Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và động từ), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh từ không rõ nghĩa (ví dụ 'touching UMM'). Nên nối các ý bằng liên từ/ cụm từ (e.g., "also", "besides"). Hãy cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn về việc bạn trò chuyện về điều gì để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my family and friends. It helps me relax after a busy day, and we often talk about our daily activities or funny moments. For example, last night we discussed a movie we watched together. Besides that, I sometimes message friends to arrange plans or share photos.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và cụ thể. Tránh tiếng ừ/à lặp lại; chuẩn bị cấu trúc: chủ đề chính + chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như "and", "for example", "about" để liệt kê chủ đề trò chuyện.

Exemplo: I usually chat about everyday life and current events. For example, we share stories about work or school and sometimes discuss news from around the world. We also give each other advice or make plans to meet up.

Sugestão: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng: nêu sở thích (nhóm hay một người) rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như 'easy to stand' không rõ nghĩa. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ giải thích.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than in a large group. I find one-on-one conversations more comfortable and easier to follow. For example, I can share personal stories and have a deeper discussion without interruptions.

Sugestão: Câu chủ đề tốt nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và làm rõ ý phụ. Tránh tiếng thừa và hoàn thiện mệnh đề (ví dụ 'a deeper, more meaningful conversation'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể khi cần giải thích.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for deeper, more meaningful conversations. For instance, when I talk in person I can read facial expressions and have a more honest exchange than through messages.

Sugestão: Nội dung mâu thuẫn và lúng túng: câu trả lời nên nêu rõ tần suất và lý do, tránh nói mâu ('I often agree' nhưng đề cập đến tranh luận). Giảm tiếng ừ/à, dùng từ vựng thích hợp (disagree, different opinions, resolve). Thêm ví dụ ngắn về cách bạn giải quyết bất đồng.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions. Usually we discuss calmly and try to understand each other's point of view. For example, when we disagree about plans, we compromise by choosing a solution that suits everyone.

× Yes I do, I often chatting with my family because it's make me feel comfortable and relaxing after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I do. I often chat with my family because it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed after a busy day.

Incorrect verb form: 'chatting' should be base form 'chat' after 'often' (adverb + verb). Subject-verb agreement: 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to match singular subject. Word choice: 'relaxing' should be 'relaxed' to describe the speaker's feeling. Suggestion: use adverb + base verb (I often chat), ensure verb agrees with subject (it makes), and use appropriate adjective to describe feeling (relaxed).

× Besides that I also touching UMM with my friend.

✓ Besides that, I also touch UMM with my friend.

Original used present participle 'touching' incorrectly after auxiliary structure; in simple present use base verb 'touch'. However likely intended meaning unclear—if meant 'visiting' or 'contacting', replace 'touch' with correct verb (visit/contact). Suggestion: use base verb for habitual actions or choose correct verb for intended meaning.

× I usually test about with friend about uh, share say everyday story and catch up with a global umm, I feel, uh, I feel.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about everyday events and catch up on global news.

Multiple issues: 'test about with friend about' is ungrammatical—use 'talk with my friends about'. 'share say' is redundant; use 'talk about everyday events'. 'catch up with a global' is incorrect; use 'catch up on global news'. Suggestion: simplify to clear subject-verb-object structure and choose correct collocations ('talk with', 'catch up on').

× I quite tired of catching this all groups of people because I easy to stand, a fun story and I also, uh, make me feel comfy.

✓ I'm quite tired of catching up with groups of people because I easily get bored, and I also like fun stories that make me feel comfortable.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' (I'm quite tired). 'catching this all groups of people' is incorrect phrasing—use 'catching up with groups of people'. 'I easy to stand' should be 'I easily get bored' (adverb + verb). 'make me feel comfy' should be 'make me feel comfortable'. Suggestion: include correct auxiliaries, use adverbs for manner, and use natural collocations ('catch up with', 'get bored', 'comfortable').

× I enjoy communicating face to face with my friends and family because I can have a deeper more a meaningful conversation.

✓ I enjoy communicating face to face with my friends and family because I can have a deeper, more meaningful conversation.

Article and word order issues: 'a deeper more a meaningful' has extra 'a' and misses comma for adjectives. Correct is 'a deeper, more meaningful conversation.' Suggestion: use single article before combined adjectives and separate coordinate adjectives with a comma when needed.

× And is it to a self fun story and uh.

✓ And it's also fun to share personal stories.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use complete clause with subject and verb: 'it's also fun to share personal stories.' Suggestion: form full sentences and use natural collocations ('share personal stories').

× Yes I do. I often agree with my friend because uh, individuals, uh uh, will have a different view.

✓ Yes, I do. I often disagree with my friends because individuals often have different views.

Context: question asked 'Do you argue with friends?' Student meant they argue (disagree). 'agree' is opposite. Also subject-verb agreement: 'my friend' -> 'my friends' to match general statement. 'will have a different view' is awkward; use 'often have different views'. Suggestion: choose correct verb to express intended meaning (disagree), ensure plural agreement and natural adverb placement.