Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (weekends, school), and add one specific example to support why you enjoy chatting. Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially at the weekend because we are free from school. For example, last Saturday we spent an hour sharing study tips and planning a group project, which helped me feel supported and less stressed.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundant words (e.g., 'discuss about' -> 'discuss'). Mention one or two specific topics and give a brief example of how social media helps. Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I usually discuss assignments and group projects with my friends. For example, we use Facebook Messenger to share documents and decide who will research each section, and sometimes we also chat about weekend plans like hiking.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, avoid hesitations and unfinished sentences. Explain one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so') and finish your thought. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because I can hear different opinions and ideas, which helps me make better decisions. For instance, when planning a trip, group chat lets us compare suggestions and agree on the best option quickly.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and avoid repetition ('each each', 'interaction'). Use one or two reasons with a brief example and linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it creates a stronger personal connection and allows you to read body language. For example, during a difficult conversation, seeing someone's facial expressions helps me understand their feelings better than text messages.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and avoid filler words. Explain clearly what you do when conversations become uncomfortable and provide a concise example of a situation that might lead to an argument. Use correct vocabulary ('topics', 'turn into fights').

Exemplo: Usually I don't argue with friends, but if a topic makes me uncomfortable I politely ask them to stop talking about it. For example, if a discussion becomes too personal or heated, I say I prefer to change the subject to avoid a fight.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially in the weekends because at the weekends we have holidays so we don't have to go schools.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially on the weekends, because on the weekends we have holidays so we don't have to go to school.

Use of articles and prepositions: 'in the weekends' should be 'on the weekends' (correct preposition for days/periods). 'go schools' is missing the preposition 'to' and should use singular 'school' when referring to attending school in general. Suggestion: use 'on the weekends' and 'go to school.'

× And by chatting we can spend, we can share our ideas, knowledge and our personal things with each other.

✓ And by chatting we can share our ideas, knowledge, and personal things with each other.

Redundant words and word order: 'spend' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence awkward. Use commas before 'and' in lists. 'our personal things' is acceptable but 'personal things' is more natural. Suggestion: remove redundant verbs and keep parallel structure in the list.

× I usually discuss about our my assignment and project with my friends because with the help of social media like Facebook and Messenger, it has become more convenient for me to discuss my assignment with my friend and we also sometimes discuss about outdoor activities or going out.

✓ I usually discuss my assignments and projects with my friends because with the help of social media like Facebook and Messenger, it has become more convenient for me to discuss assignments with my friends, and we also sometimes discuss outdoor activities or going out.

Incorrect preposition 'discuss about' should be 'discuss' (discuss takes a direct object). 'our my' is a conflicting possessive; choose one. Use plural 'assignments and projects' to match context. Ensure consistent plural 'friends'. Suggestion: remove 'about' after 'discuss', fix possessives, and keep number agreement.

× I would prefer to chat with group of people because when I chat with group of people, I can, uh, have the knowledge of everyone so that I can, uh, and it will have to improve my decision making and from the group of people I.

✓ I would prefer to chat with a group of people because when I chat with a group, I can hear everyone's ideas, which helps improve my decision making.

Missing article 'a' before 'group of people'. Repetition makes sentence unclear; 'group' can replace 'group of people'. 'have the knowledge of everyone' is unnatural — use 'hear everyone's ideas'. Remove trailing fragment 'and from the group of people I.' Suggestion: add the article, simplify and complete the clause for clarity.

× I would love to communicate face to face because face to face interaction can make a real connection with each each other and you can show your real emotion and your body language to them and they also can understand you better in face to face interaction instead rather than in social media.

✓ I would love to communicate face to face because face-to-face interaction can create a real connection with each other; you can show your real emotions and body language, and people can understand you better in face-to-face interaction than on social media.

Preposition errors: use 'on social media' not 'in social media'. Repetition 'each each other' incorrect; use 'each other'. Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective or use consistently. 'Real emotion' should be plural 'real emotions' to match 'body language'. 'Instead rather than' is redundant; use 'than' for comparison. Suggestion: fix prepositions, remove redundancies, and use correct plurality.

× Usually I don't argue with my friends, but uh, if some topic is uh, not important to me and uh, it is not good to for me, then I would uh, ask them to not to talk about them with me.

✓ Usually I don't argue with my friends, but if a topic is not important to me or is not suitable for me, I would ask them not to talk about it with me.

Modal/infinitive construction: 'ask them to not to talk' is incorrect — use 'ask them not to talk'. 'Some topic' should be 'a topic'. 'not good to for me' is ungrammatical; use 'not suitable for me'. Use 'it' to refer to 'topic' rather than 'them'. Suggestion: use correct modal negation 'ask them not to' and clear pronoun reference.

× And sometimes it uh, normal conversation casually converts into a fires.

✓ And sometimes a normal conversation casually turns into a fight.

Incorrect word choice and structure: 'it uh, normal conversation' lacks verb and article; use 'a normal conversation'. 'Converts into a fires' is ungrammatical and plural mismatch; correct idiom is 'turns into a fight' (singular). Suggestion: use 'turns into a fight' and proper article.