Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct grammar and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and article use.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, we often share memories from our childhood and discuss historical events that interest us, which helps us bond and learn from each other.

Sugestão: Make a direct statement first and use correct tense and pronouns. Use linking words to connect ideas and give specific examples of plans or skills. Avoid asking the examiner a question back unless necessary.

Exemplo: We usually talk about our future plans and goals. For instance, we discuss career options and study schedules, and we give each other feedback to improve skills like coding or presentation.

Sugestão: Respond directly and correct sentence structure and word choice. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a brief specific example. Fix pronouns and phrasing (e.g., “one friend” not “one of friends”).

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because conversations are more focused and personal. For example, when I talk with a close friend about future plans, we can give detailed advice and concentrate on each other’s needs.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and remove filler words. Explain briefly why you prefer face-to-face communication with a specific reason and example, and correct pronoun/reference errors (e.g., “with them” or “in person”).

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I feel more comfortable and can read body language. For example, meeting a friend in person makes it easier to understand emotions and avoid misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use natural phrasing. Explain briefly why arguments happen and show how they are resolved or what you learn from them. Avoid vague phrasing like “as a human.”

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different perspectives on issues. For instance, when we disagree about politics or work approaches, we discuss our reasons calmly and often reach a compromise or better understanding.

× Yes, I would like to chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I would like to chat with my friends.

The phrase 'would like to' must be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Use 'to chat' after 'would like' to form a correct infinitive structure; e.g., 'I would like to chat'.

× Sometimes we talk about the history, about the past memory, about our childhood days.

✓ Sometimes we talk about history, past memories, and our childhood days.

'Talk about' is correct but 'the history' is too specific; use 'history' generally. 'Past memory' should be plural 'past memories'. Also combine items with 'and' for parallel structure. Improve word choice and parallelism for natural English.

× Will you share the topic about our future, our plan in the future?

✓ We talk about our future and our plans.

The student used a question form 'Will you share...' inappropriately; the examiner asked what they usually chat about, so a present simple statement is appropriate: 'We talk about our future and our plans.' Also use plural 'plans' for general activities.

× We enjoy it because we help each other to improve our skill these days.

✓ We enjoy it because we help each other to improve our skills these days.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' when referring to abilities in general. The rest of the sentence is acceptable; keep 'help each other to improve' or more naturally 'help each other improve'.

× I usually like just one of friends chatting with because we have a focus on each other.

✓ I usually prefer chatting with just one friend because we can focus on each other.

'One of friends' is incorrect; use 'one friend' or 'one of my friends'. 'Chatting with' placement was awkward; rephrase to 'prefer chatting with just one friend'. Also change 'have a focus on each other' to 'can focus on each other' for natural expression.

× Just me and here sharing with our plan in the future.

✓ It's just me and her sharing our plans for the future.

The original lacks a proper subject-verb structure and uses 'here' instead of 'her'. Use 'It's just me and her' as subject and 'sharing our plans for the future' as the rest. Use plural 'plans' and 'for the future' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer uh face to face because I feel more comfortable with face to face with her.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I feel more comfortable talking to her in person.

Avoid repeating 'face to face'. Use 'face-to-face communication' or 'meeting face to face'. Also 'comfortable with face to face with her' is ungrammatical; use 'comfortable talking to her in person' for clarity and correct preposition use ('talking to').

× Yes, sometimes we are.

✓ Yes, sometimes we do.

Responding to 'Do you argue with friends?' the correct short affirmative is 'Yes, sometimes we do.' 'We are' is incomplete and does not match the verb 'argue'. Use the auxiliary 'do' to echo the question's verb.

× We argue about the topic sometimes because we have a different perspective as a human.

✓ We argue about topics sometimes because we have different perspectives as individuals.

'The topic' is too specific; use 'topics' in general. 'A different perspective' should be plural 'different perspectives' since different people have different views. 'As a human' is unnatural here; use 'as individuals' or omit entirely. Ensure number agreement between 'we' and 'perspectives'.