Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Work on pronunciation and fluency to reduce hesitations and repetitions.

Exemplo: Yes. I enjoy chatting with my friends regularly because it helps us catch up on our daily routines. For example, we talk about work or school events and share plans for the weekend, which keeps our friendship close.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement and then add specific topics using linking words (for example, because, such as). Avoid vague phrases and repetition; focus on concrete details and smooth linking.

Exemplo: I usually chat both online and face-to-face, but I prefer face-to-face conversations because body language makes communication clearer. For example, we often discuss personal news, study problems, and weekend plans.

Sugestão: Answer directly (Yes/No) then explain briefly with clear reasons and one concrete example. Avoid unclear expressions ("deep echo frustration") and reduce hesitations.

Exemplo: I prefer talking with one friend because I can have deeper, more relaxed conversations. For instance, when I discuss personal problems with one close friend, I feel understood and less stressed.

Sugestão: Give a concise conditional response: state preference for each situation using clear linking words (when, but). Use correct vocabulary and avoid slips like 'war'—say 'free time' or 'busy'.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. When I have free time, I prefer face-to-face chats because I can see expressions, but when I'm busy with work I usually message friends through social media.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer and an example of a typical disagreement and how you resolve it. Use linking words (for example, however) and correct collocations ("have an argument", "resolve the issue").

Exemplo: Sometimes I have arguments with friends about personal habits or misunderstandings. However, we usually talk calmly afterwards and resolve the issue, which makes our relationship stronger.

× Yes, I am always there chatting with with my friends about the daily routine, about the daily, daily, daily.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friends about our daily routine.

The original sentence uses redundant words and awkward 'there' and repetition. Use present continuous 'am chatting' for habitual ongoing action; remove duplicate words and use 'our daily routine' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify phrases and avoid repetition.

× I thought therefore it's very important to talk with them about everything we are talking, we are, we are happening in, in, in the week or daily.

✓ Therefore I think it is very important to talk with them about everything that happens during the week or every day.

Tense and structure are mixed and unclear. 'I thought' (past) conflicts with general idea; use present 'I think'. Remove repeated fragments and use a relative clause 'that happens' for clarity. Use 'during the week' or 'every day' for frequency.

× And therefore I am always, always talking with them face to face or on the chatting.

✓ Therefore I am always talking with them face to face or chatting online.

'On the chatting' is incorrect preposition and noun form. Use 'chatting online' or 'on chat apps'. Maintain present continuous 'am talking' for habitual activity.

× I usually chatting with my friends on the social media or face to face but I am referred to as speaking with them face to face because it is making me feel happy and ensure my show and the relaxing show.

✓ I usually chat with my friends on social media or face to face, but I prefer speaking with them face to face because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Use base verb 'chat' for habitual actions (simple present). 'I am referred to as' is incorrect; use 'I prefer'. 'Ensure my show and the relaxing show' is unclear—replace with 'feels relaxed.' Use 'makes me feel' + adjective.

× The expectation, expectation on the body language it is it's talking to them about different things.

✓ I expect to see their body language when talking to them about different things.

Original repeats 'expectation' and has pronoun confusion. Use clear subject 'I' and verb 'expect', and remove redundant phrases. Keep sentence concise.

× No, I am always there, I prefer to talk with the with one person only and because I I have always a deep echo frustration between us there and talking about different things make me feel feel happy and sometime feel relaxed when when the idea of talking with them and they took touch to skip as they always.

✓ No, I prefer to talk with just one person because I can have deeper, more honest conversations that make me feel happy and sometimes relaxed.

The original is long, repetitive and ungrammatical. Remove 'I am always there' and 'the with'. Use 'prefer to talk with just one person' and explain reason concisely. Correct verb agreement: 'conversations that make me feel'. Avoid repetition.

× It's dependent on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

Use simple present 'depends' for a general statement rather than passive-sounding 'is dependent'.

× When I have war, when I have it more time or spare time, I am always there. Prefer to speak face to face to show expression and body language when we are talking to to each other.

✓ When I have more free time, I prefer to speak face to face so we can see expressions and body language when we talk to each other.

'War' is likely mispronounced for 'more'; fix to 'more free time'. Combine fragments into one sentence. Use 'prefer' with subject and keep 'so we can' to explain purpose. Remove duplicate 'to'.

× But when I have more I have work, I am just chatting with them on the social media and talking about everything.

✓ But when I have more work, I just chat with them on social media and talk about everything.

Use simple present 'chat' for habitual actions. Correct phrase order to 'have more work'. Remove redundant 'the' before 'social media'.

× Sometimes I I am a girl with a friends about something something something special, such as a personally personally performs or anything anything in our face from them, but I am I'm always solving them for me and solving the problem with between us between us to a safe weather relationship more stronger.

✓ Sometimes I argue with friends about personal issues or specific events, but I always try to resolve the problem so our relationship becomes stronger.

Original has many repetitions and incorrect phrases. Use 'argue with friends' and 'personal issues or specific events'. Replace 'solving them for me' with 'try to resolve the problem' and 'more stronger' with 'stronger'. Improve clarity and conciseness.