Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason or example. Use correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and simpler phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because we talk about a variety of topics, from school to hobbies. For example, last weekend we spent an hour discussing our travel plans.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Use a topic sentence naming the common topics, then add a brief specific detail. Fix grammar (word order and pronouns) and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: We usually talk about how we are doing and what’s new in our lives. For instance, I often ask about their health, studies, or weekend plans.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference with a concise reason, avoid repetition, and use more natural expressions for feelings (e.g., ‘feel nervous’). Limit to two or three sentences and include a specific example if possible.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I find it easier to concentrate and express myself. For example, in groups I often feel nervous and miss parts of the conversation.

Sugestão: State your preference briefly and add a specific reason or short example. Remove repeated words and use slightly richer vocabulary like ‘express my feelings clearly’ or ‘read body language’.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my feelings and read body language. For example, it’s easier to show support in person when a friend is upset.

Sugestão: Provide a direct answer and a concise reason. Avoid unnatural phrasing (‘love very much with them’) and repetition. You can add a brief example of how you resolve disagreements to show maturity.

Exemplo: No, I usually avoid arguing because I value my friendships and respect my friends. If we disagree, we talk calmly and try to find a compromise.

× I like chatting with my friend because I share many type of talk with my friend.

✓ I like chatting with my friend because I share many types of conversations with him/her.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' when used with 'many'. Also 'talk' is better as 'conversations'. Repeating 'with my friend' is redundant; replace second instance with a pronoun (him/her) or remove it. Suggestion: use 'many types of conversations' and avoid repetition.

× I usually I usually chat about with my friend to know there they are well-being.

✓ I usually chat with my friend to ask how they are and how they are doing.

Repeated 'I usually' is redundant. 'Chat about with' is incorrect word order; use 'chat with' or 'chat about'. 'To know there they are well-being' is ungrammatical: use 'to ask how they are' or 'to check their well-being'. Use 'they' for neutral plural pronoun. Suggestion: simplify to 'I usually chat with my friend to ask how they are.'

× I mostly prefer to chat with the with only one because I don't prefer to talk with a group of people.

✓ I mostly prefer to chat with only one person because I don't prefer to talk with a group of people.

Redundant words 'the with' must be removed. Use 'only one person' rather than 'only one'. Maintain noun 'person'. Also 'prefer to chat' and 'don't prefer to talk' is repetitive but acceptable; could combine for concision.

× I cannot concentrate on my on my communication and I also feel insecure in the group of people.

✓ I cannot concentrate on my communication, and I also feel insecure in a group of people.

Redundant repetition 'on my on my' should be removed. Use 'in a group of people' or simply 'in a group'. Add a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: 'I cannot concentrate on my communication and feel insecure in a group.'

× I mostly prefer to communicate face to face because because I can easily express my feeling.

✓ I mostly prefer to communicate face to face because I can easily express my feelings.

Double 'because' is redundant. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' when speaking generally. 'Face to face' is correct as prepositional phrase. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and use plural 'feelings'.

× No, I don't argue with my friend because my friends are very important for me and I love very much with them and I also respect my friend.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because they are very important to me; I love them very much and I also respect them.

Consistency and pronoun agreement: switch between singular 'friend' and plural 'friends' is inconsistent. Use plural throughout ('my friends' and 'them'). 'Important for me' is more natural as 'important to me'. 'I love very much with them' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I love them very much'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to improve clarity.