Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 内容符合题意但语言多处错误且表达不够自然。需注意时态与单词拼写（rented → turned?; re again confidence → regain my confidence），避免冗长重复，保持句子数量在5句内并用连接词衔接。建议在首句明确回答，然后用一到两句具体举例并用because或for example连接。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often share happy news or funny videos with my friends, and I also talk to them when I feel upset. For example, when I recently broke up with my boyfriend, they were the first people I turned to for support because they listened and cheered me up, which helped me regain my confidence.

Sugestão: 表达有用信息但语法与词汇错误影响清晰度（video→videos；share→sharing；advance→advice）。建议先用主题句回答，再用具体内容和原因支持，使用连接词如 because 或 so that，使结构更连贯。

Exemplo: I usually chat about everyday happy things and funny videos, because sharing these moments makes me feel closer to them. I also tell them when I'm upset so they can give me advice or comfort me, which really helps me feel better and understood.

Sugestão: 回答思路清晰但有多处语法和词汇问题（prepare chatting→prefer chatting；it about→it's about；share theirs→share ideas；personal matter→personal matters；closer→closer friend→close friend）。建议用对比句型并用 linking words（but, however）连接，保持句子简洁。

Exemplo: I prefer group chats for work-related topics because group discussions help me with presentations and allow us to share ideas. However, for personal matters I usually talk to one close friend so I can be more open and get focused advice.

Sugestão: 回答内容合理但多处语法和用词错误（closer→close；it feel→it feels more natural；express expressions→facial expressions；I really use→I usually use；I a bit shy→I'm a bit shy）。避免填充词（uh），用连贯句子表达原因。

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. With close friends I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and I can read their facial expressions and body language. But with strangers I usually use social media since I'm a bit shy and it's easier to start a conversation online.

Sugestão: 回答基本能传达意思但有严重拼写或用词错误（splinting, supplying housework→splitting or sharing household chores/housework）。建议先给总体结论，再举一两个具体例子并用because或for example连接，注意词汇准确性。

Exemplo: Most of the time we get along well because we understand each other, but sometimes we have disagreements. For example, we sometimes argue about splitting household chores when we can't agree who should do which tasks.

× For example, when I recently broke up with my boyfriend, they were the first people I rented to for support and they helped me re again confidence by listening and cheering me up.

✓ For example, when I recently broke up with my boyfriend, they were the first people I turned to for support and they helped me regain confidence by listening and cheering me up.

问题类型：过去分词/动词使用不当。句中用“rented to”不符合语义，应为“turned to”（求助于）；“re again confidence”是错误搭配和拼写，正确为“regain confidence”。建议：记住常见短语搭配（turn to sb. for help；regain confidence），并检查单词拼写与词组固定搭配。

× Well, I often chat with my friend about happy things and funny video because share these moments make me feel closer to them.

✓ Well, I often chat with my friends about happy things and funny videos because sharing these moments makes me feel closer to them.

问题类型：冠词/复数和动名词结构错误。原句中“my friend”应为复数“my friends”与前文代词“them”一致；“funny video”应为复数“funny videos”；主句缺少主语，应该用动名词短语“sharing these moments”作主语，动词需三单形式“makes”。建议：注意主谓一致与名词单复数，使用动名词作为句子的主语时，动词要与其单数形式一致。

× I also tell them why I upset so they can give me advance or comfort me which really help me feel better and understood.

✓ I also tell them why I am upset so they can give me advice or comfort me, which really helps me feel better and understood.

问题类型：代词/词语使用与时态。原句缺少be动词“am”表状态；“advance”拼写与词义错误，应为“advice”；定语从句后主句动词应为单数“helps”。建议：注意状态表达需用be动词，区分常见近形词（advice vs. advance），并保持从句或非限制性定语后的主句主谓一致。

× Well generally I prepare chatting with a group when it about work because group discussion help me with presentations and share theirs.

✓ Well, generally I prefer chatting with a group when it's about work because group discussions help me with presentations and sharing ideas.

问题类型：现在时/动词选择和主谓一致。原句“prepare chatting”不自然，意为偏好应为“prefer”；“when it about work”缺少be动词，改为“when it's about work”；“group discussion help”主谓不一致，需“group discussions help”；“share theirs”不清楚，改为“sharing ideas”。建议：使用正确动词表达偏好（prefer），确保句子有完整的主语和be动词，名词复数与谓语动词一致，并用明确的名词短语替代代词模糊用法。

× But for personal matter I usually talk to just one closer friend so I can be more open and get focused advice.

✓ But for personal matters I usually talk to just one close friend so I can be more open and get focused advice.

问题类型：代词/形容词形式与数。原句“personal matter”应为复数“personal matters”或加定冠词；“closer friend”比较级不合适，改为“close friend”。建议：注意名词单复数使用以及形容词级别的正确性（close用于描述关系亲近）。

× With my closer friends I prefer face to face communication because it feel more nature and I can read their express expressions and uh body language.

✓ With my close friends I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and I can read their facial expressions and body language.

问题类型：代词/形容词与词汇选择。原句“closer friends”比较级不必要，改为“close friends”；“it feel”主谓不一致，应为“it feels”；“more nature”词形错误，应为“more natural”；“express expressions”重复且不合适，改为“facial expressions”。建议：检查形容词形式与主谓一致，避免重复用词并使用更准确的词汇（facial expressions）。

× But with strangers I really use social media since I a bit shy and it's easier to start a communication online.

✓ But with strangers I usually use social media since I'm a bit shy and it's easier to start a conversation online.

问题类型：句子结构与缩写/词汇使用。原句“really use”语气不自然，应为“usually use”；“I a bit shy”缺少be动词和缩写，应为“I'm a bit shy”；“a communication”不自然，改为“a conversation”。建议：注意使用正确的频率副词，补全be动词或正确使用缩写，并选择常用搭配（start a conversation）。

× Well, most of the time we get along well because we understand each other. However, sometimes we have disagreements, for example about splinting, supplying housework when we can't agree who should do which tasks.

✓ Well, most of the time we get along well because we understand each other. However, sometimes we have disagreements, for example about splitting or sharing housework when we can't agree who should do which tasks.

问题类型：动词+ing形式和词汇选择。原句“splinting”拼写错误，应为“splitting”；“supplying housework”不合适，常用表达是“sharing housework”。建议：注意-ing形式的正确拼写并使用合适的动词搭配（split/share housework）。