.

✓ When it comes to social media, there are only words and they often don't have other meanings.

'Checking with the social medias' is awkward; use 'when it comes to social media'. 'They're called didn't have others meaning' is incorrect grammar and tense. Use present tense 'don't have' and 'other meanings' (Grammar Problem Type 10). Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions and correct plural 'meanings'. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Just checking with the social medias, there's only words and they are called didn't have others meaning.

✓ When it comes to social media, there are only words and they often don't have other meanings.

Use 'social media' without 'the' and in singular form for the concept; 'meanings' should be plural. 'There's' is awkward with plural 'words'—use 'there are' (Grammar Problem Type 22). Suggestion: use correct article and number agreement for uncountable/collective nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Yeah, actually I'm have a really strong personalities and I'm a little stubborn.

✓ Yeah, actually I have a really strong personality and I'm a little stubborn.

'I'm have' is ungrammatical and 'personalities' should be singular 'personality' to match 'a really strong' (Grammar Problem Type 27). Suggestion: use correct auxiliary or verb forms ('I have') and match singular/plural nouns with articles. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× So usually I will have some argues with my friends maybe once or twice a month and but that's kind of argue can build and strengthen our relationship.

✓ So usually I have some arguments with my friends maybe once or twice a month, but those kinds of arguments can build and strengthen our relationship.

'Some argues' is incorrect; use 'some arguments' or 'a few arguments' (Grammar Problem Type 14). Also 'but that's kind of argue' should be 'but those kinds of arguments'. Suggestion: use correct plural noun forms with quantifiers and maintain subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× So usually I will have some argues with my friends maybe once or twice a month and but that's kind of argue can build and strengthen our relationship.

✓ So usually I have some arguments with my friends maybe once or twice a month, and those kinds of arguments can build and strengthen our relationship.

The sentence used 'will have' unnecessarily for habitual actions; simple present 'have' is more natural for routines (Grammar Problem Type 5). Also fixed noun forms and conjunction usage. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× So I think that's also a good way to test.

✓ So I think that's also a good way to test our relationship.

The original sentence is vague and omits the object 'our relationship' making it unclear (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: include the object to clarify what is being tested. Grammar problem type ID: 26